MehRya FF: Discovering the Magic Chapter28 pg148 (10/12) - Page 50

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jhankarbeats87

Hi @crtkelly,

Thanks for the teaser (which is a chapter in itself). Good to see that Shaurya has stared defending Mehek, and even started keeping tabs on her unknowingly. This was bound to happen, given the fact that he was checking her out 😉

Would love to see more of their interactions.
It would be lovely to see Shaurya getting torn between his attraction to Mehek and his commitment towards MS.


@bold, I think that this is a given. I envision the potential of a very conflicted Shaurya Khanna soon😆
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamrouz

Waiting for the full update Kelly...

I think Uday needs a punch now 🤣
It will definitely add some spice to the show 😛

It's good to see MS is comfortable facing SK now and trying to understand him better

Take some rest dear...I know writing and taking out frustration always work out 😉

Hope you had a peaceful sleep 😛


@bold...instant ratings that would be.

Update finally ready to go. I hope you enjoy it.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Mayajac

Hey Kelly thanq fa the pm🤗

Teaser looks interesting..Shaurya supporting mahek😳
Uday needs a tight slap😡

PS: edited my comment in page 60😊


thank you Maya, I am glad you enjoyed it. The new chapter is just about ready to be posted.

Will PM you ASAP.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: melissaR

Yay! More to Mehrya first meeting. I have to say Handsome behaved himself but I guess that's because he's still in shock 🤣 So Handsome was holding her arm all this time? 😲 You really can't resist her can you? 😉

This Uday 😡 I wish Handsome gets the opportunity to deal with him properly. That 🤬 hmm!


Kel thanks for this. I guess everyone is somewhat disturb. I didn't get the chance to watch the episode when it aired. I was watching cricket with my dad 😳 Watched over Day 3 of India vs Aussies Test Match.


Hey Mel, In shock your Handsome is, so have pity on him.

Uday is awful and definitely needs to be set in his place for sure.

I wish I had known cricket was on, I would have loved to have watch the test. I didn't find out until too late, and then found out that someone had cancelled our sports channel without telling me😡.

At any rate the next chapter is about ready. I hope you enjoy it when you get around to reading it.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: snehatara

Thanks for the teaser Kelly. Look forward to the full update. 😊


Thanks for the comment. Chapter 13 coming up.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Great teaser Kelly. It's nice to see Shaurya and Mehek getting along and Mehek also noticed his changes and vice versa. That Uday's got it coming to him so bad...and poor Shaurya, he's going to be torn in his attraction towards MS and Mehek, and the competition doesn't ever seem to end for this guy, Chef M in US and Uday here ( though Uday is more an a** then anything else)


Shaurya is going to have his hands full juggling from the sounds of it. Hopefully chapter 13 gives you more an idea of everyone's standing in the story.


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bworm

Teaser leaving thirsting for more.

Can't wait for this to unfold...hee hee knew u day is going to bring the big brother out of him...or outraged lover.
He will keep on thinking of MS in all situations that Mehek falls into.

Trust me Kelly, your story is far more enjoyable then the screen one...which sm not watching at all.


Thank you, I am happy that you are finding some enjoyment in what I have written😊.

I hope you enjoy what happen next.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: hailly

Amazing update,.
Mehek entry was amazing, don't like the creepy uday though.
Continue soon please.


Thank you hailly. Uday is definitely a creep😆

I hope you enjoy the next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Sharlene1410

Awesome teaser, so Shaurie is smitten that Uday deserve a punch


Why am I feeling that Uday is no one's favorite😆

I hope you enjoy the chapter in its entirety Sharlene
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: vimikrao

Sorry being late Kelly
I read teaser 12, chap 12 & teaser 13 one go.
Chef Malik is good guy, very supportive.
Shaurya what to say about him, he was checking her out. When Uday was just about to kiss her hand he came in between & took her hand from his reach. Last sentence Uday called his death for himself, after listening him I m sure Shaurya would punch him on his face.

Waiting for Chap 13

Thanks for PM

Vinu


Hi Vinu, I would say you have everyone's characters down pact.

The chapter is now down, so I hope you enjoy it.

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