MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12)

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Sharlene1410

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Posted: 8 years ago

#481

Awesome teaser, so Shaurie is smitten that Uday deserve a punch

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vimikrao

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Posted: 8 years ago

#482

Sorry being late Kelly
I read teaser 12, chap 12 & teaser 13 one go.
Chef Malik is good guy, very supportive.
Shaurya what to say about him, he was checking her out. When Uday was just about to kiss her hand he came in between & took her hand from his reach. Last sentence Uday called his death for himself, after listening him I m sure Shaurya would punch him on his face.

Waiting for Chap 13

Thanks for PM

Vinu

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Santiago24

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Posted: 8 years ago

#483

pls pls update.

this is so delicious..your teaser.. 😊

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Shristi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#484

Thts a beautiful teaser!!.

Well, these days you have been updating the chapters really fast😎. Aww...Shaurie thought to punch Uday..I wouldn't blame him..tht git deserves it😡

Honestly, your teasers are more like chapters😆 and my chapters are like your teasers!!!!heheheheeh...

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candy02

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Posted: 8 years ago

#485

@Kelly, I could not give a review for the last but one chapter, since I was not sure whether I had understood it's significance in the whole story line. I was a bit confused. Nope, not your fault; it's mine definitely, blame it to my over thinking. I only could grasp the dress part, which I could fit properly. Nevertheless, the update was awesome as usual.

The last one. Absolutely loved it. Your writing is simply like a tranquil river, flows without much noise but with an ethereal beat. I am not sure whether I am making any sense !!! Anyways, the much awaited encounter finally happened. I am so curious to know how SK discovers who he chats with and his subsequent reaction. Also, how Malik is going to get fitted in this already twisted relationship. Eagerly waiting for your next chapter.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#486

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410
Kelly love it ⭐️ this is the build up to another interesting face to face with Mehrya 😆. Shaurie just like the typical man was drawn to her beauty and he noticed the difference 😆 Looking forward to their tom and jerry fights also their online chats I really want to know if Shaurie will discuss with his MS about his interactions with Mehek the torn in his side will she slowly become a rose at his side

Men will be men Sharlene. There will be some interesting times ahead for this pair that's for sure.

I have finally finished the update, so you can see what happens next. I hope you enjoy it😊

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: -Patsy-
Fantabulous, Kelly...you have a way with your words! just love your style of writing...⭐️
Please update soon, just want to see Shaurya's reaction to Mehak's sudden early appearance for the shoot - very eager for their one-on-one conversation...you have maintained the thrill and excitement so far as MS knows that KK is Shaurya but KK doesn't know that MS is Mehak...Wow!...but this suspense is becoming unbearable now, so break the suspense soon please!

Thanks Patsy, but I see I am a little late as you will be offline for the next couple of weeks. Never fear, the story will be here for you waiting,

Thank you for you compliments of my writing, it is very reassuring.

Safe travels my friend!

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#488

Originally posted by: shristi0706
Another amazng update from a terrific writer Kelly!!!! Great work!!!
So Mehak is back in India and is shooting for ISC season 2. Well, we already knw that she was beautiful of course, our handsome Shuarya took time to realize that. Good, that he was checking her out..maybe he did miss her after ISC ended. Maybe he misses their bickering and fights.

Oh and Malik, he is a sweetheart.. Hope you are not thinkning of a love angle for him with Mehak..Please i wouldnt want that coz I want him to remain a loyal and trustworthy friend for her..only a friend!!!

I hope i get to see more of Mehrya conversation in the nxt update...face to face😎 I would want to read how Mehak would react when she talks to Shuarya knowing all about him. That will be interesting to read!!!

Thanks for the PM once again!

Thanks Shristi, you comment is very much appreciated😊. Shaurya is a little slow off the mark in realizing a lot of things, but I shall endeavor to get him up to snuff soon.

I agree Malik is a sweetheart, and it would be a pity to have him hurt in the fallout of what I have planned, for now he will remain Mehek's trump card.

Finally have this chapter done so will post as soon I have replied to the comments. Will definitely PM you.

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#489

Originally posted by: -Thabassum-

Kelly this is one of your mind blowing chapters ever 👏

I had so much fun reading it...⭐️
Mehak took permission from her job to visit India for isc ...😳
Chef malik accompanying her till airport was just kind...
And his macho talks of dealing Shaurya khanna was awsum 😆
He is a great friend...😳
Here at lions den...I guess the king of jungle got a big surprise ever
Wen he saw mehak beside him 😉😆
With arms encircled 😳
I can imagine how wud have they looked

Totally dreamy...😳
So the great SHAURYA khanna was checking her out ...haan ?

Okay so uday is a flirt too...😲...
The way shaurya saved ms was ..excellent

Thank you for this lovely update

So now Mehak is seeing sum good changes in shaurya...
Can wait to see how these both gonna encounter each other in future...
Very nice update..

So many interesting things gonna unfold I guess...
Plz conti soon 😳

Thank you Thabs, I think I love this review as much as you enjoyed my chapter😆

That photo: aren't they such a beautiful pairing😳

Yes so Shaurya has received the shock of his life, and there is more to come for him I'm sure.

Uday🤢, a necessary evil, but Shaurya very smoothly rescued poor Mehek...or did he?

The next chapter is finally ready to go, and I hope you enjoy it in its entirety,

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crtkelly

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Posted: 8 years ago

#490

Originally posted by: Shazmi
It's nice update Kelly dear.I loved it.Since I'm new here n I speaks less, not able to express my liking for this FF completely.
Hope u don't mind.

Love
Aysha

I understand Aysha, so please don't worry. I am glad you are reading and enjoying the story.

New chapter coming up...finally!