Originally posted by: Az07
As a writer I can completely understand ur tension sometimes we get tensed how others will accept the story line
Let me tell this was the best part of this story
I was thinking what if Trisha becomes pregnant and much to my surprise that happened
I loved her dream Raghav asking her to take care of herself no matter what is the situation in her life which actually motivated her
She was trying hard to be herself but her life for years was revolving round Raghav which makes her hard to think he is not there
Her family and team was revealed to c her coming back to normal
So Trisha is pregnant her mothers reaction was so natural every mom react like that she trusted Trisha a lot for Trisha it's like a new life a new ray of hope her dream come true.
They were engaged and it was not planned by them but just happened it like that. That part was so naturally presented. Such a great flow was there
Now her family asking her for abortion won't blame them any family will think like that. But on a personal note I prefer rather than killing a life and dumping ur daughter into someone else it's better to accept truth and stay with that. It's not easy but still it's my view
I hope her family supports her in her decision
Poor Trisha I felt bad for her such a genuine soul who loved someone truly she deserves entire happiness of the world
Hope her misery ends soon
As a writer I can completely understand ur tension sometimes we get tensed how others will accept the story line
I can't tell you how nervous I was while writing this. This part was something I didn't know whether this would go down with all of you. Really difficult for me, I've never done anything like this before in my life.
Let me tell this was the best part of this story
I was thinking what if Trisha becomes pregnant and much to my surprise that happened
THANK YOU SOOO MUCH for this compliment. I'm glad you and me thought on the same lines.
I would like to tell you something. I initially planned the title of this story as "TUM BIN" but when you posted your story teaser, I had to change the title. I can't tell you how difficult was it to think of an alternative title for me.
I loved her dream Raghav asking her to take care of herself no matter what is the situation in her life which actually motivated her
She was trying hard to be herself but her life for years was revolving round Raghav which makes her hard to think he is not there
Her family and team was revealed to c her coming back to normal
This just shows what he means to her. She knew he would never want to see her so shattered, she was thinking about him and only him. So he telling her to take care of her in her dreams. This was added later while I was writing it. Glad you liked it. Her family and her team were relieved to see her back to normal as all of them care for her and were worried to see her like this.
So Trisha is pregnant her mothers reaction was so natural every mom react like that she trusted Trisha a lot for Trisha it's like a new life a new ray of hope her dream come true.
They were engaged and it was not planned by them but just happened it like that. That part was so naturally presented. Such a great flow was there
This part was very difficult for me to write. I didn't want this to look indecent, instead I wanted to present it in a beautiful romantic manner. I'm glad I could do that and you liked it. Her mother's reaction is very natura in this situation, she won't accept it even if she understands her daughter's perspective, no mother would do that easily.
Now her family asking her for abortion won't blame them any family will think like that. But on a personal note I prefer rather than killing a life and dumping ur daughter into someone else it's better to accept truth and stay with that. It's not easy but still it's my view
I hope her family supports her in her decision
Poor Trisha I felt bad for her such a genuine soul who loved someone truly she deserves entire happiness of the world
Hope her misery ends soon
Her family asking her to get an abortion is expected from them. I agree that your POV is right to certain extent, but if we consider our society perspectives, you know thats not easy. Even I agree to your POV, but this would be cleared in the next part, what happens further. Please keep supporting me like this, Trisha obviously deserves all the happiness in this world, she is an ideal woman for me and you'll have to wait for sometime to see, how and what happens next. Soon everything would be clear. You are in for a surprise...
Shiv Shakti
Cricket
