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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: 1973deepak


Thanks and Rishab was also shocked. In the next update trisha will use this choot to get rid of that boy who came to see. 😳



😳 eagerly waiting
I think seeing Trisha & Raghav going alone to the outskirts of city made Rishab to follow them
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww such a cute update. loved RaTri parking scene .really very cute .Trisha telling Rishab boyfriend ke Saath date ja rahi hi...ab Kya hoga. raghav must have been shocked thanks for such a wonderful update. waiting for the next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update. šŸ‘
First starting with the case. Seems to be very interesting. Raghav as usual brilliant in deductions.

Parking scene fabšŸ‘šŸ¼ Trisha just gets shocked at Raghav's unexpected flirtacious comments but inside she enjoys them.

Lastly her cousin brother. Such a stupid to follow 2 cbi officers and wat for? To tell Trisha about some guy who has come to see her. Must have got the shock of his life after hearing about her boyfriend.šŸ˜’šŸ˜• But Trisha can say this only about Raghav and no one else as she also knows that may be outside she is not able to confess her love for him but actually she loves him madly.

Awesome start. Would eagerly wait for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

aww such a cute update. loved RaTri parking scene .really very cute .Trisha telling Rishab boyfriend ke Saath date ja rahi hi...ab Kya hoga. raghav must have been shocked thanks for such a wonderful update. waiting for the next

Thanks, the next part is full of ratrilicious scenes

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

Lovely update. šŸ‘

First starting with the case. Seems to be very interesting. Raghav as usual brilliant in deductions.

Parking scene fabšŸ‘šŸ¼ Trisha just gets shocked at Raghav's unexpected flirtacious comments but inside she enjoys them.

Lastly her cousin brother. Such a stupid to follow 2 cbi officers and wat for? To tell Trisha about some guy who has come to see her. Must have got the shock of his life after hearing about her boyfriend.šŸ˜’šŸ˜• But Trisha can say this only about Raghav and no one else as she also knows that may be outside she is not able to confess her love for him but actually she loves him madly.

Awesome start. Would eagerly wait for next update.

Thanks for the complement and it's absolutely true that Trisha is mad in his love but being a reserved person she could not confess her feelings and it is only Raghav otherwise she could say I am going for a case or with a friend but she said him as BF 😳. Will try to update the next part by this weekend.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07



😳 eagerly waiting
I think seeing Trisha & Raghav going alone to the outskirts of city made Rishab to follow them

Sorry for late reply. yes you are right when he saw Raghav and Trisha specially Raghav flirting with her he may thought that her di is going to somewhere for date with Raghav so he follow them.
Well when you will post your story very for story on Ratri
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: 1973deepak


Sorry for late reply. yes you are right when he saw Raghav and Trisha specially Raghav flirting with her he may thought that her di is going to somewhere for date with Raghav so he follow them.
Well when you will post your story very for story on Ratri



I have started writing most probably tonight I will be able to post
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07



I have started writing most probably tonight I will be able to post

wow will wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

CBI Headquarters

Trisha was reading the case file and as Raghav entered the cabin she distracted her eyes only to find him with a cup of coffee but this time Raghav came empty hand.
Trisha - "Raghav Ajay ek bohot bada bussiness man tha ho sakta uske kisi rival ne use marvaya ho."
Raghav - "mujhe nahi lagata koyoki Ajay apne rivals ko jaanta tha aur itni raat ko darwaza nahi kholta so jo bhi tha uske pass ghar ki spare keys thi"
Trisha - "Right, you have a point"
Meanwhile Rajbir entered the room
Rajbir-"Trisha guard se pata chala ki koi ladki raat ko vaha Ajay se milne gayi thi par vo minakshi thi yeh vo sure nahi hai. "
Trisha -" Aur kon ho sakta hai vohi hogi"
Bikram - "Minakshi ghar se bhagne ki koshish kar rahi thi but humne use pakad liya hai.
Trisha -" use CBI bureau le kar ao"

