AbhiRa OS: Summer Chills and Winter Rains - Page 9

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Mush already thinks mera asmaanixxx k sath chalkar chal raha hai. Ab tere sath bhi agar shuru ho gayi mere character pe bohot bada daag par jaye ga🤣 aur sam bhi kya kya soch ne lagegi☺️

Speaking of sam, yeh hai kaha?

Tere character pe to mujhe hamesha se hi shak tha😳

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

I’m back my dear jaan

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yeh dekho inki grand entry mere thread pe

Can we send you one-shot requests since you're such a great writer?

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Oh Mush what an OS yaar. You had me in a rollercoaster of emotions reading it. When I saw you posted an OS, it was the middle of the night and I thought let me just check it out a little to see what it’s about and I’ll read it in the morning, but as soon as I started reading it and I read the part where Akshara thinks he’ll plead with her when they meet at the Rehab hut instead he walks past her…I couldn’t put my phone down at all and continued reading till I was done. I even went back to reading a couple more times before getting back to bed.

I loved how you wrote Abhi’s indifference towards Akshu and how that hurt Akshu so much. Especially the elevator scene. My heart broke right there.

I also loved Akshu’s and Neil’s conversation and how he says they are just in the building across from hers, and how you left it for us to ponder and decide on how they might’ve gotten there.

The scenes following the elevator conversation was keeping me on my toes, till you mentioned that Akshu only suffered some burns to her arm. The way Abhi reacted at the hospital and how Neil had to keep Abhi from being part of her treatment were so well written.

One of the best parts for me was how Abhi was looking after her. It was beyond perfect. I also liked how you just slipped in the part where Abhi asks Akshu if she always slept with the light on. That was just perfect yaar. That one line implied so many things, and again you left it for us readers to decide what it implied and I thought that was brilliant.

Looking forward to reading more OS on Abhira from you.

P.S…Maybe one on Abhi’s birthday

@blask: lmaoo oh no sorry teri neend urane ke liye with abhi's cold attitudes🤣you actually should have read it in the morning

@red: awwwh yayyy! I know 3/4 of this OS was about the outburst of Abhi but i'm so glad you liked the last bit and hopefully it compensated for the missed abhira scenes.

TThank you so much sam for the beautiful comment. and thank you for always being one of the most supportive angels!

Hmm, Abhi's birthday huh? Lekin yeh purana nahi ho gaya?🤔 achha will write one😉

Originally posted by: Diyahahaha

This was superb! So far one of the best OS I’ve read about Abhira!❤️

How are you all writers so talented? How do y’all manage to write such splendid pieces? *_* I’m not even complaining unless and until we get to read such beautiful OS by y’all 😳

You’re very very very talented! Would definitely want to read more of your work <3

this is actually me in my head after reading your comment:

actually doing some weird ass dance in my head lmaooo!!! Thank you soooo much Divya for these words!!! I'm actually on cloud 9 and not sure when i'll come back on dhartijust...thank you🤗

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Was i the only one who 🤣 when I read the above line remembering our writer ji’s slight obsession with one very fine looking Doc jawline and her synopsis from a week or so ago about how she paused to admire his jawline🤣


P.S.. the whole paragraph was so serious and full of emotions but I couldn’t help myself 🤣 at that line. Mush what have you done, whenever they show Abhi’s closeups I too start examining the fine specimen of his jawline and it’s angle.☺️

LMFAOOOOOOO!!!! SAM!!! Tu na ab mujhse maar khayegi sach mein🤣🤣🤣My stomach is freaking aching like shit reading this!!! Laughing at my expense!!!Tu yeh ritu aur asmaani se na durr reh...in dono ka asar pad raha hai tujhpe bohot zyada🤣 waise, asmaanixxx maharani ajkal kidha hai? Dikhai nahi deti :( Probably very busy

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Oh GODDDD🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

IM SERIOUSLY LAUGHING SOOO HARD AND SO LOUD I FEEL LIKE MY NEIGHBORS ARE GONNA COME TO CHRCK ON ME ANY MOMENT TO SEE IF IM OKAY 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Sam what did you just point out. I dont think i can ever take the word “jawline” seriously🤣🤣this is hilarious oh god please save me🤣🤣🤣

I don't know what's more funny. Sam ka comment ya ritu ki hasi🤣

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Oh and did you notice how many times mush made abhi say the F word🤣 im sure at this point this is abhi’s favorite word🤣🤣 sab log apne apne kaan band karlo bhai, especially you akshu. Hamare Bachchi jaise akshu yeh sab nahi sune to achha hai

Reading it for the 6th time because i need to reimagine the whole fire scene after watching that horrible precap.

I also realized i never wrote a comment on the lasts cene of the OS haye raam !! Gonna do that too

Wow. Just wow. Such a beautiful narration. The way you have arranged the situations. AbhiRa. Haye!!!