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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey everyone. So here I am with a new story which is yet another imagination of mine. As opted by majority in the opinion poll, I am going to update this story first. Just a teaser for now

The entire atmosphere which was full of happiness some
time back was thrown into darkness and sorrow. Trisha just could not believe
herself, her voice had become heavy, her legs became weak, she felt as if she
would choke any moment. Her vision blurred in front of her eyes and she fainted
and was about to fell down. Rajbir held her and lifted her up and made her lie
on the bed. Her mom and Swati rushed to her and Trisha's father called the
doctor immediately.</font>

I'll try to start writing this by tmmrw.

PART 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133508683

PART 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133586535

PART 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133663984

PART 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133739847

PART 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/133797900

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

awesome teaser dear .really curious to know what happened to Trisha. hope she's fine .love the teaser soo much

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Babita

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Posted: 9 years ago

Interesting teaser Manisha 👏👏👏

Will wait for the story to know more what has happened to Trisha all of a sudden ??

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
awesome teaser dear .really curious to know what happened to Trisha. hope she's fine .love the teaser soo much

Thanks for liking it. I'll post the first part tmrrw after I finish my previous story tonight.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: babita..
Interesting teaser Manisha👏👏👏
Will wait for the story to know more what has happened to Trisha all of a sudden ??

Thanks for liking it. I'm sure there has to be something very shocking which can do this to a strong girl like Trisha. Please wait till tmrrw. Till then I'll update my previous story tonight.

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

very interesting teaser. So Something happen so bad that Trisha such a strong lady fainted at the moment. Eagerly waiting for the update

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Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

Some thing bad had happened poor Trisha

Loved the teaser though

Please update tala ash first

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 1973deepak
very interesting teaser. So Something happen so bad that Trisha such a strong lady fainted at the moment. Eagerly waiting for the update

Thanks for liking it. In my mind, always I've imagined Trisha as a girl who is very mature, practical, brave and all in all a complete person. If there comes a situation, where she becomes weak, then what could be that? Thats how this idea cropped up in my mind. I'll be updating the first part tmrrw, please wait till then.