MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#571

Awesome kelly...too good.

Story is moving. ..Shaurya forgot ms..cause of mehek. ..the irony.

Dinner date.. karna chachi is gonna have a fit.

Can't wait for the next one.

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candy02

@candy02

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#572

I have forgotten to comment on your previous. It's too late now. So, I will only put that it was wonderful. The interactions are setting up for the big revelation, hopefully. It's heart-warming to find out how far MS has come ...

I simply did not want to do the similar mistake for this one. The plot is thickening. Your SK is getting more humane and MS bolder, brimming with confidence. They are heading towards a point where the two worlds can at last meet, mingle and become one. I know, I know there is a long way to go for both of them 😆. But impatient me, dreaming from now only . Your writing style, I am so much in love with. Absolutely awesome. When are you planning to break the secret!!! I am so eagerly waiting for that moment. Please update the next chapter ASAP.

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tibs09

@tibs09

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#573

Whoa ... a Dinner date Shaurya ... hope you know what you are doing...
And how do you explain your attraction to Mehak2.0 to MS as you are already ignoring her ...
Hmmm you could get in trouble...
Come clean my friend..
Come clean soon

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hailly

@hailly

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#574

Awesome update. Loved it.
Continue soon please.

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Kash

@KashishJ

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#575

Nice Chapter Kelly.

Wow, so a dinner date is on its way. Food, wine and music, hopefully Mehek and Shaurya will get closer as friends. 😆

Thanks for the PM. Waiting for next chapter

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Shristi

@shristi0706

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#576

Originally posted by: crtkelly

Hi Shristi, first have to tell you that I am so missing your updates. Hope one is coming soon😉. Perhaps we should have you lay off the comments and work on you own special tale😆

Seriously though, thank you for taking the time in you busy schedule to read, and never apologize, I totally understand how life goes.

This is the Mehek I want to see too, it would be awesome. And trust me you are not overthinking. If there was anyone I would pass this story to complete for any reason it will be you, because we think so much alike.

Got a new chapter at last. One final proof read and I will be posting it. Look for the PM

Oh my Kelly. Is it the world happiness day today??? Coz if it's nt I m certainly celebrating it coz u my dear have made me happy.. Kelly u r a terrific writer n if u think I could complete ur story, it is surely my biggest compliment as a writer. I m writing my new chapter n to be on par with some of the amazing writers out here, I really need to sharpen my writing skills.

Well off to reading ur new chapter. 😉

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jhankarbeats87

@jhankarbeats87

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#577

Hi Kelly,

Lovely chapter once again.

So Kanta Chachi is busy with her favorite leisure activity...matchmaking 😕

Shaurya seems to clearly smitten by Mehek...so a dinner date in the line (would be fun to watch how that progress...hope Mehek wears a saree...Shaurya has been checking her out quite frequently lately 😉).

Uday is as usual irritating 🤢...but he's turning into a cupid between the two

Rajeev the mentor...so he has got an inkling of the men in MEhek's life

Would be waiting eagerly for your next update

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Shristi

@shristi0706

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 8 years ago

#578

Just finished reading ur new chapter... Loved it!!! I m loving how Mehak handles Shaurya... She is giving him tit for tat mayb tht is why Shaurya still can't believe tht she is the same Mehak Sharma he hd met during the ISC days... The last paragraph caught me off guard.. I wasn't expecting Shaurya to ask Mehak on a dinner date.. Tht is so nt him... Anybody can notice tht he is slowly n steadily getting attracted to our new n improved Mehak.

In the last post, I said tht maybe he ll fall for Mehak n then he ll b confused between her n his online love.. N now I feel tht my guess is going to be right coz he forgot chatting with MS.. How could this happen???

Looking forward to the next chapter Kelly... Thanks for the PM!

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snehatara

@snehatara

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#579

Thanks for the update Kelly. It has come up very well. Can't wait for the dinner date chapter next.

Please post the next chapter soon. You do have a gift for writing.👏⭐️

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Vedika211

@Vedika211

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#580

I love this story so much! It has so much depth, emotion, nuance and possibility. I love this Shaurya, I love this Mehak and I love their interactions. The story just flows, to the extent that I could go on reading their conversations, whether offline or online, forever. Someone compared your writing to a flowing river and I think that's a correct comparison.

I also like this recent tension between the online MS as friend and potentially so much more, and the real Mehak with the pull of her personality and the lure of the joy and confidence that radiates from her. Shaurya is one lucky person indeed to have someone so sorted halfway in love with him.

Finally, is the dress going to re-appear for the date? I hope so!

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