Pyar hai....sirf tumse.. Part 8b (last part) on Page 33 - Page 27

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..


Well said, it's beautiful👏👏

Thank U Tasha🤗

thanks dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

thanks for the update dear .off to read it


Take your time Tasha...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Az07

It was a lovely update Manisha
I don't have words too beautiful and worthy one for a long wait
Trisha was so excited that she couldn't even sleep and Raghav knew her so well
I liked him taking her to Gurudwara, Mandir, church, Dargha everywhere to seek blessing from God for a new beginning and also he wanted to c whether any form is more beautiful than her 😳 so sweet 😃
Trisha was upset because he didn't propose it was natural too but only to get surprised 😃
Raghav kidnapped his own wife 😆 Who Bhi night dress mein 😆 Trisha will look good in any dress 😛
The bicycle ride in village, his school, temple every visit was 😳
And finally the proposal he proposed her in his house in front of his dad
Finally Raghav is able to move on after years because of Trisha's love
As he said his life changed after she came he became a kid which he couldn't enjoy in his childhood days without her he is incomplete 😳 and he put the ring in her fingers he knew he need not ask her for it because she is always his 😳 But Trisha asked for proposal that was so sweet 😳
Finally after years they both confessed there feelings for each other which they buried inside all this years
I hope I didn't miss out any part
Take rest Manisha get well soon
If possible get a blood test done
And all the best for ur exams too
If possible do write stories in between if u r free


Thanks Uma for this lovely review...no dear you didn't miss out on any part...your encouragement means a lot sweetie...thanks dear once again...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

awesome update Manisha .just read it will reply in detail in evening


Thanks Tasha take your time dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: DEKER

awesome story dear it was outstanding👏👏👏, loved it sooo...much so beautiful it is.

i can imagine each and every seen in front of my eyes and enjoyed it a lot..this story touches the depth of my heart...⭐️
so pretty to see both of them visiting to all religious places...😊
Trisha and Ragav in bicycle ohhh sooo cute...😳 and after that the confession of love by Raghav this part is my favorite...

Raghav: nahi...bhagwan ka koi bhi roop tumse zyada khoobsurat nahi hai...tum mere liye sabse zyada sundar ho...bhagwan se bhi zyada...aur tumhare bina na mera aaj hai aur na aane wala kal. Tum hansti ho to main hasta hu aur tum roti ho to main mar jata hu...jab se tum meri zindagi me aayi ho...meri duniya badal gayi...mujhe laga jaise mera bachpan laut aaya, tumhe tang karna mujhe achha lagta tha...ab jo tumhe apni life me pa liya hai to maut ko bhi apne beech me aane nahi dunga.
really the lines are soo...beautiful that i just want to read it thousands of time ,they both have tears in their eyes ...really it was an emotional seen and at last like a beautiful fairy-tale stories it came to an end a Happy Ending ...where, finally the prince confesses his love in front of his princess...😛
Thankyou so...much dear for such an awesome,beautiful,emotional and pretty romantic story
Loves you a lot sweetheart ❤️🤗❤️
Take rest and take care of yourself
and Best of Luck for your exam...👍🏼😊


Thanks Lavanya...your words mean a lot...hope you are studying well...please try to come to forum in between... Miss you sweetie...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina744

Awsm Manisha... Love this part a lot... Raghav nd Trisha both could not sleep at night because of excitement... Accidentally Trisha sent a miss call to Raghav nd when Raghav calls back her then she Denys that she s thinking about him... But Raghav being Raghav could feel her excitement... Love the way in which Raghav proposed Trisha... It's such a unique style... They visit all the temples nd took the blessings of God...poor Trisha!!! Raghav gave her a sleeping pill nd kidnapped her from her house... 😆 finally Raghav took her to his house where he had left his unforgettable past... Where he lost his father...after a long years happiness comes to RaTri... Love it a lot...
Will wait fr your next story dear... Take care of yourself...stay happy nd stay healthy... Thanku sooo much fr the awsm story... Love you a lot...


Thanks a lot Shaina, i'm glad you liked what i planned...thanks once again...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994

awesome ending manisha .thanks for writing such a wonderful story here .Ratri were not able to sleep at night bacause of excitment .loved trisha and gave him a missed call by mistake and raghav know knowing her exictment calling her again and teasing her .loved their phone conversation and trisha going off to sleep while talking to him . such cute scene it was .loved raghav surprising trisha early in the morning and making breakfast for her .Lived raghav taking her to all religious places to see that if any form of god more beautiful than her .soo cute is this .Loved raghav telling trisha that he has accepted defeat and hasnt found a unique way to propose her .loved to see trishas dissapointment at that .LOVED to see raghavs such a unique way to propose trisha he kidnapped her that too in nightdress and took her to his village which had many bad memories for him .loved him talking to his dads pic and telling him about his bahu ,such a emotional scene it was .thank you sooo much for such a awesome update manisha .really really loved it soo much .thanks for such a awesome story .

Tasha


Thanks Tasha for your beautiful words...love you dear...always you are always a big support dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..

Haye kya update hai

What a pleasing end to the most beautiful story 👏👏
Loved it to the core Manisha, thanks a tonne !!! 🤗
Trisha could not sleep and so did raghav. The only one miss call made it for them 😉
I loved the convo and Trisha declining her restlessness. Loved him reaching her home early morning and her pink dress made him fall for him all over again ❤️
Loved how Raghav took her to every Holy places and served there ⭐️⭐️ The best way to show your respect and regards to God !!!
Liked Trsiha feeling sad and asking for his proposal and Raghav ultimately gave in to say he accepts that he failed to. But the hug from Trsiha was so beautiful that i landed myself in the RaTri land !😳
And the way he took her to his village after drowsing her for the good purpose, it's so elegant to see how much Raghav loves her ❤️
Loved him talking to his father and introducing her as his Bahu !😃
Loved the whole chapter and the story, but it ended i want more stories Manisha, plss 😳😃
Loved his confession that she is more beautiful than even God ! Loved him putting the engagement ring and saying you are mine And more loved how Trisha fell in tears and said what moved each and every reader of yours Manisha 👏👏 It was too lovely dear !!!!
Today they are finally unite and the love that they had for each other, did that !
Awesome, stupendous and lovely !!!!
Manisha, thanks and loves and hugs tightest ❤️🤗


Thanks Babita sweetie...love your each and every word...i'm so impressed how well you understand each and every emotion of the story...you are awesome sweetheart...Thanks and lots of love to my Babita...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Desaitara1234

Awesome story manisha di..Thanks for this wonderful story. Loved it soo much


Thanks Tara...love you dear...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Tisa1

Awesome story 👏


Thanks a lot dear😊 welcome to the forum😊

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