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@Shuz - thank you so much...yeah it will be up soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was nice to read, it was my first tym so wil try to continue from next time..
it was very gud wrritten
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Part 11

Four years later

Naitik walked into the hall to check his surgical board about his next operation. He was more than grateful he had no other shift that day. He was thoroughly tired.

His phone rang. It was her. He smiled a bit to himself, almost forcing himself to do that, which made him feel like he was doing something very wrong but it had been so long since she was behaving like herself. "Hey," he finally received it.

And he could hear her loud voice on the other side. "Tum aaj aa rahe ho na??"

He was confused. "Kaha?"

"Naitik tum bhool gaye? Tumne aaj promise kiya tha tum mere saath shopping arahe ho."

Naitik bit his lip. He had totally forgotten and he was too tired to go shopping with her now, anyway. But he decided to play nice. He hadn't talked to her since a very long time and he knew that she must have noticed that too. "Nahi..mujhe yaad hai. Main tumhe 2 ghante main pick kar lunga."

"Great. Baad main mil te hai then." The line went dead.

He sighed.

Life had changed so much. He remembered what it was like even two years back when he first decided to apply for an internship in hospital. His family was dead against it but she was there and she helped him sail through it all. She never really did anything, actually, except that she told him that he could do it and that his family would understand him one day. But her words were more than enough to make him feel good about himself and to try…and he finally made it work. But then she isn't there on his life anymore…Akshara Maheshwari was no longer there in his life….he convinced his family, got the internship, became a professional doctor but she was no longer there. And somehow, all his dreams didn't seem fulfilled anymore.

He chided himself. He was not supposed to think about her now…not when someone else was waiting for him.

Two hours later, he was in front of her house, waiting for her to come out. When she finally did, he found himself in her embrace as she hugged him tightly before getting in his car.

"Chale Naitik?" she said in her singsong voice.

He nodded. "Let's go Antara."

****

Akshara was busily trying to rearrange her files. Tomorrow was a big day for her. Her first day at her internship in a hospital. Akshara realized that she wanted to be a doctor as well when she was trying to be a pillar of support to the guy she once….loved. But then things changed and they broke up two years ago…she had no idea is he a doctor now? The last time she had met him he had managed to convince his family. He was supposed to apply for an internship in a hospital too but she never really knew whether he did it or not…she had to move away from him before that. She decided to stop thinking about him; otherwise she will not be able to work.

Her cell ranged and she knew it was Shaurya before she even reached for the cell.

"Hi."

"Akshara…tu kuch bhi kahe usse pehle, kalke liye best of luck."

Akshara smiled. "Thank you."

"Aur Ananya ko bhi tujhe best of luck wish kar na hain." Shaurya handed the phone to his one year old daughter who wished Akshara in her broken babyish voice.

Akshara giggled. She loved her friends' daughter. "Thank you Ananya," she said in the same voice Ananya did.

She heard Shaurya's voice again. "Kalke liye nervous?"

"Ha…just thora sa."

"Don't worry...you will make it. Accha main rakta hu yaar, tu zyada tension mat le, ok?"

"Ha thanks." Akshara dropped the phone.

Varsha and Shaurya got married two years before and they had a daughter just a year back. At the beginning, it was a huge surprise for her to know that they liked each other but at the end, she was happy for her friends. They did found love. She wondered about Mohit and Rashmi…what happened to them? She lost connect with them after University and after she and Naitik parted ways….they had become her friends too…

Maybe she would never know.

Flashback

It was the last day of the University. Everyone was totally in a happy mood. Akshara could see all the four years in front of her eyes. So many things had passed. She got so many things and life seemed so much happy at that time. All the friends were sitting in a circle, talking when she received a text on her cell phone from Naitik. "Meet me in the lockers' room."

Akshara felt a smile creep on her face. The lockers' room was totally empty at that time. Every single student was outside. She excused herself and nearly ran to the lockers' room when she saw him, smiling at her.

