Beauty and the beast- part 8 updtd ( 4 Jan) pg 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Fabulous update.. Plzz continue...
I would like to suggest that after this kartik sees survi confronted by karan .. Hugging each other. This makes kartik more angry and he kisses survi on lips intentionally for karan but later himself got involved and realises his love...but survi confronts karan and agrees to marry karan..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
the idea is awesome but the kiss would seem better after their marriage track . What do u say? I have a surprise in store for eveyone
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Amazing job yaar...
In next chapter add a scene were karthik gets jealous..like really jealous seing survi nd karan nd out of his jealousy he romances her...ur wish to add dis or not...it was just a suggestion...pls update soon 👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-6 : The other day Karthik could not help but feel the scent of Survi all around in his room. When he slumped on bed, he was shocked to see Survi also lying on the bed. He rubbed his eyes to check if he was daydreaming but the Survi in front of him flashed him a really beautiful smile and he was knocked out. What the hell was she doing lying on his bed? Karthik was about to ask this but suddenly Survi came close and pulling him by collar made him lie on top of her. Karthik had supported his weight by keeping his hands on sides of her on the bedsheet. He looked at her sensuosly and slowly started leaning in. Survi clutched his collar and shut his eyes. He was just centimetre away from her as her lips parted and he after staring at her pink luscious inviting lips closed the gap. " Dadaaa" came a shriek as karthik jumped in shock. " Wh..What happened? Why are you shouting Shanti?" asked Karthik. Shanti, you should not be here...Survi and I...". " What were you doing with the pillow?" freaked she. " I...we...wait a minute...pillow" paused Karthik as he turned his head . He sweat dropped. There lay a pillow all crumpled up, ready to loose its feathers due to cuts...made by karthik's nails. " What the f...? " paused he seeing her at door. There stood she laughing heartily. " Shanti vahan vo Survi..." stuttered he as shanti turned and gaped at the door. " Dada vahan toh koi nhi hai" uttered shanti as she fell into a thought and when the thing finally clicked her mind she could not stop her laughter. karthik looked away. He was so dead . "you..you were making out with the pil...pillow thinking of it as Su..Survi " asked she and seeing him flush, she laughed even more loudly. And left the room uttering " Survi needs to be with you at the earliest or next time, it won't be a pillow". Survi came around 10 and directly entered Karthik's room as he had asked her to meet up regarding some case files of Lata kaki. He was bathing and she could see it." Damn the glass wall of bathroom" flustered survi as she tried not to look at how karthik's well chiseled body glimered under water droplets. She thanked the designer for at least making the lower part of bathroom of opaque glass. Her phone rang. She immediately turned to other direction and picked up the call. 'haan Karan' . Karthik who was just trying to wash away his weird desires under hot shower reacted to Karan's name and immediately turned his head to find Survi chirping on the phone and laughing heartily. Something pained in karthik's chest as he hissed " That annoying rascal. Always keeps wagging his tail around her like a domestic dog" " and what exactly he says that makes her laugh. She never laughs around me" . And another idea clicked his mind. This idea didn't came out of revenge but jealousy. " simmy" came a voice as she answered " yes sir". " Just hand me my towel, Its in the wardrobe" " But sir...I.." "do every time whenever I ask u something, I had to blackmail u to get my work done",retorted he as she got what he meant and pulled out a towel from wardrobe. She extended her hands towards the glass door and looked away. His hand gripped the towel and suddenly she was pulled into the bathroom. He caged her between his arms pinning her to glass wall as the water from shower seeped through her suit making her wet and revealing her curves. But she was all out. For the fourth time Karthik was half naked in front of her and that too dripping wet. He was just staring at her divine face as water droplets shone brightly. He leaned in and suddenly sucked on a water droplet on her neck. Survi stiffened. Karthik slowly snaked his arms around her wet waist. She stared him in eyes and suddenly embarrassed looked down. " karthik is wearing a towel then why...". She looked at him questioningly as he leaned and whispered " u r right, it was a lie to bring u close" . Survi was about to question him when he said " Why? What's in him to make you happy ?" huskily. He made her keep her hands around his neck as the gap between them disappeared. He slowly raised his one hand and kept it on her cheeks and then made her look at him. Bindu could not believe her eyes as she saw Karthik and Simmy passionately making out in the bathroom. Karthik had just tasted her lips...had just touched them with his lips when a sound broke across and he pulled away. He came out shouting " who is there?". Survi also came out shivering. "Damn that vase, that MMS would have made a quite a show " chided Bindu. "what happened bhai?" asked ani who seem to be passing by the room . Before karthik could reply Ani rushed in and asked "Are u okay simmy?how are u wet? Leave it...lets get ur dress changed. I will ask shanti di" and saying that he took her away by making her wear his jacket. She turned to look at him and left. Karthik struck the door with his hand and scrunched his face.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Read all the chapters in 1 go...
Nice story. You are making better progress of the story than the actual serial. Liked how you portrayed Survi...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
I will update the next part tomorrow. The story is gonna get serious so hold ur heart and enjoy the ride
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Actually thnk u soo much for accepting the request...
jealous karthik turned out to be soo hot!! pls continu soon..cant wait for the next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Omg I totally loved it!👍🏼 I will be waiting for the next part!👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
well mujhe do suggestion mile or Maine dono suggestions ko apne imagination k saath merge kiya
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Superb...
I like jealous and confuse kartik...
But where is chapter 1...??
I can't found it...

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