Waada raha ...A MehRya(FF) part-5 page 15 13/12/16 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lovetoread08

Finally found your write up will definitely comment but bear with me as life is consuming lot of time. I have to also comment on other FF and OS which are in my inbox list. I truly appreciate all writers as they take out their time just to bring a smile on others face through their beautiful writings.👏 Hectic schedule, but visit forum daily, to stay connect with ZKM family.

Will comment very soon well well title is interesting. I have to read prologue then page 3 still😆

PS : Link is not working but found anyway.

aww thanks dear ... For reply don't worry sweetie pie.. Take your Time...I will wait ... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys next update coming soon... Maybe this night I will post it ... Thank you guys for your comments...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely...
After that episode i too thought that something like this would happen.
Nice idea continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-2

At Mehak's house day started with the same routine... She prepared breakfast for her family and everyone was on the dining table to have their breakfast... They all were talking about the last night Party.

Mohit - it was a good party ... But I m feeling sad that our Mehak couldn't win this competition.

Nehal- so but if she couldn't win it she won the amount equal to the the winner... So it doesn't matter that if she won or not...

Mohit- only you can think like this Nehal... Money is not everything... Samjhi ... You just shut up...

Nehal was about to speak something but Mehak come in between them...

Mehak-Arre Tum log kion jhagda kar rahe ho ... Don't worry Mohit it was just a competition.. Either you won or you lose ... It's ok I m happy that it's over now ... Now I will get my normal life back ... No more ISC and no more Shaurya Khanna... I can breathe like before... That's all ...

PD - bilkul sahi kaha Meri Laddoo ne ... (She is absolutely correct)

Kanta Chachi- sahi mein shaanti hogi aaj se humari Zindgi mein pehle ki tarah ... (That's true we will have peace of mind from today)

Ravi Chacha - Mehak beta Kya Socha hai ab tumne aage ... (Mehak what is your planning for next move)

Mansi Chachi- Haan Mehak Kya Tum vapis Ratan bhai saheb Ke dhaabe pe jaogi ya fer ... (Mehak are you going back to start job at Ratan bhaiSaheb Dhaaba or)

She didn't complete yet Jeevan Chacha said - arre woh kion jayegi Dhaabe pe dubara... Ab tou Uske khud Ke paas itne paise hain Ke woh khud ka restaurant khol sakti hai...(Why she will go to that Dhaaba when she has enough money to open her own restaurant)

Mohit- Haan di sahi kaha Chachu ne Tum Na apna khud ka Dhaaba I mean restaurant khol lo woh bhi uss Khadoos Khanna Ke restaurant Ke saamne ... (Mehak di you have enough money to open a restaurant and that's too in front of that Shaurya Khanna's restaurant )

Kanta - Kya bakwas kar raha hai tu ... Rehne de badi mushkil se usse peechha chhoota hai ab firr se Shaurya Khanna nhi chahiye ... (don't say stupid things.. We don't want to open that Shaurya Khanna 's chapter again in our life's as we got rid him once)

They all were busy with these things when they heard knock on the door .

Mehak went to open the door.. As soon she opened it her mouth was also wide open when she saw Shaurya Khanna in front of her...

Shaurya- Hi Mehak... How r u?

Mehak surprisingly- aaa Aap ... Yayaya Yahan... Kaise Aaye ho !!!! (How you come here!!!)

Shaurya- woh mere ghar se main gaadi mein aaya tha but jaise Ke Tum jaanti ho Ke tumhari gali mein car se nhi aa sakte tou wahan se main walk Karke aaya hoon ... (from my house I came by my car but as you know that no one can come to your street in a car so from that road to your house I used my feet ...)

Mehak- nahi mera woh matlab nhi tha(No I didn't mean that) mera matlab aap yahan kion aaye ho?
( I mean to say why are you here )

Shaurya- arre Haan woh main ... Kya Mehak Tum ghar aaye mehmaan ko main door se hi vapis bhej deti ho... Andar aane ko nahi Bologi(what is this Mehak you won't allow me to come inside or is it your house's culture to send a guest from the main door)

Mehak- arre nahi woh aisa nhi hai ...

Shaurya- tou let me come inside I will explain it in front of your family...

Mehak let him come inside the house ... Rest of the family was shocked to see him there ... Every one looking at him ...

Shaurya went to PD and he touched her feet ...

PD- jeete raho beta ...

Then he wished all of them a good morning...

Shaurya- I know aap sab Mujhe yahan dekh kar surprised ho ... Woh actually I m here for Mehak... I have a offer for her ...

Mehak she was still in shock- what ... Ji Kya kaha aapne ... Offer. Kaisi offer !!! ;What are you talking about what kind of offer you have) I don't want any...

