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Posted: 4 months ago
#31

The next two chapters were also amazing! Armaan's heartbreak over missing his silly girl and Maahira's Abhira like spunk. Maahira constantly reminds him of Abhira, but she is also currently the brightest light of Armaan's life, and has been since her birth. smiley27

Posted: 4 months ago
#32

Armaan and his little girl Maahira already have my heartsmiley27

Also Armaan spends Abhira's birthday with Maahira in mussoorie just broke my heart a little. He loved/loves Abhira so muchsmiley28

Posted: 4 months ago
#33

I liked the backstory part via Phufasa, but a remorseful Sanjay? That's never gonna happen in the show, so we'll enjoy it here in your story. smiley36

Posted: 4 months ago
#34

Originally posted by: ThePinkPanther

I liked the backstory part via Phufasa, but a remorseful Sanjay? That's never gonna happen in the show, so we'll enjoy it here in your story. smiley36

Yeah I know. But that's the thing. I wanted the actual villains in my story to be the people who we least expectsmiley36

Posted: 4 months ago
#35

Originally posted by: Fortnight

Armaan and his little girl Maahira already have my heartsmiley27

Also Armaan spends Abhira's birthday with Maahira in mussoorie just broke my heart a little. He loved/loves Abhira so muchsmiley28

Yeah. I tried to get as many references to really build that relationship, coz that was the main reason I started writing this story - watch/read Armaan being a girl dadsmiley27

Posted: 4 months ago
#36

Originally posted by: Apsvenky

Yeah I know. But that's the thing. I wanted the actual villains in my story to be the people who we least expectsmiley36

Another added element of mystery. I like it. smiley36

Posted: 4 months ago
#37

First part in Kaveri's POV,second Sanjay 's,third Armaan's.Whose next?smiley3

Who is that junior lawyer?

If her face is similar to Abhira,that won't be Sanjay's normal reaction 🤔

Mahira is a bully like Abhirasmiley36


Story ke baare main zyada kehne ki zarurat hai ?i won't tell that now.i will tell it after knowing who is junior lawyer smiley36

Also thank you so much for sending all Goenkas to heaven.Atleast here I won't have to deal with them 🙏

Waise Aps can I imagine this Maahira's father role Armaan with specs?smiley2a man wearing a pink suit and glasses is standing in front of a window and looking at the camera .

Edited by elizamerin - 4 months ago
Posted: 4 months ago
#38

Originally posted by: elizamerin

First part in Kaveri's POV,second Sanjay 's,third Armaan's.Whose next?smiley3

Who is that junior lawyer?

If her face is similar to Abhira,that won't be Sanjay's normal reaction 🤔

Mahira is a bully like Abhirasmiley36


Story ke baare main zyada kehne ki zarurat hai ?i won't tell that now.i will tell it after knowing who is junior lawyer smiley36

Also thank you so much for sending all Goenkas to heaven.Atleast here I won't have to deal with them 🙏

Waise Aps can I imagine this Maahira's father role Armaan with specs?smiley2a man wearing a pink suit and glasses is standing in front of a window and looking at the camera .

Of course, koi shaq. Armaan sa in specs is one of my favourite looks of hissmiley42

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Posted: 4 months ago
#39

Originally posted by: Apsvenky

Synopsis - Abhira dies in a car crash just after having a baby girl and Armaan is left with a newborn and lost his wife. It has been 7 years since that day he lost the love of his life, but he has lived only for their pyaar ki aakhri nishaani (This story is based on the time just after Daksh was born, so Abhir or Shivani are not alive in this FF)

Chapter 1:

