Beauty and the beast- part 8 updtd ( 4 Jan) pg 8 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story.very well written. I want to read more plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
I guess chapter-1 has got deleted by mistake
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Omg... This is happening even better than serial 😳😳... But still i don't want to loose my faith on serial .BTW Fantabulous update...

Waiting for next part.. Plzz continue ASAP.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part - 7 : Karthik has decided to take his plans to next level. That day he visited the shooting scene. Once the first half of shoot was over, he followed Simmran to a nearby cafe. " Will you mind if I join you?" asked Karthik politely. " Sir, aap...Why are you standing...please have a seat" offered she ecstatically. Karthik smirked. This was going acc. to him. " karthik...call me karthik" replied he taking a seat. Simmran blushed. " What is this Survi... your so called sister believes me over your truthful explanations of happenings b/w us" thought Karthik as he continued " you know Simmran I rarely indulge in chats because I just can't find the right people to share my thoughts with but whenever I see you I feel like talking to you". Simmran smiled and thought " karthik is so cute so was Survi lying about him or Karthik is lying?". She was pulled out of her thoughts as he continued " over the past few days a lot has happened b/w me and Simmy..I am telling you because I think that you will be able to bear the truth. Simmy...she is trying to seduce me. And well being a man and that too a bachelor I can't hold myself from being lured by her". He paused to see her reaction. Shock was etched across her face as she tried to defend survi " but karthik simmy aisa kyu..." stuttered she as karthik held her hand b/w his hands acting as if consoling her " I know...I know why will you believe me, a nobody for you over your sister but this is the truth. I don't know what she has told you but I am finally getting over her seduction game". " But she told me that you are taking some revenge on her due to some misunderstanding". " What revenge...did she tell you about the revenge or why am I trying to destroy her..no...right... she is plain liar". Simmran was shocked to core to realise that Survi even after knowing her feelings for Karthik is trying to lure him. In the second half of shoot Survi came with Karan to see Simmran. Karthik was irked seeing Karan with Survi and decided to create a mess. Simmran was shooting a scene with lead actor but Karthik wasn't impressed in that scene so he interrupted. He got up and asked male lead to go on side and see him do the act with Simmran. He was approaching simran when suddenly she passed by him and his bracelet and her bangle got entangled. Time stopped. Both turned and looked at each other. He lifted their entangled hands and both tried to untangle their hands simultaneously. Their hands touched and they were again lost in each other. He looked away cursing himself inwardly for losing control as Survi struggled to untangle his bracelet. She leaned in and tried to cut it with her teeth. He stared at her from the corner of his eyes. He was losing it again. This made him angry with himself as he shouted " tumse itna sa kam nhi ho rha" and pulled his hand with full force causing a bangle to break and hurt her hand. He rushed to the door and in anger rested his hand on a nail hurting his hand but rushed to her when he heard a soft gasp of pain from her mouth. Karan had also reached her. Karthik stared at karan who was holding her hurt hand. Karan backed off seeing the warning look in his eyes. Karthik looked at her tear stung eyes and sucked the blood from her wound. Simmran was shocked by his behaviour. Karthik then took her to a seat and taking out bandage from first aid box nearby said to her " tumhaara dhyaan kahan rehta hai, jab dekho chot khati rehti ho". He was oblivious of the people around and so was she. She took his right hand and cleaned his wound also. " aap bhi pwhle ki tarah apni chot na khayal nhi rakhte Karthik". He kept looking at her as he band aided his wound. She looked up at him with tear stung eyes which were asking him why this carelessness. His eyes seemed to ask back " do you care, does it matter ". " CUT" shouted the director as Karvi were brought out of their world. All the people around clapped. They both were confused . Director said " look Raj and Simmran ( main leads of movie ' vaada'), this is how you should do this... just like sir and this brilliant young lady". Karthik and Survi stood as director came to them and said " you were right sir they were not doing justice to this scene and I must say your acting was totally realistic". Karthik looked at Survi as he left in an angry mode. Survi also rushed out crying with Karan following after her. " survi...survi...sun toh sahi" shouted karan after her as he finally caught up with her. Instantly she hugged him and in b/w her sobs uttering " kyu nhi samajhte vo..kyu karan...apne aap ko itna dard kyu se rage hain or Mujhe bhi...kyu unhe mera pyaar nhi dikhai deta". Some few feet away from them, Karthik who was also shedding tears holding survi's childhood photo and asking her " why survi...kyu kiya tumne mere saath aisa..kyu tumne mujhse meri jindagi door kr di..kyu kiya meri jindagi ne mere saath ye dhokha". He had heard her sobs but seeing her with karan made him unable to hear her next words as he angrily pulled the bandaid away.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Omg...amazing update...plzz continue 😳


Ps: first one to comment... Yay
Edited by rocking_bhawna - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
So small part abhi start kiya or khatam.I was so lost in reading karthik is I don't know how to describe my words but
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
It was brilliant 👏 please do update soon. Karan did a small role but that seems to have made a core impact inside karthik. Plus simran's conversation with karthik was also to the point. Next time thora zyaada mile toh accha lagega.
😃 continue soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
omg the karvi's concern for each other was awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Ohh ur story is as interesting as the serial. Keep going like this yar. God bless u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
My heartiest thanks to all the readers

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