Waada raha ...A MehRya(FF) part-5 page 15 13/12/16 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
loved it...

shaurya khanna aur vobhi Mahek ke ghar and offer ...

wonderfully and interesting precap

update soon
i can't wait any more... and keep writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42

Chapter 1

The rich, arrogant and powerful Shaurya thinks that Mehek has hurt his ego, she has wronged his public image in some way. Shaurya s revenge plot focuses on Mehek and the innocent Mehek have to pay the price, even though she is not in fault.

Thanks to Shruti, though she is not a good person but gave a good advice for her future enemy.

Chapter2

Lovely Update.

There has not been a sadness that can't be cured by breakfast food wrote by Ron Swanson. So the family time is around and brought positivity in home. Loved their conversation especially Mohit how he retorted Nehal, told Mehek rather gave moral boost as to take a step ahead and pursue her dream.

Loved Mehek dialogue " I can breathe like before" lol Is earlier air intoxicating Miss Mehek.

PD rocks as always what a dialogue " Arre haan bilkul theek keh raha hai Bacha, Sun toh lo pehle"

To enter Mehek's heart he first have to impress her beloved PD, smart move Shaurya.

Here ends my comment, Continue soon.

Edited by lovetoread08 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
Amazing story.hope to see this track in the show too
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Superb update
Loved it
Eagerly waiting for next one
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing update
totally brilliant
cannot wait
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
wow!

lvoe the way ended with the precap!

im waiting eagerly for the next chappy !


lovedthe story !



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks my dear friends for your lovely comments... I have written the next part .. It will be here after couple of minutes...

Love you all

Nicky
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 3

Shaurya was about to go out from Mehak's house but he was stopped by Kanta Chachi ...

Kanta - ruko Ladke ...

Shaurya turned back and looked at Kanta Chachi...

Shaurya- ji kahiye...

Kanta- dekho sun li humne tumhari offer .. But Tum aaj sun lo and samjh bhi lo achhe se .. Mehak nhi karegi Tumhare sath naukri... Tou Uske jwaab ka wait mat Karna Na woh tumko phone karegi or Na hi tumhari offer accept karegi ... Better hai apne dil mein koi umeed Na leke jaana... ( look we have listened what you said and what is your offer.. But one thing just keep in your mind and that is Mehak won't work with you .. So don't wait for her reply she won't call you and won't accept your job offer... And it will b better for your knowledge and that is don't go with any hope for that she will say yes)

Shaurya looked at Mehak and she was also looking at him ... Kanta Chachi noticed that and again to Shaurya...

Kanta- uski taraf dekhne se kuchh nhi hoga ... Usi ki behtari Ke liye keh rahi hoon ... Pehle hi Tumhare saath rehne se Bahut kuchh seh chuki hai meri bachi .. Ab or nhi ... ( don't look at her it won't help.. I m saying all this just for her better ... She has been gone through when she was with you before.. It's enough now)

Shaurya- I know Maine Bahut bura kiya hai Mehak Ke sath aur Uske liye Bahut sharminda hoon and I know this too Ke main aap logon ki maafi Ke layak bhi nhi hoon ... Lekin please mera yakeen karein main yeh apni un galtiyon ko cover karne Ke liye nahi balke Mehak Ke talent Ke liye woh jo deserve karti hai Uske liye kar raha hoon ... Aap aisa decision leke Uske talent Ke saath Na-insafi kar rahe ho ... Mujhe Ek mauka Na Sahi but Mehak ko Ek mauka tou aap log de hi sakte ho Na ... ( I know I have done so bad and I m very much ashamed for that and I know that I don't deserve your forgiveness... But please trust me I m not doing to cover my mistakes but for Mehak's talent... I offered her this job cause she deserves this ... Please don't make any decision like this .. It will b injustice ... I m not saying to give me one more chance but you can give a chance to Mehak)

Then he went to Mehak and looked in her eyes and said

Shaurya- Baaki jo v Mehak ka decision hoga Mujhe manzoor hoga ... ( whatever Mehak's decision I will accept it) he took a pause but he didn't break the eye lock - I will wait for you Mehak..

Mehak was also looking in his eyes - hmmm

Shaurya- I mean to say I will wait for your decision Mehak...

Then to everyone- chalta hoon ... Bye

He left from there ... And Mehak was confused about what has happened...

Kanta- Kya soch rahi ho Mehak... Iski baaton mein mat aana... Tumne dekha Na Kya kuchh nhi huya pichhle dino mein ... ( what r you thinking Mehak... Don't trust him .. You have faced hell because of him)

Mansi - Haan beta tu rehne do ... (Yes leave it )

Mohit- yeah Di tumne hi kaha tha Na no more Shaurya Khanna... So just ignore him and his job offer...

