Beauty and the beast- part 8 updtd ( 4 Jan) pg 8

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part 1&2 - pg 1...,...part 3 - pg 2... Part4 : pg 3...Part 5 : pg-4...Part 6 : pg - 5...Part 7: pg 6...Part 8 : pg 8
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HOT OS NISH I WISH IT HAPPENS IN THE SHOW SOONER OR LATER
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start...
pm me when u update :)
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Hot hot ff !
Waiting for next part
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part-2 survi roamed around the hall thinking of the hatred karthik bore for her, the guy she loves. " love...what I am thinking, care is the word" fought simmy inwardly. " but why I shiver whenever he is close" and remembering the moment her heart started beating wildly. she passed by the room she was supposed to share another night with him but this night he will be awake. To escape his expected outburst a little more she decided to go for a walk but suddenly a hand came out from dark and pressing it to her mouth forcefully pulled her into the dark ignoring her protests and unsuccessful attempts to scream. the door closed and she found herself pressed against someone. As soon as her eyes realised the surroundings she looked at those eyes in horror. " karthik" but he would' nt stop as he approached her like a predator . soon she bumped against the wall. She tried to escape from sides but he blocked her. Slowly he leaned towards her neck making her eyes shut and whispered huskily in her ear. " tumhe bahut shauk hai na meri biwi banne ka". He held her chin and made her look into his eyes. he stilled as he got lost in that innocence that he had missed for the past 8 yrs. suddenly karthik turned and wiping his face said " sleep, we will leave early tomorrow". he sat on bed and thought " the plan was to make her fear not to make yourself fall in the depth of those eyes...damnit she is toying with my feelings". " feelings...what the..? I don't have them for her". karthik was pulled out of his train of thoughts as he saw her grab a pillow and make her way to door. " where r u going?" "in the hall" " are u insane. pehle jhooth bolti ho or ab agar baahar soyogi toh they will realise ur lie" " main aapke saath ek kam.." "mujhe bhi koi shauk nhi hai, samjhi" thundered karthik. simmy still started leaving. karthik shouted her name twice but she ignored. "hothead like always" muttered he as he picked up her bridal style and carried her till bed. She could only protest coz he was a stone head. " sir.." suddenly he shushed her by keeping his finger on her lips. He was so close and yet so far. keeping her eyes glued to him he tucked her in blanket and went to other side of bed, took off his kurta and slept with his face on another side.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG ..just read both the parts... It was simply mind blowing... Yaar show ka writer tumhe hona chahiye tha..your are simply great...

Plzzz!zz!zzz. Update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just beautiful! lovely! waiting 4 the next part!!!!
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thnx to all those who liked and cmmntd on the first two chapters.
if I would have been show's writer na... I would have made karthik the dark romantic types but no worries I will updt ch-3 today and thnx again. Anything for karvi
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part-3 in early morning as the rays of sun filtered through the curtains he tried opening his eyes but in vain. He tried to bring his hand to front to block the light but he couldn't move them either. He felt a weight but could not recognise it. Suddenly he felt a gush of soft sir on his neck and turned to that side in annoyance. But as soon as he turned he froze. She was so close. Their noses were touching and their lips were just a cm apart. It was her breathing on his neck. He found his one hand encircling her shoulder and the other. His eyes travelled the path and saw his and her's fingers intertwined strongly. This was more astonishing for him that he has his grip tight on her fingers. He felt a movement and turned to her direction. Some loose strands of hair were irritating her nose. His eyes softened as he brought his other hand circling her shoulder, to her ear and then slowly blew those naughty strands, to her forehead, by blowing slowly with his mouth. And with the other hand tucked them behind her ear and just stared softly at the sleeping innocence in his arms. Suddenly her eyes flew open. She was surprised seeing karthik's face so close but she could not make any movement. She looked and found herself trapped in his steel grip. In the haste karthik could not untangle himself and had just turned to other side cursing himself. Survi and karthik looked towards each other at the same time and got enchanted. The way their faces were so close could make anyone believe that they were making love. The doors slowly opened as two voices pierced the air but could not break their eyelock. " simmy" " karthik sir" Both stood dumb and glued to their places. For them their world has just shattered. Suddenly a sharp loud shriek came - " Aho deva!! simmy karthik tum dono ye kya.." shrieked kaki as she closed her eyes and turned to other side in embarrassment. Their eyelock broke. They both tried to move away but in vain. As karthik had held her with both his hands, he wasn't able to pull them away, neither was she able to untangle her fingers and the result was a disaster, for Ani and Simmy who were already in at trauma. Karthik fell on Survi with his hands on her bare waist ( saree) and his face in her neck with her hands on his neck ( yeh vada raha plays). " Tum Dono chalo yahan se" said kaki laughing as she dragged Ani and Simmran outside and shut the door. And shouted the lovebirds " jab tum dono ka ho jaaye toh neeche aa Jana". Karthik and Survi regained their senses and hurried. Ani and Simmy were too shocked to see them in such compromising position , kaki shattered their hopes completely by talking about them as pati and patni. Survi and Karthik descended down the stairs with survi in her suit and karthik in his suit, but without spects and his hair fell freely without any gel. Survi was looking in other direction and karthik was staring into stairs as if he will bore a hole into them. She slipped and shouted " Karthik". He was fast and caught her by waist. Again it was only them as Ani and Simmy watched them in disbelief. Kaki again broke their bubble by laughing as karthik straightened her and then murmured " Idiot" " kya kaha aapne" chided Survi . " maine kaha ki dekhkr nhi chal sakti thi" replied Karthik irritatingly. "haww ye meri galti hai" shouted survi as she scrunched her nose . "nhi meri hai" said karthik sarcastically. " PR mai.." stuttered survi as karthik covered her mouth with his hand and said " Tum na Chup hi achi lagti ho. Ek baar bak bak krne lgti ho toh chup hi nhi hoti. Jab udhar Mooh krke chalogi toh yahi hoga na . Vo toh acha hua main that vrna abhi take tum girkr apne 2-4 daant tudwa chuki hoti. PR tab tum kaisi lgti" finished he and making a thoughtful face said " bilkul chudail jaisi". He laughed at seeing her scrunch her nose and stare daggers at him. She tried to say something but Only muffles came out. He removed his hand and asked " kya?". She rested her hands on her waist and said " bandaron ko kabse itni knowledge hone lg gyi". This time karthik stared daggers at her and was about to retort back as she finished " vaise bhi aap toh mujhe bacha hi lete". Survi realised what she had said and so did he as they both looked at each other ( yeh vaada raha plays) and realised that they were fighting just like old times. So how's it??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg...i wish ki serial mein bhi karvi aise hi lade...and anii and simi ..jealous ho...fabulous update...

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