Mehrya FF: Her Undercover Lover -Chapter 10 page42 08/15 - Page 30

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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update Kelly. Frankly speaking I forgot abt this Ff till your pm came. So I decided to read frm beginning to calm down my cluttered mind. Well written dear. Wish we had something like this in our show. Love the way Shaurya care fr her and the baby. Beautiful. Thank you
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: AD04

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Thanks for the wonder update Kelly 😛
I was so glad to c Ur update ... And top of that it's an update for this story .. I totally loved it . 👏
Ur update comes like shining ray of happiness to me . Thanks for updating this story . 😃
It was such an Beautifully wriiten chapter where everything was going in so good and nice flow .
Mehek finally comes out of her semi-consciousness and she denied with all the confession made by SK . Why she is in denial mode ... Though her heart beats for him ... She must take an signal that whatever shaurya is saying ... Is true ... And she even can't bear that SK is not around her and she feels restless ... Finally SK showed her some pictures of their marriage to calm her down and to make her believe . Hope she will trust shaurya now ... But she is emotionally drained and needs SK beside her badly .. hope she come out of that quickly and accepts their relationship. 😳
One more thing ... I love the way u write Jaan from SK side to Mehek . Totally romantic 😳
Please continue soon their Beautiful journey . 😛
Thanks for the PM😊

Thank you Aarti. I confess I struggled with this update a bit to the point that i left the proposal midway and slept on it...but I am happy with how it turned out. The timing of everything had to take a toll on her but as she becomes more accepting things are sure to get better for her. Thx for commenting😊
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Chandana2010

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Beautiful update Kelly
She finally came out her semi unconscious but she is not ready to accept the truth he confess his love to her and showed their marriage pics but she denyed and she can't bare when he is not around her she needs him badly his love made everything well
How nicely he called her Jaan I loved that word jaan 😛
Thanks for the pm
Pls cont dthm

Thank you Anu.The truth is out now which is a good thing, and now they stand the chance on moving on in life as a family. I must say, having reread the update I am happy with the way this turned out. 😛
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Good morning Kelly 😊

I enjoyed reading the update ⭐️

Thank you Sharlene😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Houstonmom

Loved reading this chapter 😊
SK is finally vocally expressing his love for Mehek and trying to get her to do the same . Mehek admits to her strong feelings and connection with him ,but trying to convince her of their marriage just brought out confusion and anger for keeping her in the dark about their relationship at the time that she needed it most and she ended up pushing him away instead. With post partum depression showing its mercilessness SK really needs to prove his love and bring everything out in the open no more hiding which brought out his sense of impatience as well now. We finally get to know more about what happened and where they currently are. So they are currently living in the resort SK bought for their honeymoon six months ago. They went on a river ride that went horribly wrong ending in an accident that made Mehek go missing for 3 months only to be found with no recognition of their relationship as she has memory loss. So technically she was pregnant before she went missing without knowledge?
The fact that they are away from all family finally makes sense that no one is visiting and staying away willingly. Now jumping to conclusions here but Archie's weird behavior is starting to make sense now the over accommodating dr has something to do with this whole mess .
Absolutely love the romantic wedding renewal proposal at the end hope Mehek accepts as she is still in turmoil refusing to believe that they were married even though she is sure of her current feelings towards SK . Slowly but steadily the mystery is unfolding can't wait to see what happens next


Maya is it really you😲😆. Oh my this is exciting😆. Very glad to see that you are back to reading,and of course you have summed up everything perfectly. Thrilled that you love the proposal, I really wanted it to be special. Now if only you could make your way to the story I updated with you in mind ...sigh😆...just kidding. awesome to have you back and I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update Kelly.
It's all out in the open.
New memories for mehek with the proposal.

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
So SK once again proposed MS for marriage . As MS doesn't remember anything they surely need a fresh start. As time passes old memories will surface out.
Nice update kelly.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update
So he told her the ruth about them being married
But she i not willing to accept as she is upset that he had not told her the truth earlier.
He explained he did it to protect her and unborn child
He wants to get married to her again 😛
Pls update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago

Chapter#9 - TEASER


"Will you do me the honor of marrying me again?

"Yes.

As easy as it was for her to respond, so was it for Shaurya to anticipate the worst. He continued speaking as if she hadn't answered him. "I know you may feel this is out of the blue and that you may need some time to come to grips with everything I've disclosed... He suddenly paused when she settled her left hand on his. If not her answer, then perhaps this action would alert him to her desire. She watched him blink as he finally understood that his words had been unnecessary, but he still looked up at her to make sure, "Wait did you just...

With tears pooling in her eyes, Mehek nodded. "Yes, Shaurya... it's true that I don't...

His lips silenced her, not at all in a forceful manner, but rather in a way that unless she had experienced his kiss, she would not have comprehended how hauntingly familiar the intimacy was. Whereas she had managed to hold herself together before, the tenderness of his touch that inexplicably reached inside her to extract a long-lost remembrance of their connection, had her noisily dissolving into tears. Taken aback, Shaurya moved away from her. Certain that he had stopped himself from grabbing her to him, in consideration of her still fragile state, he still feared that his emotions had gotten the better on him leading him to second-guess if had hurt her in the process.

"Mehek

"I don't understand it all, but of the few things I am certain of it's how much I love you, Shaurya and...how so very right that felt.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yep ...I'm first
Am late...apologies for that..
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The teaser sounds interesting dear...
All of a sudden she accepted his proposal?...without showing any signs of recollecting her past...
Well Shaurya's reaction is obvious...
Hope he"ll not get disappointed this time...
Very well written dear...
Well...really excited...a bit curious too...for the next chapter..
Plz update soon...
Thanks for the PM
Edited by dwriter - 7 years ago

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