PD - agar sab Bol chuke ho tou main kuchh Bolon ... ( if you all have done can I say something)

She sat on the sofa and called Mehak there- dekh laddoo tu tension Na le ... Jo tera dil karta hai tu woh kar ( laddoo don't take stress whatever your heart says do that)

Kanta- but PD jo bhi huya hai uska Kya ...

PD - main jaanti hoon jo bhi huya Bahut bura huya hai .. Par yehi soch kar jo aage achha hona hai usko kion nahi hone dena ... Tum log Bahut pyar karte ho Mehak se pata hai Mujhe .. Or iss liye darte ho Ke firr se Kahin woh Shaurya Khanna usko dukh Na de Kahin ... Lekin woh sharminda hai apne kiye par ... Ek mauka tou de sakte ho Na usse... Kya pata woh iss baar Sahi ho sacha ho ... Mujhe pata hai woh kuchh nhi karega kionki pehle hi uski Bahut insult ho chuki hai ... Ab firr se woh kuchh nhi karega... ( I know what happened that was bad ... But if we stuck on that we are stopping the good things which are waiting in future... He has also suffered a lot because of this now he won't repeat his mistakes)

Everyone was quite after PD's lecture...

Ravi Chacha- Mujhe lagta hai PD theek keh rahi hain ... Aisa Karke hum Mehak Ke sath na-insaafi kareinge Uske talent Ke sath bura kareinge... I think humko usse jaane dena chahiye... (I think PD is right we will do injustice with Mehak and her talent if we stop her)

Kanta - baat tou Sahi hai par Ek darr sa lag raha hai ... ( it's true but I m afraid)

Mansi- theek hai Didi aapki baat darr tou lag raha hai ... ( that's true Didi I m afraid too)

PD - Kanta Ek baat yaad hai tumko jab Mehak ne pehli baar cycle chalaya tha or woh girr padi thi and rone lagi thi .. Tu hi thi woh jo Uske paas gyi thi aur usko firr se cycle chalane ko bola tha ... Woh darti thi firr se cycle chalane se tou tumne usko Kya kaha tha yaad aaya kuchh ...

Kanta- Haan PD Maine usko kaha tha Darne se kuchh nhi hoga Tum apna nuksaan karogi .. Tum cycle chalana nhi seekh paogi ... Tumhari saari friends cycle chala rahi hongi or Tum Socha karogi kaash main uss Ek baar girne se Dari Na hoti tou aaj main bhi cycle chala rahi hoti ... Agar Ek baar chot lagti hai tou usse darna nahi usko baar-2 karne se himmat milti hai .. Apne darr se jeetna sikho Mehak...

PD - aur ab Tum khud darr rahi ho ... Jaane do usse ...

Kanta- theek hai Mehak Tum jaana chahti ho tou Tum ja sakti ho ...

PD - dekh Mehak final decision tumhara hoga ... Tum iss liye bhi jaane ko ready Na hona Ke sab me bola hai ... Nhi beta tu jo chahe wohi hoga ...

Mehak was still silent.. She went to her room without saying anything to anyone...

Day passed it was night ... Shaurya was in his room... He was still thinking about Mehak...and talking to himself

Shaurya- poora din nikal giya she didn't reply back... Kya decide kiya hoga ussne... Uska Haan kehna Bahut jaroori hai otherwise my plan will not work ... Usko apne paas laane ka plan ...

He closed his eyes and his mother came in ... She saw him like that and put hand on his shoulder and asked

Karuna- Shauri Kya soch rahe ho? ( what are you thinking Shauri)

Shaurya opened his eyes - arre maa aap kab aayi ...(when did you come mom)

Karuna- jab mera beta pata nhi kahan khoya huya tha( when my son was list somewhere) tu theek hai Na ( r u ok)

Shaurya- Haan maa main bilkul theek hoon.. Aisa kion poochh rahe ho ( yeah mom I m perfect why r u asking)

Karuna- dikh raha hai Mujhe ... Ab Bol Kya soch raha tha... ( I can see that .. Now tell me what were you thinking)

Shaurya- kuchh nhi maa woh main apne new restaurant Ke baare mein soch raha tha.. ( nothing mom I was thinking about my new restaurant) actually I want to tell you something maa ... Aap betho idhar aa Ke ( please sit here)

Karuna- bolo Kya hai ( tell me what you want to tell)

Shaurya- maa aaj main Mehak Ke ghar giya tha... ( I went to Mehak's house today) to offer her a job as head chef in my new restaurant...

Karuna surprisingly- Kya !!!!!

Shaurya- hmm

Karuna - Kya kaha usne ..? Mana kar diya? ( what did she say ? Did she denied?)

Shaurya... Nahi maa Na tou nahi kaha... But Haan bhi nhi kaha... ( no mom she didn't deny but she didn't say yes at the same time... I gave her time to think about it...

