Beauty and the beast- part 8 updtd ( 4 Jan) pg 8 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Awesome mahn!!! Really loved it wsh it happened in d show plzzz undate asap!!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome ! Update. It felt so good while reading this chapter. I wish this happens in the show too. And now when both are married ( OK only sindoor filling is done) I want less of tai,pyare and ani scenes.
Please pm me once you update again. Superb job done. I have read the first two chapters and was hoping for the third one. 😉 .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Awesome yar...plz send me pm when u update nxt part... plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Great going ! BTW, where is part 1 ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART - 4 : While in the car, Karthik explained the situation and the truth. But Ani and Simmran were confused thinking what they have witnessed with their own eyes but nevertheless decided to keep mum for the moment. Karthik had decided to throw a party to humiliate Survi and next day he had send a dress to her house threatening that if she denied to wear this dress, Simmran will definitely play a corpse. PARTY : Karthik was engrossed in some important conversation with some business associate. It was a theme party. All were wearing masks and so was Karthik. Suddenly his head snapped towards the main gate as a girl descended down the stairs in a red knee length dress with her tressess falling till the end of her waist. She was trying to stretch her dress continuously to cover her legs but in vain. All the hound group in the part drooled at her figure and sexy legs. The business associate who was talking to karthik was a young man and as soon as he saw her , gulping on his saliva he muttered " goddess... Greek one" as he took another shot of whisky and proceeded towards her. Karthik cursed under his breath. Survi was thankful to the mask that no one will be able to identify her. She was feeling like a prey as all hounds stared hungrily at her. She decided to slip into one room and hence made her way towards Karthik's room as it was the closest. She reached the room and has just heaved a sigh of relief as someone else entered the room and closed the door. It was that guy. " You are really hot" muttered he as he approached her. " Aap door rahiye mujhse" shouted Survi as she started stepping back. "The party's on angel, no one will hear your pleas and don't act like an innocent soul when you have intentionally dressed to kill". Survi tried to run for the door but he caught her and pushed her on the bed. Karthik has noticed Roy follow Survi and was currently feverishly trying to break the door open. The door burst open as Karthik saw Roy towering over Survi trying to touch her inappropriately. Roy looked in his direction and said " karthik, she's a seductress man. Deal is final. Tender is yours". Karthik flared his nose as he threw his coat away and gripping him by his coat pulled him away from her. He punched Roy strongly and then looking back at shivering Survi who was shedding tears, clutched his collars and hissed " Dare you lay your filthy hands on her. She' s mine". Karthik's lips twitched and he threw Roy outside. He then went to Survi and before he could say something, she hugged him tightly. He hugged back as his hands caressed her half bare back. Survi pulled back and surprisingly Karthik wiped her tears. He made her look at him and she flinched. He bore such an angry expression and she stepped back in fear. He approached her dangerously as she stepped back until she collided with the study table. He came dangerously close as he thumped his hands on both sides of her on the table. "Are you insane, aisi dress pehankr aa gyi?" shouted he. " but sir aapne.." half sobbed Survi as he cut in " ohhkk so apni sister ka career bachane ke liye tum is party mein kutton ke beech apni izzat bechne chali aayi" . Then he went close and whispered in her ear " dare you move, I am a man too and a hot blooded one ". Her eyes widened as he left. He enters Shanti's room and opening her wardrobe hastily looked for something. " kya hua dada" asked she as he found a red chunni and rushed out. Shanti followed. He entered inside as she still stood at the same place and then he went close. He pulled her by her waist as she collided into his hard torso and gripped his sides for balance. He encircled his hands around her waist and started folding the chunni around her waist. Shanti stared at the scene and inwardly smiled. Karthik was done wrapping the chunni as he made pleats and then tucked them in converting her short red dress into a long gown whose lower part was net like. He then shouted " I know you are there, bring me your red jacket", and in another second Shanti was back. He made her wear the jacket and then rushed out . Survi came into the party as Simmy asked " ye gown kahan se aaya". Survi stuttered but Shanti saved her by telling that she has managed her dress as she was uncomfortable. Later Survi thanked Shanti who replied " Dada ki zindagi mein nafrat or pyaar sirf ek hi ladki ke liye, Survi". Survi was shocked to the core but before she could reply back, she found a hand stretched towards her. She looked at Ani as he flashed his cutest smile and asked " may I have the honour to dance with the most beautiful lady of the evening". Survi smiled as she nodded and gave him her hand as he twirled and danced her around. Karthik looked at them as both Ani and Survi laughed heartily. Karthik broke the glass of whisky in his hand and looking at his bleeding hand questioned to himself " Why am I jealous of Ani?" He stood and was about to walk out as Ani lost control on Survi and she fell directly into Karthik's arms ( yeh vaada raha plays). Ani scowled as Karthik straightened her and went out with survi following him. "sir" " sir" shouted Survi as suddenly she was pulled into a dark alley and as always was already b/w his arms with him staring at her. " Karthik aapka haath" shrieked she as she took his hand and started wiping the blood by tearing the part of chunni she has on her legs. When she was done, he was still staring at her . She let out a breath and looking into his eyes said " I confess ki main hi Survi hoon par maine Lata kaki ..." paused she as she heard simmy's voice calling for her. Survi was about to go out but Karthik pulled her by her hand and pinning her to wall leaned in and whispered huskily in her ear " revenge begins" . He heard Simmy's steps nearing and thus held one hand of Survi to the wall and intertwined their fingers. He then slowly leaned towards her left cheek and kissed her. It wasn't a post office kiss. The revenge was gone and love was on. Simmran stared in horror at the love making. Survi had frozen and Karthik has lost his senses as Simmran saw Karthik bring Survi's other hand up and intertwine their fingers passionately. He was drunk in love. As Simmran was seeing from the side, they looked to be lip kissing. Karthik was so lost that he was just sucking on her cheek and Survi was experiencing a new feeling of desire just likeKarthik
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Woohhh hot and romantic...
