Ratri os : Pyaar hai FINAL part updated

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

thanks for the update dear off to read it

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Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Lovely update
The best part was that wish scene and the trip and fall

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Az07
Lovely update
The best part was that wish scene and the trip and fall

Thanks Uma. Hope you will post your story soon.

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Az07

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks Uma. Hope you will post your story soon.

I have written the second part but problem is my house wifi is having so issues and I can't post it as I typed it in laptop only tomorrow I can post it I feel bad I wrote it in between my break during work hours so that I can post today but now I can't

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Az07

I have written the second part but problem is my house wifi is having so issues and I can't post it as I typed it in laptop only tomorrow I can post it I feel bad I wrote it in between my break during work hours so that I can post today but now I can't

No, problem dear will wait for tomorrow only to read your story.

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

nice update. best part was definitely the trip and fall. Finally both of them confessing their love in the end. Rajbir ka doubtful hona to banta hai.

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Ani09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: braveheartdoc

nice update. best part was definitely the trip and fall. Finally both of them confessing their love in the end. Rajbir ka doubtful hona to banta hai.

Thanks for review. If you don't mind What is your name?

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Thanks for review. If you don't mind What is your name?

Manisha

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Shaina744

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Soo sweet nd romantic part... The confession scean was awsmmm... Finally they confess their feelings for each other...tnk you soo much fr the awsm update...