Karuna- matlab tumko umeed hai Ke woh Haan hi kahegi...( means you have hope that she will say yes)

Shaurya- pata nhi maa... Poora din nikal giya uska koi msg nhi aaya ( I don't know maa... Whole day passed but she didn't reply back)

Karuna- koi baat nhi .. Aa jayega ... Good thing yeh hai Ke tumko ehsaas huya hai Ke jo bhi huya Galat huya hai( don't worry.. She will reply back... Good thing is that you have realised that what has happened that was bad) Chal tu so ja ab ... Jiyada mat soch (ok sleep now don't think too much ) good night ... She placed a good night kiss on his forehead and left ...

Shaurya in his mind- Haan maa theek kaha aapne jo bhi huya Galat huya ... Mehak Sharma me Mujhe Thappad maara hai and Mujhe Sharaap diya gayi yeh Bahut Galat kiya usne ... She has to pay for that and this will b possible only if she will agree to join me ... Please Mehak reply me back ... He was thinking all these things and his phone rings and yeah it was Mehak's name flashing on the screen... Shaurya smirks.. He picks up the phone...

Shaurya- hi Mehak... I was waiting for your call ... So what you have decided???

Mehak- Mujhe aap se Milna hai ... Kall agar aap free ho tou? ( I want to meet you ... Tomorrow if you are free)

Shaurya- aww Haan bolo kitne vaje aaogi ... ( OK at what time )

Mehak- aapke office mein aati hoon 11 vaje theek hai( I will come to your office at 11 in the morning ..is it fine with you)

Shaurya- theek hai ... I will wait ..

Mehak- good night

Shaurya- good night

He hangs up the phone and thinks - what she has decided... ???Why she wants to meet me ??
Will she say yes ?? Or she will reject it??? Oh god I m confused... This girl ... She drives me crazy...

Next morning- at Shaurya's office... He was eagerly waiting for her ... It was 11.15 on the clock... He was becoming restless... She didn't come...

Shaurya- this middle class people don't value the time... 15 minutes uper ho Gaye and she is nowhere ... Come on Mehak where r u? Ek tou phone pe bhi nhi bola Ke Kya Socha usne ... Ab late ... Uff

He was walking here to there and there to here ... Suddenly someone knocked the door ... He sat on his chair and try to pretend that he was busy ...

Shaurya- come in ...

Yes there she was in the door...

Mehak opens the door and ask to come in ...

Shaurya stand up and says- Mehak please come in...

Mehak- sorry I m late .. Actually it was worst traffic today ... Sorry again...

Shaurya- no problem... Please have a seat...

She sits infront of him and she bring out an envelope and gave it to Shaurya...

Shaurya surprised- what is this Mehak???

Mehak- 25 lakh ka cheque jo aapne Mujhe uss roz diya tha...

Shaurya- what!!!!! But why you are returning it ... You earned it Mehak...

Mehak- nhi I can't keep it ... Please take it back Shaurya sir ... If you want me to work with you in your restaurant you have to take it back ...

Shaurya- lekin kion ... I mean you can keep it ... No need to return it back ...

Mehak- Mujhe aapke restaurant mein job karne ka mauka mil raha hai tou yeh uss chance Ke aage kuchh nhi ...

Shaurya- but Mehak yeh paisa ...

Mehak- sir agar aap chahte ho Ke main aapke restaurant mein job Karon tou you have to take it back... ( if you want me to work at your restaurant you have to take this back)

Shaurya- ok theek hai ... Matlab ab tumhari Haan hai Na ..

Mehak- ji Haan.. I will work at your restaurant...

Shaurya happily- thank you Mehak... ... Tumne mere dimag se kitna bada bojh halka kar diya hai ... Thanks once again...

Mehak- no sir thanks tou Mujhe kehna chahiye aap ne Mujhe iss layak samjha... Thanks to you.

Shaurya- ok I think yeh thanks kuchh Jiyada ho raha hai ... No more thank you thank you now ...

They both laughed...

Mehak- kab se shuru Karna hoga Mujhe ( when I can start )

Shaurya- new restaurant's inauguration ceremony will b next week... So you can start .. I will let you know the date ..

Mehak- ok theek hai ... I will wait ... Main chalti hoon ... Bye sir ...

Shaurya- bye Mehak... See you soon... I will complete the paper work and let you know..

She left

Shaurya was so happy- wait tou main v karonga Mehak uss pal ka Jan Tum fall in love ... And I will break you down that time ...

So that's it for this part buddies... Please let me know how you feel after reading it ... Thank you..

Love

Nicky
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I tried for a bigger part ... Hope you like it.. Please-2 give me your feedback..
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Originally posted by: nicky13

I tried for a bigger part ... Hope you like it.. Please-2 give me your feedback..

Nicky just amazing yaar such a beautiful story u are writing.pleasr update soon.

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