MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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stellaV

@stellaV

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Posted: 8 years ago

#651

My apologies for not being able to comment on last 2-3 updates.

Just got the chance to read all in one go.

Kelly, i can never find words which are suitable to praise your writings. This is simply amazing, lovely, beautiful and what not 👏 Loved loved loved it.

Thanks for the PM

Waiting for the next update 😳

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#652

Originally posted by: bworm
Wow...that was crackling. ..
Mehek has set her cap for shaurya.
He doesn't know what's gonna hit him.

Beautiful. .. but cliff hanger.

Wait eagerly for next.. .

Thanks for the pm

Ms. Mehek has become too bold hasnt she😳👏

What comes next will be intersting I promise.

Thanks for the read and comment😊

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: Santiago24
Man!!
Kelly, urs is one FF that I check regularly to see if it has been updated..

This is truly awesome and I know it when I visualize the whole scenes in front of me, as I read it!

Outstanding!

Thank you so much. Comments such as this are so encouraging to a writer😊

So ecxitement in the works so i hope u continue to check for the updates!

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#654

Another brilliant update Kelly ⭐️ ⭐️

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Faith28

@Faith28

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Posted: 8 years ago

#655

Brilliantly penned...could visualise their dinner date..it was that detailed👏 tipsy mehek is sure sassy and bold😉 I hope he finds out about MS before she goes back... or Or Or... He can come looking for her in US😉😆 Looking forward to the post-kiss effects☺️

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Shameela

@Sam_Faizal

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Posted: 8 years ago

#656

Wow... Words escape me... I didn't think Mehek would be that bold... looking forward to what happens next... what will Shaurya do. I hope when he finds out about MS being Mehek he doesn't think she played him.

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crtkelly

@crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#657

Originally posted by: Shamrouz
Res😛
This was just unexpected, what's wrong with Mahek😆
Iam afraid if shecontinue to behave like same, she may spill the beans before they reach home😳😳

And iam eagerly waiting for SK to know that MS and mahek are same...hope he gets to know it before she leaves😲😲

Woww kelly u have added a song in between , that was so romantic ...

Thank you for the update and PM kelly🤗

If you thought it unexpected, how do you thing poor Shaurya feltMehek has had her share of liquid courage which has made her quite bold. 😆

If you recall many chapters ago it was Janam Janam that Mehek was humming as she prepared the food for selection for the food festival. Since I love it so much. I thought to make it hers as well.

Keep reading Shamz it is going to get interesting 😉

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#658

Originally posted by: stellaV
My apologies for not being able to comment on last 2-3 updates.
Just got the chance to read all in one go.
Kelly, i can never find words which are suitable to praise your writings. This is simply amazing, lovely, beautiful and what not👏Loved loved loved it.
Thanks for the PM
Waiting for the next update😳

Thank you Sweety, I am glad that you have read at least, and just knowing that you have enjoyed the previous chapter is as good for me. I am looking to get the next update before the end of the week, as there will be interesting things afoot. Will PM you when I do.