Waada raha ...A MehRya(FF) part-5 page 15 13/12/16

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Guys Nicky here ... I m thinking about a MehRya story... Actually it came in my mind after that slap scene and the Sharaap(Curse) Mehak gave to Shaurya... Now I really don't know whether it will b just one Shot or two or more than two... So here is the Precap and idea of this story ...

Shaurya in his room was standing in front of the mirror and remembering that slap and the curse ... He was thinking about what Mehak said to him ...

Flashback...

Mehak(After slapped Shaurya) - Mr. Shaurya Khanna main aapko Sharaap deti hoon Ke Kisi bhi ladki ka pyar naseeb nhi hoga aapko... Aap hamesha Akele rahoge... Bhoot ki tarah akele bhatkoge...(Mr. Shaurya Khanna you will b alone and will never get any girl's love in your life and this is my curse on you... You will roaming like a ghost in your life )

FB ends...

He touched his wound and felt pain ... He was looking in the mirror and said...

Shaurya- bhoolonga nahi main yeh Thapad aur Na hi tumhara Sharaap Miss Mehak Sharma... Tumne Mujhe Sharaap diya hai Na Ke Mujhe Kisi ladki ka pyar naseeb nahi hoga ... Ab main tumse promise karta hoon Ke tumko mere pyar mein girne Ke liye majboor nahi kar diya Na tou mere naam bhi Shaurya Khanna nahi .. Itna majboor karonga Ke Tum Kisi aur se pyar karne Ke layak nahi rahogi ... Pyar Ke naam se kaampogi Tum ... Yeh waaada tumse Shaurya Khanna ka ... Get ready for this love game Mehak Sharma... Tumse tumhari hi language mein baat karonga main ... ( you cursed me that no girl won't love me but I will make so helpless to fall in love with me and after that you will regret for that and you will unable to love anyone else I promise you ... ) and

So here is my idea ... Should I continue or not ...

Part -1 - Page -3
Part -2 - page 5
Part-3 Page -7
Part-4 - page 12
Part-5 - Page-15
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hai Nicky ! That was great yaar ..
Actually wat u have put up is wat I expected from SK !
From the show ...but CVS keeping it secret..

I wud love to know wats gonna happen next and how he plans


Wud love it if u continue 😳 ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This exactly what I also expected from Shaurya in the show... 😲
Very nicely written... would love to read more... please continue... 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Definitely continue. I feel like this is very similar to what they will do on the show.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey...Nicky...!
Woww...sweetheart...! Nice start ...Would love to read the whole story...so please, do continue...! This step of yours...want me to follow you, and write something too...!😉

Won't be active today...busy completing my second assignment of this week...! Will meet again tomorrow...! Take care...! 🤗



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Posted: 8 years ago
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mujhse lagatha hai ke appko continue karna chayeh please
update soon plzzz

i will wait for ur 2 part

👍🏼👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hi nicky
loved it dear

cont soon please

loved the way you write this sptry

beautiful
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome idea
cannot wait
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome, this is more like SK we know, him changing overnight is something I couldn't digest but enjoyed at the same time
please do continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Nicky
This is what I was expecting from Shaurya but suddenly the track has been changed in the show... I don't know what CV 's r upto... Because they have showed Shaurya was remembering slapping scene... But next day in repeat telecast the have removed that scene!... May be in future they might disclose it Shaurya has never changed himself... He is just acting to trap Mehek... Can't be tell now...

But I liked u r story so continue soon

Waiting eagerly to know what comes next... How Shaurya will make Mehek fall in love with him...

Send PM dear if possible

Update soon

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