Pyar hai....sirf tumse.. Part 8b (last part) on Page 33 - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago
Manisha 🤗
First of all -- no daant pls. I have learned my chapters and will revise them again ! Pakka 😉😳

And the teaser --- It's amazing and very emotional touch in it ! Could not resist myself from reading and writing for it. Loved how Raghav is pacifying Trisha and more loved how Trisha with full faith in him, asking him to pray to God on her behalf. So emotional and i loved that raghav is all there for her in all her needs !
Just Awesome !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Will wait for the chappy, get well soon dear 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely update dear, thankyou so..much for this , eagerly waiting for next chapter, update it soon
but don't forget to take rest and take care of yourself , love you a lot dear❤️🤗❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Love the teaser a lot...Raghav s consoling Trisha...love the conversation a lot...will wait for the next part dear... Take care nd get well soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..

It was worth waiting Manisha 👏👏 👏👏 👏👏

and U have said :


.i'm quite nervous while posting it...i've written this when i was not well...i don't know whether i could meet up your expectations...please provide me with your valuable opinions and reviews...


I want to give U a standing ovation dearie ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️⭐️ ⭐️ 👏👏 👏👏 👏

Such an awesome update and that all in your bad health. It's so loving and perfect as your pen has placed it.
Review in a short while 😃


Thanks a lot Babita for all your love and appreciation...means a lot sweetheart...love you a lot...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..

Such an awesome update Manisha and perfectly Titled : Hum tumhare hain sanam 👏👏

Thanks a lot dear...glad you liked it...

This karwa chauth becomes the blessing for Trisha as raghav confessed his love for her !
I loved the pooja, Trisha's determined mind and the way she was doing pooja. Her imaginations watching him every where and at every step was just superb !!!!!!!!! ⭐️⭐️
Thanks...i just wanted to depict her state of mind and the extent of her love for him...

I loved his way of approaching to her and his finally confessing. Then the pooja and he asked her to touch his feet. Trisha's state of mind is well picturised ! I am so impressed with your written ability and your way of expressing the character's feelings. Just outstanding !!!!!
Thanks once again...its your pure love which is giving me such a high position...
Loved the dinner time and Raghav's apne pair per kulhadi marna 😆 Loved his kid like behavior though he gave all his love to her today .
I wanted to make it somewhat light after so many emotions...

The long drive and the whole night is so beautiful that nothing can stand in between them today !
I loved her shoulder on him and he caressing her loads.
The note has said it all !
This was planned later while i was writing it...

This is the time how he will be proposing her and giving her a lovely marriage to be remembered all her life !
You'll have to wait to see how he does it...

Manisha, this is the stupendous update and i am mesmerized in the RaTri land at this time.
Love U for your efforts all in your bad health and hats off to your love for us and RaTri 👏👏

Huggies tightest ❤️🤗
Lots of love to you sweetie...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DEKER

wao manisha its so romantic, i loved it dear ❤️ wao i enjoyed each and every seen

oh i love all the pranks made by raghav specially that one" log pair par kulhari marte hai , maine to kulhari pe pair mara hai" oh good its too funny🤣 and that long romantic drive 😳so beautifully you have explained about that place.
So Trisha has given a challenge to raghav to propose her in a unique way oh god i can't control my excitement to see raghav's unique way of proposing.Eagerly waiting for next part
and Thankyou soo...much dear for such a lovely update it was fabulous ⭐️
miss you a lot in these days
with lots of love 🤗❤️





Thanks a lot Lavanya...glad you liked it...I wanted to mix emotional moments with some light and romantic moments...for his style of proposing, you'll have to wait...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

just read the update Manisha it's really very awesome. really loved it .will comment in detail in the morning sorry for the delay


No problems Tasha, take your time...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Love the update a lot...after a long time m reading a new RaTri story... Can't say how happy I am ...!! Love the romantic update... Trisha was constantly imagine Raghav during puja nd her imagination comes true... I even can feel her happiness.. While touching Raghav's feet she can't control her imotions... After all she was waiting for him for a long time... Love the way in which Raghav proposed her..his every words are just magical... So now Trisha want a proposal from Raghav in a unique style...they went for a long drive nd spent a night in each other arms...love to see a confident Raghav... Trisha knows that he'll give her a unique proposal which she herself never had imagined..
Really appreciate your creations.. Hats off to you...tnx a lot for the awsm update... Waiting to see how will Raghav propose Trisha... Take care dear nd love you a lot...


Thanks a lot Shaina, loves to you for your motivations and appreciation...means a lot...
please wait to see how he proposes to Trisha...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

why are you nervous dear pls don't be this is the best update. I really loved it .thanks a lot for such a awesome story


Thanks a lot dear, i was actually very nervous owing to my ill health...

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