SHE: a mehrya one shot (part 2-c and 2-d updated) on pg 14 end - Page 6

Originally posted by: Heaven2hell

Hi apoo,I read the first update when I was not a Registered member so unable to comment.It's like a suspense thriller yaar.Now second update its too good yaar and it has striking revealations.Tho mehek Mehek Sharma nahi hai tho phir kaun hai woh?

Originally posted by: KashishJ

Great one Appu.

So no ghost but corporate manipulations and deceit.

Hopefully MehRya will meet soon

Bros on both sides , Vicky & Mohit supporting their siblings was super nice.

Waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Wowww Arpi...great work.

Finally iam feeling relieved now he didn't had a one night stand with a ghost🤣

It must have been tough for you to work on the next chapter but you wrote it really very well⭐️

Waiting for the next..

Phew! I read all 2 chapters in one go 😆
Loved it appu,you write so well ...must say we have some very talented writers in the forum 👏
Thank God Mehek wasn't a ghost 😆
Keep writing darl,love n hugs
Sanjh

Thanks for the pm sweetie ⭐️

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

thankkk u so much...

loved your words...

u read the two parts in a go..

then it would have taken a lot of time...😆😆

would be updating soon😳

Originally posted by: tibs09

Hey Appu ...
No one has attempted to write it on this forum but you are using the greyness of the characters to write a suspense thriller..
Be careful kiddo you have picked up a real complex storyline and characters...
I love what you are imagining and visualising the story to be ..
I would love to see how you bring out the layers
My advice do it gradually...one layer per chapter..as the story line is complex
Looking forward to reading more

Originally posted by: Sanju4Rajeev

Phew! I read all 2 chapters in one go 😆
Loved it appu,you write so well ...must say we have some very talented writers in the forum 👏
Thank God Mehek wasn't a ghost 😆
Keep writing darl,love n hugs
Sanjh

Thanks for the pm sweetie ⭐️

Originally posted by: Mehryalove

meri words hi nahi mein bhi bahut funny hoon 🤣

sach meh 2 parts kal hi padha tha it took 30 mins to read😉

PS: ignore my bad english and hindi also 🤣 My mother tongue is telugu 😆

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

yayyy!!! main bhi boht funny hoon di... high five...😉

wahhh... u can read really quick...😃

yeah i too don't have much knowledge about english or hindi... my mother tongue is bengali..😆

😆

Originally posted by: Mehryalove

hi five 😉 i am fun loving girl 😆

thanks appu meine kaha tha i love reading 😳

nahi appu your english is so good 😃