Waada raha ...A MehRya(FF) part-5 page 15 13/12/16 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Aww this is so interesting massi continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Hmmm things do match with the real story I see... 😆
Its good buddy, please continue... 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
awesome but i wish yeh devil plan shaurya khud paas jayeh mahek nahin balki Shaurya ko pyaar hojayeh...
update soon and part 2 long pleae
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Waida1234

Hey...Nicky sweetie pie...!


What a lovely start...! Fingers crossed...we get to see something like this in the show...it's really exciting...! I so much want to see this avatar of Shaurya...sweet and lovey dovey from outside...but, bitter and revengeful from inside...!

You said it rightly...when a man ego is bruised, and that too in public...there is no return back...! The man will not find peace of mind or heart...until, he makes the person who bruised it pay, and that too with interest...!

And thanks Shruti...for being the fuse who lighten up Shaurya mind bulb..and gives him this brilliant idea to engage Mehek as the new Chef of his new restaurant...!

Enjoyed reading this first part Nick...! Waiting for the next update...!😃





thanks Mehtab ... I really hope you don't find difficulty to read the Hindi parts ... Please let me know buddy... I tried to read it in English... 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajvilover

awesome but i wish yeh devil plan shaurya khud paas jayeh mahek nahin balki Shaurya ko pyaar hojayeh...

update soon and part 2 long pleae

thanks dear ... I will try to write a longest part next time 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow
totally awesome
love it
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved it dear
wonderfull part

please update soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
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you know i read your post few minutes ago and wanted to reply , but then the light was gone
and replying late

loved the part dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nivky lovely...me thinks..the story and intention of shourya in serial may be same
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Finally found your write up will definitely comment but bear with me as life is consuming lot of time. I have to also comment on other FF and OS which are in my inbox list. I truly appreciate all writers as they take out their time just to bring a smile on others face through their beautiful writings.👏 Hectic schedule, but visit forum daily, to stay connect with ZKM family.

Will comment very soon well well title is interesting. I have to read prologue then page 3 still😆

PS : Link is not working but found anyway.

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