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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wow finally Mishbir chatting....

Its very well written.........

Waiting for u r next update........

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: socioboss9797

If you ask me about the best part in terms of story, I think this one bags that title. But if you ask me the best part in terms of analysis of characters then the piece that you had written before this one on free bird vs caged bird was the best one!

Please write more.

Thank you.Will definitely try to update regularly
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: socioboss9797

Asmi, this is so well written! The way you wrote Mishti being aloof with her books and Abir's conversation with her about it reminded me of Rory and Dean's first conversation from the Gilrmore Girls. Also, I loved the fact that Mishti turned out to be someone who is interested in various kinds of books whether factual or historic or fiction. Abir liking books which fall more on art and literature makes your story so much in connect with the show. At the end, Mishti asks him to read P.S. I love you is so cute and touching. It basically goes on to show how much Mishti is actually affected by loss/absence of loved ones in her life.

Thanks.Did you read P.S. I love you?
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyavishu18

Wow finally Mishbir chatting....

Its very well written.........

Waiting for u r next update........

Thanks.Will try to update in the next few days
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dotslover22

Thanks.Did you read P.S. I love you?

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Yes I have read!

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Just asking.I read two books of Cecelia Ahern.The above mentioned one and If you could see me now and I am really in love with them hence mentioned the name in the story.I loved the emotions conveyed in the book.It touched my heart and I think of everyone who reads it.Hence I mentioned the name.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dotslover22

Just asking.I read two books of Cecelia Ahern.The above mentioned one and If you could see me now and I am really in love with them hence mentioned the name in the story.I loved the emotions conveyed in the book.It touched my heart and I think of everyone who reads it.Hence I mentioned the name.

I haven't read the other one you mentioned. P.S. I love you is very heart touching. Infact, I had watched the movie first which lead me to read the book.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: socioboss9797

I haven't read the other one you mentioned. P.S. I love you is very heart touching. Infact, I had watched the movie first which lead me to read the book.

You should try the other one. It is equally heart touching
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dotslover22

You should try the other one. It is equally heart touching

I sure will! :)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dotslover22

FINALLY I posted the 5th part. Please do read and comment.Suggestions and criticism is more that welcome.Also please mention the parts you like or didnot like.Special mention to my not so lovely class.They are the inspiration behind this.

i actually liked the part that she might not initiate the conversation but is not opposed to one

Abir is kind of person who would ask questions too. Glad they exchanged their preferences too

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