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Posted: 13 years ago

#321

SARUUU

awesome awesome update... so i read this after a long time so sry for the last comment i was so busy that i didnt get time to read lol... but now that i read it im soo happy...

Jessie is out of the pic yayaya... when she said love me i was like eww you creep get a life... i was like ugh what a disgusting girl this Jessie is but.. naitiks response was very very special and awesome.. i was floored and so the hot guys you find must be smart like him..

i loved the dance part lol.. its no naksh to get lost within each other and not know what is happening.. love them... awesome part plz write more soon cant wait to read more...

and will see you again in the morning... so i did re read the thing you told me to re read and what i have decided i will tell you when we talk once again.. i think we will be able to finish what we started by tomorrow if we keep up the good work...

oh and i have some other ideas as well so we can talk bout that and then all is well...

back to ur ff loved the part awesome and very cute.. and now since im hungry im going to go eat chocolate and find ice cream in my house as well :D...

bye love you<3

Edited by sejal719 - 13 years ago

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saru

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

Hi frnds this is the extended version of my OS which I wrote for "Yeh hai pyar ke pal" OS contest... As everyone loved it, I'm using the same in my ff too... but haa it will be having some more extended parts... I hope all u guys love it...

Part 28

Akshara n Naitik comes back to home frm the reception... they r in their room... akshara is standing infront of the mirror looking herself n trying to remove her ear rings... Naitik comes n hugs frm behind... he kisses her on the neck... n places his face on her shoulder..

Naitik: aaj aap bahut bahut aur bahut sundar lag rahi hai...

Akshara: acha... 😳

Naitik: man karta hai ki bas aap aise dekhte hi reh jaao...

Akshara: hmm... 😳

Naitik: kya hai aap mein jiski vaje se mein ithna bechain hu?? (he again kisses her on the neck...)

Akshara: naitik... 😳.. vaise hi mujhe kya pata hai... apne aap se poochiye... 😳

Naitik: mera dil kehta hai ki mein aap se bahut pyar karta hu...😳

Akshara: achaa... ab mujhe chodiye... mujhe kapde badalne hai...

Naitik: rehne dijiye naa... aap is saadi mein bahut sundar hai... 😳

Akshara: toh??😳

Naitik: toh... 😳(he again kisses her on her neck n her shoulder...)

Akshara: naitik😳... kam se kam haar ko nikalne dijiye..

Naitik: mein hu naa... mein madad karoonga...😳

Akshara gets her hair infront so that naitik can take the necklace... naitik moves his hand slowly on her back... akshara is feeling his touch... he kisses on her back... n slowly unties the lace of the necklace n he kisses der...

Akshara: naitik... 😳

Naitik: isshhh... 😳

Akshara turns towards naitik... she blushes.. Naitik raises her chin n kisses her on her forehead... then both eyes... then both cheeks.. Akshara is completely mesmerized... Naitik is lost in akshara's world... he comes to her lipss... ❤️❤️❤️... piya bawari.. hayee bawari... ❤️❤️❤️

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Two weeks later, it became complete 3 months since akshara n naitik came to switzerland... Naitik's work is almost done... Another one week left for the pendants to come frm India... Akshara's classes in designing and music are also completed... Naitik n akshara decides to leave for India aftr they hand over all the jewelery to John and Chris... As their is only one week left akshara and Naitik thinks to go for shopping... Its monday morning... Naitik decides to take akshara shopping first n then he can go for ofc as their is nothing much work in ofc...

Both starts to shopping in their car... akshara is sitting by naitik's side... Akshara sees something...

Akshara: naitik.. please gaadi rukiye naa..

Naitik: kya hua??😕

Akshara: please naitik.. rukiye.. mein batati hu..

Naitik stops d car.. he is confused as y akshara asked him to stop d car in d middle of the way.. akshara immediately gets down frm d car..

Akshara: naitik.. aap bhi bahar aayiye.. jaldi.. (akshara is soo exited..)😃

Naitik gets out of the car confusingly..

Akshara: Naitik dekhiye naa.. amle ka pedh..😃

Naitik: toh???😲 yeh dikhane keliye gaadi rukhwayi aap??😕

Akshara: naitik.. meri poori baat toh suniyee..