"Tumne mujhe yaha kyu bulaya?" she playfully said as she went up to him.

Naitik grinned at her. "Kyunki…." He held out his hand at her and pulled her a little closer to him. "Bahar bohat sare lok hai and I wanted some time with you alone…." He caught an escaping hair of her and wound it back into place.

She blushed, something she keeps doing nearly all the time she is with him. "Aur agar main nahi aati to?"

"Tum aati." He said confidently as he looked at her in the eye. Of course, she would come, he knew that.

"Fine…" Akshara removed her hand from him before heading to the door. "Ab main ja rahi hoon."

"Akshara," he said her name one time and she stopped.

He smiled as she turned to look back at him. "I just wanted to say thanks," he said.

Akshara looked at him, confused. "Kis liye?"

Naitik came closer to her. "Kyunki tum hamesha waha thi." As Akshara continued to look at him in a confused way, he added, "I convinced them."

Akshara's eyes grew wider as she knew what he meant. He had convinced Daddaji. "Sach main?" She said excitedly.

Naitik expected this reaction from her. "Hmm…." He said before placing a kiss on her cheek. "And this happened because of you…."

"Par Naitik maine kuch kiya nahi…"

"Akshara tum mere saath tab thi jab koi aur nahi tha…aur who support…it was the thing I could count on."

Akshara didn't say anything so Naitik continued. "Ek cheese promise karogi?"

"Hmm…"

"Always be there for me…."

Akshara smiled at him before hugging him tight; wanting to capture that feeling she was feeling now.

Akshara returned to the present. Memories hurt. She was the one who broke the promise in the end, after all.

****

The next day

Naitik walked down the hallway. Few of the interns were slated to join from today and he was asked to meet with them first before heading to his next operation.

As he entered the room, he saw a bunch of people huddled together, chattering in a nervous way.

And then he caught sight of her. Some other people were there with her…but he was totally shocked and numbed to even look at them when he saw her.

He saw her after two long years. Memories came flooding back to him. She still looked the same except that she had become more beautiful than the last time he had seen her.

She was searching for something in some files and she finally managed to get it. Her ID.

It dawned to him for the first time, is she going to work here?

"Akshara…" and her name escaped from his throat before he was even planning to say it. She looked at him and her eyes grew wide.

****

She heard her name being called. So she looked up. The voice seemed very familiar and when she looked at the guy who had called her name, she froze. Naitik.

After two long years.

She never thought she is going to meet him again. How could she not recognize his voice? He was simply staring at her, shocked. She knew she must be looking the same way at him. He looked so different. He was no longer boyish in his appearance. He seemed matured but she saw the same thing that she saw in his eyes so many times. The emptiness.

Then she realized, was he a doctor here? And as she got it, she knew there is no escaping from him any longer.

****

First of all, a big sorry to everyone for taking this month long break!! And a big thank you to everyone who are still reading this story even though i keep disappearing! :) I had my exams which went on for very long due to strikes in my country 🤢 but since it is holidays now, i would surely update a new chapter as soon as possible...:) :)

So Naitik and Akshara are no longer together...what do u all think about this?? Do leave ur reviews 😊

And once again, i am really sorry for this break!

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Posted: 12 years ago
nyccc part welldone plz cont soon i wish naitik akshara phir saath ho jaye
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sameera_naksh

nyccc part welldone plz cont soon i wish naitik akshara phir saath ho jaye

don't worry...they will be together 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
and im sure they ll b together soon... 😃
antara with naitik..!!! ewww!!! 🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago
well written👍🏼
bt little bit confused abt naksh break-up..n wat abt antra where did she come in between
n thanks fr PM
plz update next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
@naksh_charming - thanks :) :)
@black.swan - yup they will be together obviously...and antara..well she's easier to hate :P :D
@Meera_Naksh - thanks a lot :) :) I will reveal the reason by next chapter and the antara angle too...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb part..
Intresting Twist in d Story..
Plz confrim onething is antara wife or girl friend..

Continue soon & Thanx fo PM..:)

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