Ratri os : Pyaar hai FINAL part updated

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Aww such a cute update truely RaTrilious. Really lived each and every RaTri scene. trisha introduces raghav as her BF. loved their romance a lot .and rajbir catches them. I could really imagine that scene thanks for this wonderful update

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Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Now what's going to happen to Trisha? First rishab then Arun both saw Ratri together as a couple also rajbir too witnessed a small jhalak ab Kya hoga in Donoka Trisha ki mom Chodega in Dono ko?

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Az07
Such a great update
Raghav and Trisha at ccd
Boy coming to meet Trisha and Raghav introduced as her bf and they sitting together holding there hands only to get caught by rajbir but what did rajbir said at last I couldn't understand

Thanks and Rajbir said - "Raghav hum log tum dono ke sath chalte hai because Rajbir noticed whenever they both are alone some or the other disaster happen between them means Raghav and Trisha gone to ccd for case discussion but when Rajbir entered the cafe both were sitting together like couples and doing romance so he said that they will come with them just like kabab me haddi😉

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Az07
Now what's going to happen to Trisha? First rishab then Arun both saw Ratri together as a couple also rajbir too witnessed a small jhalak ab Kya hoga in Donoka Trisha ki mom Chodega in Dono ko?

yes, Her parents will suspect on Trisha and Raghav relationship and both will accept their feelings but keep it hidden from the whole world but as we know for their confession some twist is required so it is in next part.

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
Aww such a cute update truely RaTrilious. Really lived each and every RaTri scene. trisha introduces raghav as her BF. loved their romance a lot .and rajbir catches them. I could really imagine that scene thanks for this wonderful update

Thanks, Rajbir will get confirmed that their is something between Raghav and Trisha but keep it a secret and will keep giving hints to other team members about theme

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Shaina744

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Wao... Very interesting story it is... RaTri sceans are amazing... Trisha introduced Raghav as her bf... Soo cute... eagerly waiting for the next part... Update soon nd tnx fr the beautiful story 🤗

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Shaina744
Wao... Very interesting story it is... RaTri sceans are amazing... Trisha introduced Raghav as her bf... Soo cute... eagerly waiting for the next part... Update soon nd tnx fr the beautiful story 🤗

Thanks for this motivating comments

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Lovely update.

Nice story with suspense. But the best part was the ratri scene. Both of them in ccd and Trisha talking to her mom about the IIT guy.

Raghav telling her to give the same excuse to that guy about her boyfriend.

How bluntly she refused the proposal in front of that boy by presenting Raghav as her bf, OMG lovely. How dare someone come to meet her for this during her office hours and that too when she is with Raghav. Ye to hona hi tha.

Lastly Rajbir telling them that he would come along. He feels that there is definitely something between these two.

Loved the entire update. Thanks for this.

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc
Lovely update.
Nice story with suspense. But the best part was the ratri scene. Both of them in ccd and Trisha talking to her mom about the IIT guy.
Raghav telling her to give the same excuse to that guy about her boyfriend.

How bluntly she refused the proposal in front of that boy by presenting Raghav as her bf, OMG lovely. How dare someone come to meet her for this during her office hours and that too when she is with Raghav. Ye to hona hi tha.

Lastly Rajbir telling them that he would come along. He feels that there is definitely something between these two.

Loved the entire update. Thanks for this.

Thanks and sorry for late reply well from starting Rajbir doubt on them that their is something between them. Will try to update in this week

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Part 3

In the car

Trisha - "Raghav hum log kaha ja rahe hai"

Raghav - "Ajay singh ke ghar humara khooni bhi vahi milega"

Trisha - "par kon hai humara khooni"

Raghav - "Boss vo to suspense hai story me twist hai"

Trisha looked at him and smiled

At Ajays house

Raghav - "khooni apme se hi koyi hai"

Reena - "hum me se kon hai aur koi mere pati ko kyo marega"

Raghav - "yeh to aap hi bata sakti hai kyoki apne hi apne pati ka khoon kiya hai"

Reena's face turned pale and she tried to run away but caught by Trisha and Trisha slapped her tightly.

Trisha - "ab tum batogi ki tumne Ajay ka khoon kyo kiya ya me madad karoo"

Raghav - "cool Trisha itna darane ke baad vo na bolane ki himmat nahi karegi.

