AbhiRa OS: Summer Chills and Winter Rains - Page 5

Originally posted by: iheartChai

I am a loss for words. It was beautiful.

You really captured Abhimanyu's firm heart yet passionate anger that he would display against Akshara for everything she has put him through. As much as he is upset he still greatly cares for her. I mean he lived right across the street from her and I figured he would notice how she would keep the lights on at night.

Just nice setup and details... bringing everything full circle in this one shot.

The ending cuddle was just soothing to read

Cannot wait to read more works from you 😃

@bold nice observation grace. Even i thought the same thing about taking the hotel right acrosd her building. I like how mush didnt explocitly say it in the OS ehether it was coincidence or not and left it to our immagination. Holds the essance very well. I was smiling eat to ear ehen he said “does turning lights on help u sleep better?”

I’m back my dear jaan

https://giphy.com/gifs/im-back-4ayE7jjRuUBQk

Oh Mush what an OS yaar. You had me in a rollercoaster of emotions reading it. When I saw you posted an OS, it was the middle of the night and I thought let me just check it out a little to see what it’s about and I’ll read it in the morning, but as soon as I started reading it and I read the part where Akshara thinks he’ll plead with her when they meet at the Rehab hut instead he walks past her…I couldn’t put my phone down at all and continued reading till I was done. I even went back to reading a couple more times before getting back to bed.

I loved how you wrote Abhi’s indifference towards Akshu and how that hurt Akshu so much. Especially the elevator scene. My heart broke right there.

I also loved Akshu’s and Neil’s conversation and how he says they are just in the building across from hers, and how you left it for us to ponder and decide on how they might’ve gotten there.

The scenes following the elevator conversation was keeping me on my toes, till you mentioned that Akshu only suffered some burns to her arm. The way Abhi reacted at the hospital and how Neil had to keep Abhi from being part of her treatment were so well written.

One of the best parts for me was how Abhi was looking after her. It was beyond perfect. I also liked how you just slipped in the part where Abhi asks Akshu if she always slept with the light on. That was just perfect yaar. That one line implied so many things, and again you left it for us readers to decide what it implied and I thought that was brilliant.

Looking forward to reading more OS on Abhira from you.

P.S…Maybe one on Abhi’s birthday

This was superb! So far one of the best OS I’ve read about Abhira!❤️

How are you all writers so talented? How do y’all manage to write such splendid pieces? *_* I’m not even complaining unless and until we get to read such beautiful OS by y’all 😳

You’re very very very talented! Would definitely want to read more of your work <3

Originally posted by: Mushfika_01

His lips had thinned into a straight line and his jaw clenched, accentuating the muscle in his cheek.

Was i the only one who 🤣 when I read the above line remembering our writer ji’s slight obsession with one very fine looking Doc jawline and her synopsis from a week or so ago about how she paused to admire his jawline🤣


P.S.. the whole paragraph was so serious and full of emotions but I couldn’t help myself 🤣 at that line. Mush what have you done, whenever they show Abhi’s closeups I too start examining the fine specimen of his jawline and it’s angle.☺️

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Was i the only one who 🤣 when I read the above line remembering our writer ji’s slight obsession with one very fine looking Doc jawline and her synopsis from a week or so ago about how she paused to admire his jawline🤣


P.S.. the whole paragraph was so serious and full of emotions but I couldn’t help myself 🤣 at that line. Mush what have you done, whenever they show Abhi’s closeups I too start examining the fine specimen of his jawline and it’s angle.☺️

Oh GODDDD🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

IM SERIOUSLY LAUGHING SOOO HARD AND SO LOUD I FEEL LIKE MY NEIGHBORS ARE GONNA COME TO CHRCK ON ME ANY MOMENT TO SEE IF IM OKAY 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

Sam what did you just point out. I dont think i can ever take the word “jawline” seriously🤣🤣this is hilarious oh god please save me🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Was i the only one who 🤣 when I read the above line remembering our writer ji’s slight obsession with one very fine looking Doc jawline and her synopsis from a week or so ago about how she paused to admire his jawline🤣


P.S.. the whole paragraph was so serious and full of emotions but I couldn’t help myself 🤣 at that line. Mush what have you done, whenever they show Abhi’s closeups I too start examining the fine specimen of his jawline and it’s angle.☺️

Oh and did you notice how many times mush made abhi say the F word🤣 im sure at this point this is abhi’s favorite word🤣🤣 sab log apne apne kaan band karlo bhai, especially you akshu. Hamare Bachchi jaise akshu yeh sab nahi sune to achha hai

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Was i the only one who 🤣 when I read the above line remembering our writer ji’s slight obsession with one very fine looking Doc jawline and her synopsis from a week or so ago about how she paused to admire his jawline🤣


P.S.. the whole paragraph was so serious and full of emotions but I couldn’t help myself 🤣 at that line. Mush what have you done, whenever they show Abhi’s closeups I too start examining the fine specimen of his jawline and it’s angle.☺️

Bold - tujhe sach mein lagta hai ki yeh mush ka ek SLIGHT obsession hai? Imi wouldnt even be surprised if she hanged his jawline picture on her bedroom’s wall🤣

Can we expect an episode review today😳

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

This .... You are becoming a pro in leaving me speechless.... Nd you should have tagged me and others. Huh... But I will write a review later as it's long in my head nd currently I am in a time crunch. But this was beautiful Mush .... Nd you have depicted every emotion so so beautifully... Suddenly heartbreak seems more endearing

Don't worry about writing a longer review. these few words are enough. I'm SO glad you liked it Noor and even more happy because of the last line. you have no idea how scared I was to write this. The show was enough for heartbreaks and so i was pretty sure no one here on IF wanted another sad OS. but the response made me go on cloud 9!! Thank you so much for taking the time to read my love🤗