Ravi Chacha- haanji bilkul hum ko nahi Chahiye aapka offer ...( we don't want any of your offer)

Shaurya- I know you all are still angry with me but please at least one chance to speak... Please Mehak Ek baar sun lo .. If you don't like it you can reject it ..

PD - arre Haan bilkul theek keh raha hai Bacha ... Sun tou lo pehle .. ( yeah he is right .. Listen him first) Then to Shaurya- Haan bolo beta Kya kehna chahte ho ...

Kanta- but PD ..

PD - arre kaha Na suno pehle uski baat ( I said Na listen to him first)

Everyone was looking at Shaurya..

PD - arre bolo Na beta Kya offer hai tumhari Meri Ladoo Ke liye..

Shaurya- thanks PD ... Going near to PD and ask her - bula sakta hoon Na mein aapko PD ??

PD - arre kion nahi agar main Mehak ki PD hoon tou tumhari bhi hoon ..

Shaurya- thanks PD you are such a sweet heart... And then he explained- Mehak I know you loose that competition because of me ... If that thing didn't happen then you could win ISC ... And trust me I m feeling guilty for that... So to compensate that I offer you a job of head chef in my new restaurant... And please don't take it as I m doing a favour to you but I m doing cause I know that you are well deserving...

Mehak was speechless and rest of her family was also shocked when they hear the offer ...

PD - bolo laddoo Kya bolti ho?

Mehak- Kya Bolon PD I don't understand what he said ...

PD - arre don't understand ka kya matlab Laddoo... Usne tumko apne new restaurant ki head chef ki job offer ki hai... Hain Na Shaurya?

Shaurya- Haan Mehak.. And dekho Tum apni wages Ke baare mein tension nahi Lena ... You will get 60,000 rupees per month...

Mehak's family members were standing there with open mouth and said -60,000 per week...

Shaurya- ji and other facilities too ... If you don't like it I can make it 80,000 rupees...

Kanta- lekin Tum Ek new chef ko itne paise kion de rahe ho ... Kya chaal hai tumhari...

Shaurya- arre Chachi nothing is there ... As you know that Mehak is very talented cook ... And I know all of you also agree with me on this point...

PD - arre usko tou bolne do jiske liye offer aayi hai ... Bol Mehak Kya reply hai tumhara?

Mehak- Kya Bolon PD I don't know ...

Shaurya- dekho Mehak if you want time you can take it .. I m not in hurry ... You just think about and let me know your final decision... Just call me ...

Then he said bye to everyone and he stopped near Mehak- will wait for your call ... I really hope you will give a thought... Bye Mehak...

Precap- Mehak in Shaurya's office and give him that 25 lakhs... And Shaurya shocked

Sorry couldn't do the proof reading... So I hope you guys won't mind for my mistakes...

Love Nicky
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Woww...Nicky...! What an awesome update...!

The scenes were playing before my eyes...while reading it...! Mohit...I adore this boy as much as I love PD...! Opening of Mehek new restaurant in front of Shaurya's...! Competition between healthy and unhealthy foods, would have been a treat to watch...Lol..!😆

Mehek family members are so afraid of Shaurya's...that for them, he's no less than a 'Raksaas" from hell who has come to make their life hellish...!

Mehek reaction when Shaurya talked about the offer...! Lol...what was she thinking...? She immediately went into a panic state...! PD and her ladoo...so adorable...! So..Shaurya is trying to "pataoing" PD first...and she's his entrance key which will open the door, and activate his entry in Mehek life...!

Enjoy reading it Nicky...! Will wait for your next update...sweetheart...! By the way...Mehek salary is Rs 60,000 monthly or weekly...? Love you...! 🤗


P.S: Oops...forgot to mention...! Thanks for the english translation...! ⭐️
Edited by Waida1234 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
wow mehak and shaurya together in new restaurant
yipee
loved it
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
So something cooking in Shaurya's mind...
This offer... Big amount as a salary... Chalo koi nehin aage pata chal jayega what he is upto...

Nice update dear...

Continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi buddy,
Amazing start
Mr Shaurya the overbearing person will drive her beautiful Lady crazy, WOW bring it on Nicky!!!!
So now in Shaurya's courtship he will chase and win Mehek's heart is a nice thought . Will have to wait and see how the story unfolds.

Keep going with good work.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woow ...SK is an opputunist ..
I don't want mehak to fall for this !

Bdw returning the money ? Did she knew his intension behind the job offer ? ... Want to know more !

That was great Nikki ! Well done !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hmmm not bad... I like where this story is going...

Lets see what Mehek decides... 😆

Very Good!!! Please continue soon... 🤗

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