Naitik: akshara.. is pedh mein naya kya hai😕.. aap bhi naa.. chaliye.. andar baithiye.. mujhe jaldi ofc bhi jaana hai..

Akshara: Naitik.. us pedh ko bahut saare aamle hai.. mujhe naa woh khane ka man kar rahe hai..😍

Naitik: kya??😲

Akshara: haa naitik.. please mujhe woh aamle dijiye naa..

Naitik: abhi??😲 waise bhi woh pedh ke bahut upar hai.. mein use kaise todu??😲

Akshara: kuch bhi kijiyee.. mujhe aamle chahiyee..

Naitik: yeh kya zidh hai akshara?? hum shopping chalte hai.. mein sham ko ghar aate vakth aapkeliye aame le aaungaa..😃

Akshara: nahi.. mujhe abhi yahi vahi aamle chahiyee..

Naitik is confused but still decides to get them for akshara as akshara is willing to eat them.. with very difficulty he starts climbing the tree.. he climbs half n look down... he is scared to see himself on such a height on a tree..

Naitik : aapkeliye mujhe kya kya chadna padta hai😡... pehle aapki ghar ki balcony ab yeh pedh... pata nai future mein mujhe aur kya kya karna padega..

Akshara: pyar keliye kuch kuch karna padta hai naitik... 😳... chaliye isi bahane se hi sahi aapka toda exercise bhi hojayega... 😉😆😆

Naitik: lekin mujhe dar lag raha hai... kahi mein gir gaya toh??

Akshara: kya naitik.. aapko pedh chadana bhi nahi aata... phir balcony chad kar mere kamre mein aajate hai... 😆😆... ab kaha gaya uthni himmath?? 😉

Naitik: abhi aap chidayiye mat... mein chadata hu naa.. aap neeche aaram se dekhte rahiye... 😡

He finally climbs the top of the tree...

Akshara: wah naitik... very good... finally aap upar tak pahunch gaye... 👏

Naitik: Thanku... 😃 (jst den he sees a monkey sitting on the tree a few distance away frm him..)

Naitik: akshara... 😭 (naitik gets so scared seeing the monkey)

Akshara: kya hua??? 😕

Naitik: bandar...

Akshara: kye mein aapko bandar ki tarah dikh rahi hu??? 😡😡... mein kya maanga?? sirf kuch aamle hi hai naa... iskeliye mujhe aap bandar kehta hai?? 😡😡

Naitik: akshara... mein already tensed hu... ab aap naraz hokar mujhe aur bhi pareshan mat kariye... aapka yeh unchi awaaz sun kar kahi woh bandar mujh pe attack kiya toh??? 😭

Akshara: kis bandar???😕

Naitik: woh dekhiyee... (he points towards the monkey which is sitting on the another branch of the tree..) 😭

Akshara: bandar... 😲😲😲 naitik ab kya hoga??? aap neeche kaise aayenge???

Naitik: mein toh yaha phas gaya...

Akshara: kahi woh bandar aapke paas aagaye toh???😲

Naitik: akshara... aap mujhe aur darayiyee mat... 😡... omg... woh ek nahi... do hai... chota bandar bhi hai..

Akshara: naitik.. aap naa jaldi jaldi neeche uthariyee... mujhe aamle nahi chahiye...

Naitik: kya neeche utharna uthna easy samajh rahe hai?? dekhiye mein kithna upar mein hu... aise achanak se kaise neeche aajaunga??? upar se yeh bandaron ka tension...

Akshara: lagta hai naitik woh aapko hi dekh rahe hai... aur lagta hai woh aapke paas aajayegi..

Naitik: ab usko idea mat dijiye... 😡

Monkey looks at both... It starts moving towards naitik... Naitik gets scared...

Naitik: arrey kya muh hai... aap keh diya yaha yeh aane lagi... 😡... mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai... ab mein kya karu???

Akshara: naitik... dariye mat... mein kuch karoongi naa... (she takes a stone n was abt to throw on the monkey)

Naitik: akshara... kya kar rahi hai aap?? 😡... yeh bankar ko pathar se maregi toh yeh aur naraz hokar mujhpe attack karegi... 😡

Akshara: oh sorry...

