Pyar hai....sirf tumse.. Part 8b (last part) on Page 33

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

why are you nervous dear pls don't be this is the best update. I really loved it .thanks a lot for such a awesome story

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hi everyone I'm overwhelmed with the response for my update... Thank you so much everyone... I was really nervous while posting as I was not well while writing this so I didn't know whether I'll be able to bring out the emotions appropriately or not...but I'm really feeling so happy to read your comments, can't express in words...love you all...I'll reply individually to each one of you later.
Thanks a lot all of you...

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Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

First of all I am sorry for late reply
As I said I had exam today and I was busy preparing for it. Didn't come to forum for last 2 days
Coming to update it was excellent and worth for waiting
Started with Trisha preparing for puja and she was upset and lonely as she was missing her mom and Raghav
I loved the part were she sees Raghav while getting ready and blushes. She was trying to be brave to over come her life's tough phase
The way Raghav came while her puja and her reaction was awesome she still thought it as an imagination the kiss made her realise he is there for real. Trisha was not ready to give in easily as she was hurt a lot. Finally he confessed his feelings for her and she poured out all her pain and reciprocated the love that part was well written
Raghav wanted to re marry Trisha and Trisha has challenged him and Raghav trapped in his own wish
Raghav stole her house's duplicate keys and finally Trisha came for a drive with them. The night was beautiful, they opened up there feelings for each other now waiting how he proposes her and makes her agree for there remarriage
Once again I am sorry for late reply.

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Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Manisha it was an excellent update can't believe u wrote it while u were unwell
Hope u r fine now

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

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Thanks everyone for your lovely response, I'll reply individually once I fully recover from my illness... I hope you all understand

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
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Thanks everyone for your lovely response, I'll reply individually once I fully recover from my illness... I hope you all understand

no worries dear pls get well soon. ..

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Desaitara1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Awesome update manisha ma'am loved it soo much. Sorry for the late reply giving my 10 grade exams this year so had unit tests so was late sorry once again

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

TEASER for PART 7

Subtitle: Dil se...hothon tak...

Trisha: tumhe pata hai Raghav, jab main chhoti thi...mumma humesha mujhse kehti thi ki achhe logon ke saath humesha achha hota hai. But mere saath to kuch bhi achha nahi hua...mere mummy papa mujhe chhod kar chale gaye, phir tumne mujhe akela chhod diya tha...that means ki main bahut buri hu...hai na...

Raghav understood that it was her grief which was there in her heart since the time she lost her parents, he decided to let her bring her grief out from her heart.

Raghav: nahi Trisha...aisa nahi hai, tum to bahut achhi ho...bura to main hu jo tumhe akela chhod kar gaya tha...aur tumhare parents, woh bhi bahut achhe the. Ab God ko bhi to achhe logon ki zaroorat hoti hai, isliye unhone tumhare parents ko apne paas bula liya.

Trisha: please tum God se kaho na ki unki zaroorat mujhe zyaada hai, main unke jaane ke baad bilkul akeli ho gayi hu...wo unhe mere paas wapas bhej de...please Raghav tum kahoge na? she had tears flowing through her eyes.

Raghav: haan main kahunga...ok...but tum akeli kahan ho? Main hu na tumhare saath...main tumhe kabhi akela nahi chhodunga, I promise...he said wiping off her tears.

Hope you all like the teaser... I'll update this part in a few days when I fully recover...i'm feeling much better now... please provide me with your valuable reviews...