MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12) - Page 63

Originally posted by: desiangel24

Please do forgive me my dear friend Kelly, I am extremely sorry for the late commenting. I am in absolute awe of your writing. I read the previous few chapters, but my, my Mehak is getting bolder and bolder, but still has her innocents within her. If I had commented on every part of the story, you would have had a huge chapter to reply. So I will save you the wrath. I loved every bit of it! Especially their chats although I am looking forward to the dinner Shaurya just shot at her.

What is Mehak going to say, is the revelation going to in their dinner, What's Shaurya feeling now towards Mehak, would he feel like he's betraying his "friend" MS. AAHHH So many questions!!

Please do update when you can friend!

Cheers!

Jaya

Originally posted by: Geekyglasses22

ohhh!!! i m late..

but surely di...for a minute or two rather i thought malik had flown down to india...but the way it progressed and i was relieved that the fact was not that...it soothed me...but yes the conversation with chachi...malik was so spontaneous...i thought he would feel uncomfortable...but at last with that question...wife and children...malik was quick to gather himself...loved the way he conversed with mehek...they share such a friendly equation...theres very low chances of him acting like a majnu over mehek becoz he shows to be suchan understanding person!!!...

"there are all the probabilities of his words words changing into a compliment" 😆

someone would be very shocked at such a sudden comment...but mehek did cover it up herself...shaurya beware!!😆😆

the last part was awesome...shaurya saying mehek to look after herself was so adorable though straightforward!!

but the last words were my favourite!!! ultimately he said!!!!! yayyy!!!!!

yesss!!!!!!!yesss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😳

[for now it was no less than a proposal]😆😆

dooo continue soon!

plzzz dii

will be waiting eagerly!!!

Originally posted by: Faith28

Read all 15chapters in a go...brilliantly narrated👏 Superb storyline...enjoying every bit of it...love how the characters are growing... 👍🏼 Looking forward for the dinner (date) 😉

Pls update soonish😊

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Hola Kelly ..

Read the update swift ...

As usual ...

But this was one intriguing update I must say ...

I love the way mehak and chef malik interact ..he is one nice guy ..

He chooses his words well wen he speaks to mehak..

The way he speaks with women's is just

So they are trying add mehaks recipe in thier dessert list Mehak is happy with it ? Right ??

I donno why I feel kanta was curious to know abt chef malik's marital status..

Kelly plz don't make her plan sumthing twisted ..

I mean ...I felt like she might ask malik for marriage proposal of mehak 🤔..

Shaurya is really feeling protective over mehak...wen uday is around her ...nai ??

I mean he was literally warning her to watch out for uday 😲...

Hmm he is forgetting his friend MS while he is caught up in the ISC set with uday wandering around mehak 😳...

I liked the way he shooed away uday 😆...not even giving him chance to interrupt ...

Chai and coffee ...quite a combination [,:$]...

Ther conversation was too

And shaurya took the liberty of asking her out for dinner ...I'm sure calling her to show out his new restaurant was just an excuse 😉 ...

Becoz one can't simply resist laddo ...right 😉...

Keep up your great job ...And about you update ...

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Res 😛🤣

OMG how do manage to write so long updates Kelly... When one is addicted to the subject : very easily😆

Enjoyed reading it..

You have added so many brief details in each and everything..

Great work👏

Like I mentioned to Thabs, every detail is included for a specific reason😉

Wow Sonal was able to decode what he will be wearing and I can imagine how cute they must be looking with that colour coordinated dresses 😳

Even Karuna MAA could notice it 😆

Shaurya confessed that he has someone in his life...Much to Mahek's relief 😛

And she was pretending (was she?😉) even she has someone in her life😆😆

He is getting attracted towards her ..And he doesn't even have a slightest idea about it😲

Would be eagerly awaiting for the dinner date ...😳

Thank you for the PM and Update Kelly🤗

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Kelly I had no idea that iam putting pressure on you😆

What should I say now...I won't be repeating it or shall I say get used to it 😉😆

@bold I will take it as mother of all teasers than 😃