Naitik (to monkey): dekhiye bandar ji... please mujhe chod dijiyee... mujhe nahi pata hai ki aap yaha hai... aap mujhe ek mouka dijiyee... mein yaha se gayab hojayoonga... phir wapas aaunga bhi nahi... please... meri taraf aayiye mat... (he pleads monkey 😆😆)

Monkey stops n starts thinking... it looks at akshara...

Akshara: dekhiye bandar ji.. aap bhi ek aurath hai... (female monkey)

Naitik: aapko kaise pata hai ki yeh female monkey hai??? 😲

Akshara: aap dekha nahi... yeh bandar naa us choti si bankar ki juen(lice) nikal rahe hai... girls hi yeh kaam karte hai na??? 😎😃

Naitik: arrey waah... kya talent hai... 👏... mujhe abhi tak nahi pata ki aap ithni intelligent hai...

Akshara: aap dheere dheere samajh jayegi naitik... 😎

Naitik (slowly): ab aur kya talent dekhna padega mujhe??? ek eating ki talent ki vaje se mein is halat mein hu... madam ki aur talent bahar aayenge toh pata nahi mera kya hoga... 😛(😆😆)

Akshara: please bandar ji... ek aurath hi doosre aurath ko samajh sakte hai naa.. please mere pati ko chod dijiyee...

Monkey looks at both pleading akshara n scaring naitik... finally thinks and leaves frm der with her chota monkey...

Naitik: Thank god... bach gaya...

Akshara: ab dariye mat... jaldi neeche aayiye...

Naitik: bandar chala gaya naa... vaise bhi mein yaha tak aa chuka hu... aapko aamle todke le aaunga... do minute...

He tries to collect good aamlas for akshara which r little bit mixture of yellow n green in color.. he picks one one aamla for her n keeps in his pocket.. akshara sees him very excitingly frm down.. naitik collects a big bunch of aamla n finally gets down.. akshara is very exited to eat them.. so she runs towards him to take them.. naitik takes all the aamlas from his pockets n keep it in the hands for akshara.. akshara eats them soo lovingly.. naitik loves to see her eating like a kid..

Akshara: thanku so much naitik.. I love u.. yeh kithnaa khatta hai.. aap bhi khayiye naa.. (she brings one aamla near his mouth)..

Naitik: mujhe khatta khane ka ithne bhi shouk nahi hai.. phir bhi aap khila rahi naa.. toh mein ise khaleta hu.. (he eats one)

Akshara: aapko nahi chahiye toh yeh sab mein hi khaloongi.. bahut ache hai..

Naitik: khayiye.. khayiyee.. aapko is tarah dekhne ke baad pedh chadne ka saara takaan door hagaya.. aapko khatta ithni pasand hai??

Akshara: haa naitik.. mujhe khatta pasand hai.. lekin uthna nahi jithna aaj hai.. pata nahi kyu aamle ko dekhne ke baad mein rukh hi nahi paayi..

She starts eating der itself...

Naitik: aap jaldi chaliye... kahi woh bandariye wapas naa aajayee...

Akshara: aap bahut dar gaye the na??? 😆😆😆

Naitik: aapki vaje se mein mushkil mein pada... aur aap has rahe hai??? 😡😡

Akshara: mein bhi ghabaragayi... lekin ab aapka dara hua chahra yaad kare toh meri hasi ruk hi nahi paa rahi hai... 😆😆😆

Naitik: akshara... 😡

Akshara laughs moree... 😆😆😆

Akshara: aapka ab yeh chehra bhi mujhe bahut hasi aa rahi hai😆😆... aap naa... upar kithni ghabargaya thaa...😆😆 aur ab aapka chehra... 😆😆... mujhe naa, makkan chori karte vakth pakada hua kanhaji ka chehra yaad aa raha hai... 😆😆

Naitik: akshara... aur hasiye toh... acha nahi rahega... 😡

Akshara: munnaa... 😆😆

Naitik: akshara... 😡

Akshara: munna... munna... munnaa... 😆😆.. (she immediately runs frm der n sits in the car laughing n eating aamla)...