Interrogation room

Trisha - "Jhoot bolne ka koi fayada nahi chup chap batao ki tumne Ajay ko kyo mara"
Minakshi - "me sach keh rahi hoo maine nahi mara usko me to us raat farmhouse par gayi hi nahi thi."
Trisha - "Vaha ke watchman ne tumhe vaha jaate hua dekh hai aur yeh glass pe tumhare hi fingerprint mile hai aur yeh lipstick ka nishan bhi tumhara hai"
Minakshi-"nahi mam maine nahi mara aur yeh glass me maine drink pi thi par Ajay ke farmhouse me nahi... Neha ki party me.
Trisha came out of room and said to Raghav - "pata nahi ab yeh neha kon hai"
Raghav called Rajbir - "Rajbir tum Neha ke ghar jake dekho aur use CBI lekar ao"
Rajbir entered Neha's house and found her dead body hanging from the ceiling in the bedroom and a suicide note.
CBI Headquarters
Trisha-"Neha ne apna crime kabool kiya hai is letter me"
Raghav - "yeh suicide nahi murder hai yeh letter Neha ne nahi likha"
Trisha - "kaise pata"
Raghav - "Dhayan se dekho yeh photos Neha ki dairy entries ki hai jo Rajbir ko uske ghar se mile isne Neha har word ka first letter ko dark kar deti hai par is note me usne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya, doosra uski English bohot achi thi par is letter me tense ki bohot galati hai. "
Trisha -" agar Nega ka murder hua hai to kisne kiya hai"
Raghav - "My mind has just stopped working so I need some refreshment."
Trisha - "batao kaha chalna hai"
Rajbir and Bikram was looking confused.
Rajbir - "kaha ja rahe ho tum dono"
Raghav and Trisha said with a happy face - "Cafe coffee day"

In cafe

Trisha and Raghav have ordered black coffee and Trisha was busy in her phone and suddenly got her face full of anger.
Raghav - "Tum itni gusse me aur bhi sundar dikhti ho"
Trisha -" Stop it Raghav!
Raghav-" No seriously batao kya hua "
Trisha -" Ek to yeh case upar se mom bhi na jane kab mere liye ladka dekhna chodengi"
Raghav - "Acha to Boss ke liye rishta aya hai, boss ek idea hai aap shadi kar lijiye ya phir koi Boyfriend doond lijiye"
Trisha - "Raghav!! tum kya bol rahe ho...
Trisha was about to continue suddenly her phone ranged it was her mom's call, First she ignored it again her mom was calling her.
Raghav -" utha lo na mom ka call hai unhe phikar ho rahi hogi akhir tumhara bhai kya kya bol kar aya hai...God knows
Trisha - "ok... yes mom"
Mom-"kaha ho aur tum Rishab ke sath kyo nahi ayi tumhe ladke wale dekhne ane wale the so ladka acha hai IIT topper hai so I don't want to listen anything me us ladke ko bhej rahi hu and you have to meet him Trisha For me. "
Trisha -" Mom try to understand mom.. mom... "
Trisha -"call kat diya Vo ladka mujhse milne a raha hai"
Raghav was smiling - "to ane do use bhi milva dena apne boyfriend se"
Trisha - "kya keh rahe raghav"
Raghav smiled and lean on the table to come close to her. She smiled and understood what he wanted to say.

12:30pm at cafe

ladka-"Hi! my name is Arjun aur sab office me kaisa chal raha "
Trisha -" Sab thik hai so tum mujhse shadi karne chahate ho great but I want you to meet someone before this decision
Raghav came and sit on the chair besides trisha
Raghav-"hi so tum ho vo ladke"
Trisha - "meet Mr. Raghav Sinha (Arjun shake hand with raghav) My boyfriend"
after listening this Arjun was still and shocked
Arjun - "tumhara boyfriend par aunty ne to.."
Trisha - "yes he is my boyfriend so tumse me shadi kaose kar sakti hu"
Raghav slowly hold Trisha's hand placed on the table and Trisha was looking at Raghav as he is really her boyfriend
Raghav - "ab bhi kuch sunana baki hai so now you can leave
Arjun with a said face was leaving the cafe, meanwhile Rajbir and Bikram entered the cafe and feel amazed to see that guy crying out the cafe.
Rajbir saw Trisha and Raghav sitting together their legs entangled and Raghav holding Trisha's hand.
Rajbir was stunned and start clearing his throat. Trisha and Raghav came back to their senses and was feeling so embarrassed infront of colleagues
Trisha - "kuch pata chala neha ke call recprds or neighbors se"
Rajbir-"nahi kuch khas nahi par sabka kehna hai ki yeh murder hai suicide nahi as Neha is very happy and she can't commit suicide. ues but unhone kai dino se ek ladki ko lagatar ghar ate dekha hai shayad vohi humari killer ho.
Trisha - "ho sakta hai Bikram uske cell phone par last call kisika tha.
Bikram -" it's interesting but last number is of Ajay's wife Reena.
Raghav-"Trisha lets go mijhe pata hai killer kon hai"
Rajbir stopped his way and say - "Raghav chalo hum log bhi chalte hai tum dono ke sath"
Raghav and Trisha understood Rajbir was talking about what was happening before and smiled at the thought.

So who is the killer?
stay tuned to know
Hope enjoyed the update please review and like it. 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a great update
Raghav and Trisha at ccd
Boy coming to meet Trisha and Raghav introduced as her bf and they sitting together holding there hands only to get caught by rajbir & teased byhim
Edited by Az07 - 9 years ago

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