MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12) - Page 56

Originally posted by: hailly

Awesome update Kelly. Loved it.
Continue soon please.

Thank you Hailly.

Working on the new update now😊

Shaurya is befuddled to say the least😆

Mehek has definitely grown in confidence: practically a star in the making!

Working on the next chapter now, so hope to have it out in a couple of days at the latest.

Thanks for taking the time to read & comment

Will be back soon with my cumnt ..

I got sum new technique to tell u how ur updates was * winks *..

Said it before you are a fabulous writer... too good.👏

OK I m so in love with this Mehak... She has become so confident!! I m simply loving her... Amazing. She is a star for me. Why do I feel tht Shaurya is going to fall in love with Mehak n then he ll b confused between his online live n Mehak.. Maybe I m thinking too much!

I always knew shaurya had a heart of gold.. The only drawback was he never shows it. I m waiting eagerly for their love story to start soon.

Originally posted by: tibs09

Kelly I missed reading this story...Do not know how ..
Just one of those things .. I apparently read the first 2-3 chapters and somehow never caught up ..
Tonite I read all 14 in one go
There is a part of me tha wishes there were more updates for me to read
Now where do i begin applauding 😳
the relationship that I have seen building just through the chats
The irrational or maybe intuitive jealousy the men (Shaurya and Malik) feel for each other
Shaurya slow introspection that is just but just revealing to him that he did wrong with Mehak
I am really curious how will Shaurya deal with the conflict in his heart
He might be getting attracted to this Mehak 2.0 while he loves MS
That might be interesting
Is MS going to reveal her true identity any time soon specially while she is India or is she is going to force Shaurya on a plane to seek her out ?!
Will there be an actual confrontation between Malik and Shaurya??
has Mehak started her journey towards loving Shaurya even with all his flaws .. will she realise that in these 7 days??
The immense possibilities that this story has!! Wow !!
This is an amazing story and you are an awesome writer.
I guess you already know that .

Thanks for reading Tibs, trust me I understand how easy these with so much on the forum we can easily lose track of posts. I am glad that you found mine, and took the time to read.😛

You have touched on so many areas that may be worth exploring that it is hard for me to respond properly. I only hope that you continue to read, and that you enjoy the story as it progresses😊

About to post a new chapter, so look out for it.

Thanks mina. Mehek growing both professionally and personally is something I have hoped to see in the show before it gave way to all of the over the top drama, but until then I am happy to pen it myself. I am so happy you enjoyed it.

As to my writing style influences, I would agree with you entirely, that reference seemed quite natural for me to use. Historical genre and in particular all things Regency appeal to me😊

The next chapter is coming up I hope you enjoy it as well, more internal pondering than action in this one, but needed IMO

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

awesome..

Thank you MysticRiver😊

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

That was an exciting update spark are flying between Mehrya continue soon, please Kelly a little longer update next time 😳 😊

Sparks indeed; the next update is a little slower paced, but I hope as enjoyable.

thanks for the comment Sharlene.