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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: shristi0706
Res ll give my feedback today.. Pinky promise!
Unres
Meera/Mehak is married to Shaurya n she still hs no clue of her past with him.
The part in the past where she discovers tht she is pregnant with someone's child not knowing whether it was out of an act of love or violence was brilliantly explained n written. I could very well imagine the scene between Shaurya n Mehak... Kudos for tht👏
Shaurya has included Hina in his plan to woo Mehak. Isn't she your favorite character Kelly?? She is mine for sure coz I adored her in DTM. She is perfect as Shaurya Khanna's PA.
The story hs just started n I know it would get more interesting once you start revealing the plot of the past one year.
Thank you so much dear!!!!

Hi Shristi, thanks for coming back and unres as promised; I am pretty sure I may have one or two reserves that I have yet to get back to myself...and don't even start how much I have fallen behind in my reading😕

At any rate, I am glad you enjoyed the chapter, and particularly the pregnancy disclosure. I struggled with that, so I am thrilled that you found it authentic😳

And yes, Hina has become a favorite as well; as often as I can incorporate her I know I will. Great to know that you like the characterization as well!

I will definitely delving into Mehek's missing time and the months that have gone by up until this dramatic love revelation/ birth scene😆

I hope you continue to read and enjoy...

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thabassum

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Posted: 7 years ago

#122

Hmm so technically Shaurya ruined sareena's holiday with her husband ? ...😆

But he was helpless here...mehak's condition was worse 😕...

The doctor was really concentrating on mehak very carefully and was passing the perfect advice to shaurya ..how she shud be taken care of ?

Hmm as a loving husband...he did his best , made sure he accompanies her as a friend and well wisher instead of being husband...and got a good news , that he is gonna be a father ..but at an abnormal situation where he can't even reveal to her that its thier symbol of love in her womb...unlike wat she thinks...

PS..I really enjoyed reading him as chef and jkeeping an eye on his preffy wife ...and how he made hina , there boss 😆...

So they moved in the SAME place as neighbours...

So while The past and present being written as update...I cud see one thing pleasent is ...during her labours ...shaurya was reffering her as jaan and was more comforting...did he told her the truth...?

Great job with updates dear buddy !

😆

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Thabassum..

Hmm so technically Shaurya ruined sareena's holiday with her husband ? ...😆
But he was helpless here...mehak's condition was worse 😕...
The doctor was really concentrating on mehak very carefully and was passing the perfect advice to shaurya ..how she shud be taken care of ?
Hmm as a loving husband...he did his best , made sure he accompanies her as a friend and well wisher instead of being husband...and got a good news , that he is gonna be a father ..but at an abnormal situation where he can't even reveal to her that its thier symbol of love in her womb...unlike wat she thinks...

PS..I really enjoyed reading him as chef and jkeeping an eye on his preffy wife ...and how he made hina , there boss 😆...
So they moved in the SAME place as neighbours...
So while The past and present being written as update...I cud see one thing pleasent is ...during her labours ...shaurya was reffering her as jaan and was more comforting...did he told her the truth...?

Great job with updates dear buddy !

😆

Yes we can consider the doctor's vacay completely ruined but with her giving nature I doubt she could not but help in the situation. I am certain SK will make it up to her and her hubby at some point in the future😊.

Circumstances as they stand have forced Shaurya to undertake the role of friend and as you will see more of as coworker complete with a move to the staff quarters at the resort. You can guarantee that this will make for some interesting times as everyone who knows his identity deals with this new reality of his😉 but the man is doing what he must.

Coming to the present...he has not informed her of their past, it is just his nature to revert to the role of lover/husband as his beloved gives birth...the real question is what after all is said and done will Meera/Mehek think of this about face.

Thanks for the comment. I am glad you are enjoying the story Thabs😊

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Shamz15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#124

Beautiful Chapter Kelly...

I love the way he is taking care of her...and love MS also even though she had lost her memory but she has the same affection towards SK...

But really want to know how the things changed between them...for her he was still the employee of that resort...

Thank you for the PM and waiting for next chapter😛

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Diva200

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Posted: 7 years ago

#125

Thank you for the pm.

Awesome update

So Sk finds out that his Ms is pregnant but cannot tell her about them as she has lost her memory and thinks she is Meera Sharma.She is apprehensive of her pregnancy as she has no recollection of her past.

So Sk takes the job of chef ( undercover lover) to keep an eye on her and he allocates the disused part of resort as staff quarters to MS and he stays in next to be close to her. Ms cares for Sk even though she does not know he is her husband and tries to help him with his job thinking he will get sack, as she thinks Hina is their boss lol..

But now she is in labor and he has started calling her Jaan and she accepts as she is in love with him and wants him there for support. She is surprised that she is in nice suite but sk said he will explain everything after the delivery. The love and care Sk shows for his Ms is lovely.

Pls update soon

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vimikrao

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Posted: 7 years ago

#126

Mehak gets nightmares but she calmed down as soon Shaurya held her in his embrace. S

Her subconscious mind can recognise him finding solace in him. She had good sleep after long.

End part little confusing she already in labour . Time passed more than 7 months.

Sorry I m late

Thanks for PM

One chap to read

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Beautiful Chapter Kelly...
I love the way he is taking care of her...and love MS also even though she had lost her memory but she has the same affection towards SK...

But really want to know how the things changed between them...for her he was still the employee of that resort...

Thank you for the PM and waiting for next chapter😛

Thank you Shamz😊. Since first time labour/birth have the reputation to be long drawn out processes I expect the next few updates will delve into the last months and how their relationship has (re)evolved. Safe to say though in her realization that she loves him theoretically there should be no problem in SK getting her to marry him again right😆

Happy you are enjoying the story.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 7 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: vimikrao
Mehak gets nightmares but she calmed down as soon Shaurya held her in his embrace. S
Her subconscious mind can recognise him finding solace in him. She had good sleep after long.

End part little confusing she already in labour . Time passed more than 7 months.

Sorry I m late
Thanks for PM
One chap to read

The first couple of chapters are relayed as both flasbacks and in the present which is a bit confusing, but things will make sense...hopefully😆

From your comments you are understanding it fine though. Thank you for commenting and enjoy chapter 3😊

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sush

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Posted: 7 years ago

#129

Such a beautiful chapter Kelly 👏

Awesomely written !

Let's see how Mr Khanna does his work... getting back his Mehak..

She is confused about being pregnant...poor soul.

Plz update soon...this is such an amazing story..

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Shamz15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Thank you Shamz😊. Since first time labour/birth have the reputation to be long drawn out processes I expect the next few updates will delve into the last months and how their relationship has (re)evolved. Safe to say though in her realization that she loves him theoretically there should be no problem in SK getting her to marry him again right😆

Happy you are enjoying the story.

He will never get tired to marry her any number of times😆😆

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