It was just another day at the Poddar House. Dadisa did the aarti & gave prasad to everyone, but reserved a ladoo in her pallu for someone special. Just as she turned the corner, she saw a choti si bullet train shoot from the staircase and run into her. The little girl put out her hand & Kaveri put her special ladoo in the outstretched hand. Putting in her mouth she started saying something when KV interrupted saying "Khaate waqt baatnahi karte". The little girl rolled her eyes & swallowed before saying - okay badi dadisa, but mujhe aapse kuch kehna hai. Dadisa asks "kya".The little girl says - "You are the best, better than the rest and just like my favorite English test". Hearing that Dadisa felt a sharp pang in her chest and with a teary eye, gave the little girl a kiss on the cheek and told her to get ready for school. Watching her run away, she recalled the 1 person who would say such things to her with the same amount of love and felt her heartbreak all over again. Seeing her grand daughter every day reminded her of her favorite person. Who taught her to live life freely again. Loved her not because she was Kaveri Poddar, but because she was Armaan's and her Dadisa - the elder she always craved for. Kaveri knew she would never see her again, which brought another pang of lost love and regret, before landing her eyes on her eldest grandson walking towards her. Her grandson who had lost that light in his eyes, which only ever lit up when he looked at his daughter. Who lost his smile which only ever truly shone when he played with his daughter. Who lost that loving loser personality whose only glimpses were seen when he was trying to make his daughter do something against her will. Dadisa missed seeing her Abhira coded Armaan, coz the one in front of her was the serious & no nonsense person for whom no one mattered except his little girl. He came to speak to her about something to an event in Maahira's school & how he would be leaving early to make it there. His work at P firm was limited to overseeing cases, as he wanted to make sure he was always available for Maahira. His needs revolved only around making sure Maahira's upbringing was the best and that she never missed her mother. Kaveri always felt that the day Abhira died, she lost her grandson as well. Kaveri regretted that she judged people so wrongly - be it Abhira or Ruhi. She felt that had she judged correctly, Abhira would still be with them. That fateful day when Ruhi planned to get rid of Abhira so that she could take her place, would never have happened. Kaveri never realised just how crazy Ruhi had become after Maahira was born. Since Ruhi herself had lost her Daksh in an accident, she had decided that she would get rid of Rohit & Abhira, and become Armaan's wife & Maahira's mother. She planned a car accident that was supposed to only have Rohit & Abhira in the car, but circumstances dictated that all 3 were in that damaged car which took all 3 of their lives, leaving Armaan all alone with a newborn. That man was shattered to the point of insanity. He would have killed himself that very same day, had Kaveri not shoved his daughter under his nose & asked - "Would Abhira be okay if you left this little one alone without her parents?" That 1 question was pulled him away from his grief enough to realise just how big of a responsibility Abhira had given him. Since that day, Armaan only lived for his little girl. For him, no one or nothing else mattered. He wholeheartedly took on the responsibility of being a single father. Thankfully his experience of taking care of his siblings and being in a joint family helped. Kaveri's regret made sure that she bestowed all her love & care to the living waaris of her lineage. She made sure that Armaan received all the support from the family he needed, but realised that he really needed very little as he wanted to be her father and mother through& through. He cut back on his hours at the firm and delegated most of the cases to his juniors. Sanjay, having learnt his lesson, fully supported Armaan & helped him where required, so he could completely focus on Maahira's upbringing. Despite all this, Armaan completely changed. He stopped interacting with the family unless Maahira was there and stopped speaking to Kaveri unless it was to convey a message. He stopped doing anything that was unrelated to either Maahira or his work. He became a version of himself that no one around him could recognize and seeing him like that worried Kaveri. She knew that no one could replace Abhira in Armaan’s heart, but he truly required a partner who would understand his pain & help come out of it to become a better version of himself for Maahira & for Abhira. But Kaveri did not know where to start. She had once tried to broach the topic of a second marriage to Armaan& was on the listening end of a scathing address that cleared any misconception she had about his feelings for Abhira & POV about marrying again. But she truly wanted that Armaan who lived life to the fullest like he did with Abhira. Like everyday, she prayed to god & Abhira to send some one who could return that Armaan KV lost 7 years back. But today felt different.

wow Aps! this was amazing , a great start of the story. Don't know you're such a good writer. already loving itsmiley27
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Posted: 4 months ago
#40

Originally posted by: Apsvenky

Armaan was running late, and he was pissed already. He missed his morning alarm as he had slept very late helping Maahira prepare for her school elocution competition. Maahira was going to talk about what she wanted to be when she grew up, & his daughter was already very clear that she will be a judge when she grows up – one step ahead of her mother and father. He was helping her prepare her speech & had not seen the profile of the new junior lawyer who would be joining the firm.

