SHE: a mehrya one shot (part 2-c and 2-d updated) on pg 14 end

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sunet27taherian

@sunet27taherian

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Two things that I am attracted...
Plot of the story and reverse characterization 😊 good going girl 👏

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Pavi

@Pavi05

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Wow appu wonderful os 👏

very well written appu 👍🏼

Just now i completed reading two parts 😊

i am waiting for last part eagerly pls update soon dear 😳

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

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+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Res..Arpi will read in morning...🤗

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RiAnsh21

@RiAnsh21

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#44

Hi apoo,I read the first update when I was not a Registered member so unable to comment.It's like a suspense thriller yaar.Now second update its too good yaar and it has striking revealations.Tho mehek Mehek Sharma nahi hai tho phir kaun hai woh?

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Kash

@KashishJ

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#45

Great one Appu.

So no ghost but corporate manipulations and deceit.

Hopefully MehRya will meet soon

Bros on both sides , Vicky & Mohit supporting their siblings was super nice.

Waiting for next update

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Shamz15

@Shamz15

Coolbie

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#46

Wowww Arpi...great work.

Finally iam feeling relieved now he didn't had a one night stand with a ghost🤣

It must have been tough for you to work on the next chapter but you wrote it really very well⭐️

Waiting for the next..

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tibs09

@tibs09

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Hey Appu ...
No one has attempted to write it on this forum but you are using the greyness of the characters to write a suspense thriller..
Be careful kiddo you have picked up a real complex storyline and characters...
I love what you are imagining and visualising the story to be ..
I would love to see how you bring out the layers
My advice do it gradually...one layer per chapter..as the story line is complex
Looking forward to reading more

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aparajita

@Geekyglasses22

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: trentzoe
Just read both parts of ur os. What an update! Loved it! Looking forward to part b. Thank God it was not a ghost! 😉 Reread the second update.. I had missed some parts .. Such an unexpected twist. Very well written. Eagerly awaiting the big finale!

thankk u for ur kind words di...

yeah tried so hard to prove that it was not a ghost..😆😆

will be soon updating...😃

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aparajita

@Geekyglasses22

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: sunet27taherian
Two things that I am attracted...
Plot of the story and reverse characterization 😊 good going girl 👏

dhonnobad dhonnobad...😆😆

really di

thanks a lot for this appreciation

will be soon posting😃

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aparajita

@Geekyglasses22

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Mehryalove
Wow appu wonderful os 👏
very well written appu 👍🏼
Just now i completed reading two parts 😊
i am waiting for last part eagerly pls update soon dear 😳

thankkk u so much...

loved your words...

u read the two parts in a go..

then it would have taken a lot of time...😆😆

would be updating soon😳