SHE: a mehrya one shot (part 2-c and 2-d updated) on pg 14 end

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Sarika. K

@SharkylovesJake

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Heyy Appy!! Can I call you Appy??

BTW What a great update!!! I loved the ending.. soo dreamy and awesome!! wooohooo!!! 😆😛

Keep writing more stories..

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Parud7

@Parud7

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

Hi appu darling 😊

Update was awesum 😊

Best part is the Hindi dialogue I love it gives complete form of show. I can imagine completely 😉

And the end was fantastic both r in love ofveach other bt samjhne me der lgi 😊

Yes I don't like how shurya portray her image and those dirty dialogue he throws to mehak but these r demans of story 👏 and his charcter too.

So I ll wait for next ff of urs and that will be of longer one and more more ramantic one 😆

God bless u my dear and keep writing

Hugs to u 🤗

And thanks for pm 😛

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aparajita

@Geekyglasses22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Mehryan
Appu dear sorry...I'll read it tonight..then ll comment tomorrow ..sorry dear

itss okk di!!

take ur time😃😃

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aparajita

@Geekyglasses22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Niha1999
Wonderful job appu👏
Loved ur os...😃

niha di..

thank u for reading..

it means a lot for us newbies!! at writing..😃😃

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aparajita

@Geekyglasses22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: aparna4444
Beautiful ending. 👏

thank u aparna di😃😃

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aparajita

@Geekyglasses22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: SharkylovesJake
Heyy Appy!! Can I call you Appy??
BTW What a great update!!! I loved the ending.. soo dreamy and awesome!! wooohooo!!! 😆😛

Keep writing more stories..

yeah u can definetly call me that..😃😃

my pleasure..

will come back with an ff soon..😳😳

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aparajita

@Geekyglasses22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Parud7
Hi appu darling 😊
Update was awesum 😊
Best part is the Hindi dialogue I love it gives complete form of show. I can imagine completely 😉
And the end was fantastic both r in love ofveach other bt samjhne me der lgi 😊
Yes I don't like how shurya portray her image and those dirty dialogue he throws to mehak but these r demans of story 👏 and his charcter too.
So I ll wait for next ff of urs and that will be of longer one and more more ramantic one 😆
God bless u my dear and keep writing
Hugs to u 🤗
And thanks for pm 😛

harry di..🤗

thank u for reading and replying...

yayyy.. imagining is a surplus yrr😃😃

yeah i know that.. but the story demanded that..i m sorry if i offended anyone😭😭

yeshh di.. i'll be back soon with an ff and regular updatesss..😆😆 if u all want😕

thank u for ur blessings di😆😆

welcome..love u😛😛

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tibs09

@tibs09

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Appu you brought it all very well together ...
I cannot believe you finished it so soon ...
But it was all knitted together ... well done kiddo ...
Muaah
and you have a fluent writing style ... that keeps one completely engaged ... the chapters 2C and 2Dshow that ... I loved how you depicted her dilemma on what to wear
and their last exchange you did very well with angst of Shaurya ...and her explanation... Well Done

Edited by tibs09 - 8 years ago

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aparajita

@Geekyglasses22

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: tibs09
Appu you brought it all very well together ...
I cannot believe you finished it so soon ...
But it was all knitted together ... well done kiddo ...
Muaah
and you have a fluent writing style ... that keeps one completely engaged ... the chapters 2C and 2Dshow that ... I loved how you depicted her dilemma on what to wear
and their last exchange you did very well with angst of Shaurya ...and her explanation... Well Done

Thank u so much Di...coming from u..it means a lot..😳😳

It was real relief finishing it..I couldn't have dragged it long...

So Di...thanks a lit for reading and commenting...

Love u muahhh...🤗