Armaan was already feeling overwhelmed. Abhira’s birthday was coming up, and like every year, he wanted to celebrate it alone with only his daughter. Every year in this day, Armaan would take Maahira and go to their Mussoorie resort for 2 days. He would first cook all of Abhira’s favourite dishes & get together with his daughter to reminiscence about her mother through photos & videos. Then at the end of the day, they would go to the nearby orphanage and have a fun party with the kids. This time he spent exclusively with his daughter and his wife’s memories. Maahira reminded him so much of Abhira. The same quirks, the same abbreviations, the same naughtiness and jugaad that his wife used to have, Maahira seems to have inherited all of it.

He always tried to make sure Maahira never missed her mom. Every day he would try his level best to make Maahira feel loved and every day looking at her beautiful face, his heart broke and mended again. Maahira was both his punishment and salvation. She reminded him of what he had lost, but was also the only reason he survived to see this day.

Armaan rued the day he allowed Abhira to go with Rohit & Ruhi to go to the temple for a puja for Manishji. That day he was tied up in court and Ruhi had said that she had arranged for a puja for Manishji’s 6th month death anniversary. The Goenkas family had all passed away and it had been 6 months since the last of them, Manishji passed on. Since the baby was too small, Chachisa & Kiara had said they will take of the baby while Abhira would attend the function and be back soon. Had he understood Ruhi’s intentions, he would have never let his wife go that day. He would have saved her from that terrible accident that Ruhi had caused, which cost him his wife, brother & Ruhi herself.

Bringing himself back to the present, Armaan looked outside at the traffic jam and was even more irritated. He wanted to complete his work quickly, so that he could make it to Maahira’s school for the event on time. He also wanted to make sure they completed everything urgent as he would be leaving for Mussoorie in a week for Abhira’s birthday.

He saw as a lady in front of his car was having a full blown argument with another car for having tried to overtake her. In that argument, she landed up taking that man’s phone and landed up throwing it through Armaan’s windshield. Armaan was pissed, but before he could do anything the matter got resolved as the traffic police took the guy away and the lady drove off, leaving him with a broken windshield, before he could confront her or write her car’s number.

In a foul mood he reached office and went to his cabin steaming mad. He was perusing his files when the people came to let him know about the junior lawyer who had joined the firm to work with him in his team. Just as he was going to the conference room, he gets a call from Maahira’s school asking him to come immediately because there was an issue in school. Armaan dropped everything and after informing Sanjay, rushed to Maahira’s school. There he found out that Maahira had a spat with another child and had put a pencil through that child’s ear. He was stunned to her that and asked Maahira what happened. She answered tearfully that some kids had bullied her regarding the elocution competition as the topic in the last minute, had changed to “How do our moms inspire our dreams” and since she has no mom, she should not participate. She got so mad that put a pencil in that other kid’s ear. Armaan complained about the bullying, but made Maahira understand that she was wrong & that she should’ve spoken to the teacher & complained about the bullying rather than hurt the other child. While Maahira was still upset, she apologized to the other child, while the principal made all the kids who bullied Maahira also apologize for their behavior.

Seeing Maahira’s sour mood continue despite the apology, he decided to take her along with him home and spend some time with her. He spoke to the principal and took Maahira along with him home. As soon as he reached home, he decided to go to Mussoorie 2 days early, so that he could be with Maahira more & she also had a change of place.

On reaching Mussoorie, he realized that the resort was booked and they had just 1 free room that would be occupied the next day. Luckily he had the keys to his wife’s room and decided to stay there while overseeing the resort when required. Walking into his wife’s room bright back old memories. He remembered helping her rebuild the place, hearing her singing “Oh Kanha” and being mesmerized by her, falling in love with her but schooling himself against it as she was supposed to be only his “zimmedari”. He laughed thinking about how his wife was falling in love with him, while he was fighting his own attraction towards his wife, thanks to his stupid promise and his guilt towards Ruhi.

Setting those thoughts aside, the next day he decided to plan a midnight surprise for Maahira & decorate the room so that they could cut her mother’s bday cake at midnight & bring in the celebration to cheer her up. He brought Maahira there, who got emotional seeing her mother’s pictures. They had a gala time dancing and singing her mom’s favorite songs while watching her videos. Maahira fell asleep in Armaan’s arms, while he chose to reminiscence about the other love of his life – his silly girl "Abhira".

this was sooooo beautiful. I think you're on the way to giving my "HI NANNA" manifestation here. So excited for junior lawyer intro 💓

Aps love you da for this beautiful fiction story. I am already guessing what's on the way and know that you won't disappoint us😉

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