Amazing update...👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi guys, anyone missed my dark Karthik!!!! ..,...PART - 5... Karthik regained his composure only when he heard the tapping of heels fading away. He looked at Survi who had her eyes closed and smirked. " Main tumse vo sab cheen lunga Jo tumne mujhse cheena hai ". Survi looked at him with tears in her eyes as he continued. " cheen lunga tumse tumhare dost ko jaise tumne cheena tha mujhse ". " Cheen loonga vo ek insaan Jo tumhari life mein sabse jyada matter karta hai jaise tumne meri aai ko mujhse cheena. Jis dard ko 8 saal se Maine jiya hai main vo dard tumhe doonga". Survi was now sobbing furiously " By the way, you know Simmran has been standing here all this time witnessing us doing things and poor girl must have felt so cheated that, the guy she likes is being seduced by her very own sister. Deserves you right". And saying so Karthik left. When Karthik slumped on his bed, he could not help but reminisce all their moments together and also that flashback when his aai had fallen from the roof of that building. Suddenly his face stiffened and he started drinking from the bottle directly. " Dada" called Shanti stepping in. " Why aren't u asleep yet" asked Karthik groggily. " I had just come to warn u that just don't end up doing anything stupid that you will regret for your remaining life". Karthik's face twitched but he just ignored her words and slumped on his bed. Little did he know that if he would've considered her words, what was going to happen would not have happened. Survi tried to explain to Simmran but she won't budge and had shut the door on Survi's face. That night proved to be the longest night of her life as tears kept falling and the darkness got more and more eerie. Next morning when Karthik was doing some exercises in his room, from the window he saw Survi come out of an auto. But his lips curled when another guy ( Karan) also came out and they shared some talk that made her smile and he left. " I will wipe that smile off your face" cursed Karthik. Half an hour later he saw another auto stop as Simmran appeared and Karthik's lips instantly curved into a deadly smirk. Pulling out a shirt from wardrobe, he quickly covered his bare torso and shouted for Survi who appeared to be passing by his room. She hesitatingly entered as he ordered " my shirt's button has broken, fix it". " That's not my work, sir" retorted Survi. " You are right and soon that boyfriend of yours who came to drop you will become jobless." hissed Karthik. Survi deadpanned as she slowly slowly went near to Karthik but still stood appropriately away. " Needle is over there" pointed Karthik as she picked up the needle and again approached him with a hesitating pace. " He leaned forward and clutching her hand pulled her close. " I don't have the whole day to spare". She noticed that none of the buttons was off and was about to question him but Karthik who has already recognised his blunder was quick and pulled off a button and extending her hand forward kept it in her palms. She stared at him in disbelief but he matched her glare and signalled her to concentrate on the task given. She held the shirt and the button close and pierced the needle through button but she stared in other direction out of embarrassment as standing so close to him when he was naked reminded her of that day. Needle pierced at his chest as he groaned. " Ka..Karthik, are you okay..are you hurt..I..I am sorry" apologised Survi as she pressed her chunni against that small pinpoint of blood and Karthik kept staring this whole time at her out of the feeling that someone cared for her. However as he heard the tapping of heels coming close he grabbed the needle and throwing it away made himself fall freely as he grabbed survi and made her fall with him, flat on the bed close to which he was standing purposely. He huskily said "Simmy" as survi lay confused under him and Simmran peaked into the room. Karthik leaned close to her ear and whispered " poor Simmran...experiencing a heartbreak again" . Survi realised what he meant and tried to push him off but he was just too strong for her as he caught both her hands and pinned them against the bed. Survi decided to call Simmran but Karthik whispered " don't even think of that, mine lips are just inches away from yours and don't u think that I won't do this because you know better from last night.". Simmran stood against the wall and clamped her mouth tight to prevent her sobs. Suddenly Karthik came out sweating furiously as his eyes fell on her. "Simmran, umm you will be looking for Simmy..umm well she is ..umm in my room" said Karthik scratching the back of his head embarrassingly. Simmran managed to fake a smile as she went in. Survi has got up from bed and was wearing her chunni when Simmran entered. Survi tried to explain but Simmran shouted " I thought that last night I should have allowed u to explain but u..." and she rushed out followed by Survi. At house, Survi told Karan everything and together they managed to take Simmran in confidence by telling her that Karthik is taking a revenge on survi for a mistake she never comitted. PRECAP : advise guys what scene u want me to write. opinions are welcome
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Really awesome yar... keep going like this. Plz update immediately if time permits :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
hey u r a regular one. thnx for ur likes and comments. these r what matter to a writer
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Beautiful story line... In this Kartik has some sanity in him and he shows his feelings for Survi...Good job!

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