AbhiRa OS: Summer Chills and Winter Rains - Page 8

Originally posted by: Anokhi01

i would also like to request you to continue this OS. may be make abhimanyu aware of how akshara was "kicked out" by kairav. you are the writer you would know better but please continue. for me the abhira stories are the only things that bind me to yrkkh now. i am only here for pranali but still can't watch the show because of utter nonsense. so it is a request from me, and all your fans to continue this

I will definitely think about it :)

Originally posted by: iheartChai

I am a loss for words. It was beautiful.

You really captured Abhimanyu's firm heart yet passionate anger that he would display against Akshara for everything she has put him through. As much as he is upset he still greatly cares for her. I mean he lived right across the street from her and I figured he would notice how she would keep the lights on at night.

Just nice setup and details... bringing everything full circle in this one shot.

The ending cuddle was just soothing to read

Cannot wait to read more works from you 😃

I honestly feel like dancing after this comment, so pls excuse me for a moment

@bold:Thank you for appreciating not just the scenes but even the set up of this piece. I purposely didn't want to make it too obvious but i'm so glad you picked on that🥳

Thank you so much Grace!! your words really mean a lot to me❤️

Originally posted by: Manju1066

It was just super awesome👏👏👏you write so beautifully,I just don’t know what to say 💖💖Looking forward to many more from you and thank god you didn’t make it short.😁😁

Oh my god, reallly???☺️ Thank you so so much for showering me with so much love!! Yeh le jadoo bhari pappiyaan only for you

Originally posted by: Mridzy

HOLLLLLYYY MOLLLLLYYYYY!!! That - was - AMAZING! And that is the biggest understatement ever!!

I have to go tuck my kids in now, way past their bedtime - so I'm going to come back and reply more - buuuut, just thought I would let you know that was AMAZING!

This means everything to me, coming from such a spectacular writer!!! My heart is full. Thank you Mridz...Thank you!🤗

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

This was absolutely lovely❤️👏

I loved the emotion of this story. These two are eachother's need. I love how you portrayed Abhi's fear, anger and love in this OS. He does not do anything half way.

I want more now!

Awww thank you so much my love!!! I can't tell you how happy I am that you liked it🤗

Originally posted by: Abhiraa

Wow, unreal writing, this is so so good 😍😍

I love everything about this, abhis cold side is something I wanna see in the show and you’ve portrayed it perfectly here, Akshara feeling the wrath of Abhis coldness is so beautifully portrayed. I love the way he gets scared of losing her but still acts cold with her the next 5 days, but he still cares for her the same. And the last season was ethereal, the way he apologises for acting like a jerk, the way he calls her akshu again and the way he promises not to let her go in his head.

Keep writing more 🤗❤️

Look who commented on my OS!!!

Thank you so so SOOO much for such a kind comment! I honestly feel so loved☺️

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Before I get to my comment, how many times did Abhi say "F**k" in this OS Mush? 🤣🤣🤣🤣

LMAOOOOOO CHUPPP!!! Badmash kahiki🤣

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Honestly, when i started reading the OS, i didn't know what to expect. because the previous one was so good I just didn't think this one would beat that. but it did and HOW!

Never in my life did I think I would like a story where the guy gives the girl such cold shoulder. Honestly the way abhi was reacting even I got scared. cause he had always been such a sweet person to akshu. but holy shit when he said "It's dr abhimanyu birla, miss goenka", you said akshu got chills? scratch that and put my name, I GOT THAT FREAKING CHILLS DOWN MY SPINE. and omg when he said "You are 3 months too late", shit I felt like someone actually beat my heart up. i felt the pain reading that.

and thennnnn comes the aag wala scene uff. What a development to that scene. The way Abhi's anger changed into concern. actually not even concern, he was scared out of his wits AND his anger remained but this time not because what akshara did to him but for jumping into the fire to save a kid. oh the joy i felt

I feel like a sadist but ugh i have beeen wanting an accident scene for so long and you just fulfilled it.

and when abhi says "I will kill her with my bare hands if she doen't come out of the ER in one piece"

ufff what a dialogue Mush, what a bomb dialogue!!!!!!! just imagine me saluting you or this.

Honestly, abhi's sentiments were so well justified in this OS. and the transition was so freaking smooth: absolute angry man to concerned to all lovedovey uffff

the scene when he finally walks into the ER and sees akshu in the bed, eyes closed and all those monitors and tubes and IV and the way he was blinking back his tears: man WHAT A SCENE! i always love to see the soft side of the lead after he does all the outbursts. it just makes the scene a lot more worthy to read.

next is Akshu wiping his tears. omg that scene was so beautifully written. what a tender moment it was.

ok now abhi's third outburst lmaoooo. but well justified. akshu ne kaam hi aisa kiya hai.

The question made him feel a sudden surge of rage in his bones and the beast in him returned. His nostrils flared as he spat through gritted teeth, “What the F*CK is wrong with you Akshara? Did you leave your f*cking brain in Udaipur? Because I don’t see why anyone would jump in fire in their right mind.”

“The pillar would have fallen on the kid if -”

“TO HELL WITH YOUR KID ALRIGHT? THERE WERE EMERGENCY CREWS FOR HEAVEN’S SAKE!!”

“Yeah but there weren’t enough people and no one was-”

“Just shut the f*ck up before I lose my f*cking mind. You are one selfish woman, Akshara Goenka”

what an intense scene. THIS is exactly what i want to see in the show. the angry, intense abhi but angry because of her not taking care of herself. i just love love loveeeeddddd this scene so so much. and i know it sounds weird that he called her selfish but he said selfish because she didn't care what will happen to HIM if something had happened to her. I just love the kind of dialogues you put into your stories along with the detailed emotions. makes it all the much better👏

The bedroom scene will be in my next post because that scene needs a seperate appreciation post altogether 😳

I'm speechless! I don't know how to react to this. 😲Just give me a moment i will be back

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Awwie... Ab Mush ke pyaar ne mere ko badtameez bana hi diya... Kya karu

🤣🤣stop it you guys!!!🤣

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

Dekhna madam neend se jag kar bolegi “yeh kya chal raha hai mere thread pe” 🤣🤣🤣

Kuch zyada hi samaj ne nahi laggayi hai tu mujhe?😲