MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#631

I read all 3 to 4 parts one go.
Couldn't get time to read as soon as updated sorry
Enjoyed each & every part
Beautifully written Kelly

Thanks for PM

Vinu

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jhankarbeats87

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Posted: 8 years ago

#632

Hi Kelly,

Wow, that was a mammoth update!

So Shaurya has been bowled over by Mehek, so much so that he has become jealous of her unknown admirer. 😉

Good to see hat Mehek stood up for Chef Esha and gave her mind to the egoist jerk. Love this confident, self-assured girl. She has come a long way from being the timid girl she once was. The foreign trip and independence has really worked wonders for her and has definitely boosted up her courage. She is now confident enough to handle any type of situation.

Would be looking forward to the date...Please update soon 😛

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: crtkelly

I was so unnerved by that cracker that my brain ceased to function. 😆 I didn't even respond to the comments on the last chapter.

I have no idea how Shristi et al handle such intimidation😲

Off to bed now, hope you enjoy the chapter...or what you may consider the mother of all teasers to this MehRya dinner date😆

@bold...Kelly u hv no idea about it dear!!

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#634

Sorry for commenting late again...I guess u have got used to my late replies now😒

I m so in love with this Mehak 2.0...In the show, we are getting to see Shaurya 2.0 n here its our Mehak...I just love her confidence. I so loved Sonal n Nehal's convo...Aww...Shaurya forgot to tell Mehak about his Maa...How could he forget? Its Mehak's charm of course...Now i m 100%sure tht he ll fall head over heels in love with Mehak n then feel guilty about MS...Poor soul...Mehak is going to have a good laugh enjoying all this...

Thanks for the PM hon!!!!!

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thabassum

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Posted: 8 years ago

#635

Hola Kelly

Read the update and thoroughly enjoyed it ..

The details you gave about every minute thing was really

Great...

U are that Kelly 👏

Mehak and sonal being respective helpers did justice to the dress selection job eh ? 😉

And made sure she looked pretty

No wonder our shaurya cudnt take her eyes off her ...

Poo mehak tough time dealing with these telling its not date...hmm same thing happend to her before right ??

Wen she was out on official after work meal with chef malik.

She was convincing her buddy kk tat time 😆

I can see that sumthing is brewing between mehrya 😉...

They told each other tat they sumone in ther Lives 😲

We will get to see it soon ..😉

How cool o karuna ma to check out the colour of the over two judges too

Hmm all thanks to mahal and sonal for this mere coincidence😉

Wen I saw these two are wearing same colours ..I thought they wud look like this

We know wat followed next in this sequence right ?

I guess we have to wait a little to see all that here in u story ,

A brilliantly written long update Kelly ⭐️

Keep up the great job...😳

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: hailly
Awesome update Kelly, loved it.
Continue soon please.

Thank you Hailly😛

The new chapter stressed me out so much, I hope it was worth it LOL.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Awesome update Kelly ⭐️ Shaurya is smitten with Mehek 😆 I like this new brave Mehek ⭐️

Thank you Sharlene. Shaurya is indeed and Mehek is definitely a lot more sure of herself...and trust me she will get braver LOL😉

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#638

Originally posted by: melissaR
Chapter 15... so sorry I'm late Kel. Forgive me.

Chef Malik 😳 Sweetie you got a definite yes from Chachi Handsome! Bad news for you and good for me 😉 🤣 wait! Isn't there an Esha lurking around 😲 😳

😲 Handsome is checking out Mahek yet again? Damn it just grab her and kiss her already . Well well well reading further Mahek still holds Handsome in a special place 😳 blushing talking about him indirectly 😲 😃

Too much happened to be discussed just over a cup of coffee. Dinner tomorrow night? Omg!!!! Is she going to wear the black dress? I'm looking forward to reading chapter 16

You are catching up that's all that matters Mel😊

Malik, Esha and yes even Mel...they all have their parts in this tale of mine...keep reading😉

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#639

Originally posted by: melissaR
🤣 Nehal and Sonal are so me 😆 I would have given Mahek plenty heavy lyrics 🤣 I'm disappointed its not the black dress Kel (saw what you told Sham) but happy cause it can make an appearance in the perfect moment for Mehrya and drive Handsome crazy!

😆 Handsome you are too much. You gave your own clearance from MS for your "dinner with a colleague" 🤣 Handsome you have to admit you are the jealous type 😉 😆 Ms Sharma Handsome's laughter is just the first you'll like about his sexiness Mahek you have captured Handsome attention in all the right ways. He forgot to tell you Maa wants to see you. Sonal was right! He was most likely to wear my fav colour blue 😃 My my I caught Handsome checking her out again 😳 😉 I find you're playing me. Watching to your heart's content 🤣

Geez its almost history repeating itself for season 2 I'm happy Handsome is sticking it out with Mahek 2.0 🤣

Kel I can't tell you enough how much I've enjoyed catching up to the last 3 chapters 🤗 Kel one question though should Handsome be jealous of himself or Malik? Cause what I perceived Mahek meant KK was her person of interest.

@ bold👏 You read that right girl LOL

New chapter coming up at last

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#640

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22
Kelly di...
Another intriguing chapter indeed...and yes its the mother to all the teasers to the mehrya dinner date(i suppose)😳
I completely love the mehek in here...the mirth and mischief all with her and about her...are favourites..
The way the bold mehek makes her way through handsomes's senses and leaves him wanting more...are '
Trully di by now i m completely in love with the vlue dress...and shaurya drawn towards mehek...
Just with her wit words and a different appeal...😳😳
Nehal and sonal are so me...and i loved it

Will be waiting for the next update eagerrrlllyyy...😃
Do post soon

Thank you for such a great review. That was a monster chapter, but I couldn't stop. Unfortunately I was totally burn out by the time I got to the actual date😕

Hopefully what I have penned is worth it.😊

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