Interrogation room

Reena -" Ha! maine mara hai apne pati ko uske na jaane kitne affairs the me to uske liye khilona ban chooki thi so maine usko mar dala aur mujhe is baat ka koi pachtava nahi hai He deserves that!!!

Raghav-"Tum kanoon ki madad le sakti thi par tumne kanoon thoda hai Bikram le jao ise"

Raghav after coming out of the interrogation room.

Trisha - "Finally case solved"

Raghav - "I think no abhi tak apki problem solve nahi hui"

Trisha - "matlab kon si problem"

Raghav - "pahle boss apna phone uthao apko pata chal jayega"

Trisha looked at her phone and saw 3 missed calls of her mom. She called her back.

Trisha - "Mom apko pata hai yeh mere office hours hai so why you're calling me again and again."

Trisha's mom - "Ha par tumse baat karna zaroori ho gaya hai. Aur yeh Boyfriend kon hai Arjun ne sab kuch bata diya hai Tum phoran ghar a jao... aur ha us boyfriend ko bhi le kar ana"

Trisha - "Maa! par..."

Trisha's mom ended the call. Raghav raised his eyebrows in order to ask what.

Trisha - "Maa ka phone tha Arjun ne unhe sab bata diya aur... unhone hum dono ko bulaya hai"

Raghav - "Mujhe kyo apki maa ne mujhe kyo yaad kiya"

Trisha-"Maa ne mujhe mere boyfriend ke sath ane bola hai"

Trisha tap on his sholder and suddenly listen some shocking noise and turn back and saw Rajbir standing still.

Rajbir - "kya bola tumne Trisha"

Raghav - "Rajbir Kya bola trisha ne kuch nahi case wind up ho gaya aur kya... haina trisha chalo we should leave"

Trisha - "Yes, off course"

While Trisha was driving she was only thinking of what to say to her mom.

Raghav - "Trisha tum apni mom ko keh kyo nahi deti that tumhe shadi nahi karni"

Trisha - " aisa nahi hai Raghav I want to marry a person whom i know and who understand me and who admire and respect my duty."

Raghav smiled and said-" bilkul meri tarah hai na"

Trisha smiled and continue driving but her mind don't stop thinking about Raghav and finally she turn to a lonely road with no one on it.

Raghav - "Trisha kaha le ja rahi ho mujhe tumhara ghar to left me hai"

Trisha - "I know that but I don't want to go back to my home.. ghadi se utaro yeh meri sabse favorite jagah hai"

Raghav saw a beautiful scene of the whole delhi.

Raghav - "is jagah se Delhi kitna sundar lagata hai"

Trisha - "yaha me bachpan me akar mujhe jo chahiye hota tha use jor se chila kar bolti thi"

Raghav - "To aaj kya mangane ayi ho"

Trisha came forward and shouted loudly -"Raghav!!!

Raghav was seeing her not like a boss or a strict Trisha but only a girl in love.

Trisha was returning back and suddenly her leg slipped and she was about to fall from that valley but felt a jerk and clossed her eyes when she open her eyes she found herself in Raghav's arm and she quickly try to stand up on her feet but lost her balance and fall down but Raghav hold her on time.

Trisha - "leave me I can walk myself"

Raghav put finger on her lips - "shush tumhari problem kya hai mujhse door bhagati rahti ho jab me door jata hoon to tumhari nazare mujhe dhoonti hai"

Trisha was silent now she has no answer and cross questions to ask. As what all he was saying was true.

Raghav - "dekho me nahi jaanta tumhare man me kya hai par me tumse aur nahi chupa sakta that I love you..."

Trisha - "kya!

Raghav-" dekho I am sorry if I hurt you but me apne man me yeh baat aur nahi rakh sakta.

Trisha saw him so disappointed and hug him tightly. Raghav was shocked but his heart is full of joy and happiness

Trisha - "I love you and no need to say sorry because jo baat me nahi keh payi vo tumne keh di dil me choopakar rakhi thi par laga aaj maine tumse nahi kaha to kabhi nahi keh paoogi that.. that I LOVE YOU!!

Raghav heard her and kiss her forehead.

Finally complete. All sort of comments and reviews are welcomed. Any doubts free to ask me.