Naitik makes his naughty anger face n sits in the car n starts driving silently... Akshara is still laughing... she sees his face n laughss... naitik gets annoyed... he looks at her angirily... (though he is not actually angry but I'm not getting dat exact word... I can say it as something like naughty anger... in telugu we call "udukubothutanam")... but he too laughs seeing akshara laughing... 😆😆😆

Naitik: waise aap bhi kuch kam nahi... wah kya pehenchan liya ki woh bandar aurath hai... 😆😆

Akshara: aap mujhe tease kar rahe hai naa... khair koyi baat nahi...

both laughss... 😆😆

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1 more week later... export of jewellers frm india to switzerland becomes late... n so they need to stay 1 more week in switzerland... in this one week akshara is feeling littlebit of uneasyness, little dizzyness n her feeling to eat katta has been increased...

Akshara: kya hua mujhe??😕 khatta khane ka ithna man kar rahi hai.. aur upar se yeh chakkar.. kahi.. 😕

she takes out the calendar n then starts thinking..she has little bit of happyness.. little bit of confusion.. little bit of tension n worry.. she has mixed feelings

Akshara: lagta hai wahi hai.. doctor ko dikhana acha rahegaa.. lekin is baar mein akeli nahi naitik ke saat jaaungaa.. nai nai... agar aisa kuch nahi toh mere saat saat naitik bhi disappoint hojayegaa.. mein akele jaana hi theek rahegaa... lekin mujhe yaha kuch pata bhi nahi hai...

she immediately calls payal n with help of her she takes appointment frm doctor n meets d doctor.. she gets the pregnancy test to be done..

doctor: congratulations.. u r going to become mother ..😃

Akshara: true??? (she is soo happy that she is gifted with the child again.. her eyes r filled with tears..) thanku so much doctor.. I'm sooo happpyyy..

Doctor: u r welcome mrs.singhania.. 😃

suddenly akshara remembers abt her mis carriage..

Akshara: doctor... (she explains doctor abt her previous miscarriage...)

Doctor: do u have the reports of ur previous pregnancy?? (Akshara gives her the reports n doctor examines them)

Doctor: akshara.. dont worry.. it happened one time... but dont think that it happens the same again n again... this time ur pregnancy is very normal n also the baby is very safe inside... n dont worry that something happens this time also... be positive n think positive... everything will be alright... eat well... sleep well n always be happy n cool... u n ur child will be safe... 😃

akshara gets little bit confidence after hearing this.. she gets out of doctors cabin..

Akshara: ab mein yeh good news jaldi naitik ko dena hai..(she takes out d cell phone).. nai.. aise nai.. jab mein good news doongi tab mein unke chehra dekhna hai.. isiliye mein woh aane tak intazaar karna theek rahegaa..😳

She comes home and starts waiting for naitik... Its already aftrnoon... Naitik is still in the ofc... John n chris calls naitik to their cabin...

John: welcome naitik.. have ur seat..

Naitik: Thanku... 😃

Chris: we r very happy n satisfied with our project... u really made an excellent designs for our company... we got very good response frm our customers... we r so happy with ur work...😃

Naitik: thanku so much... nice to know that u r happy with out work... 😃

John: n der is one more reason to call u here...

Naitik: whats dat?? 😕

John: we would like to extend our deal with u... we need some more designs n jewellery frm u... we r thinking to extend our business with making more diamond jewellery like rings, n simple sets... what do u say???

Naitik: woww... dats a wonderful idea... 😃

Chris: so... we would like to give this project also for u... we know u only can do it well...

Naitik: Thanku for u confidence...

Chris: so u need to stay here for some more months till this new projects complete...

Naitik: sorry... we can do this project for u... but we can't stay here more... its already more dan 3 months since we came here.. can't stay away frm our home more...

John: but u did it before for us right??

Naitik: yes... we did, as that is our new project outside india n as u dont know abt our work... so we accepted for that... but now u know our work... I can show u n send u the designs frm india...

John remembers how naitik didn't compromise to give the set he made to Jessi... so they decide to agree for the naitik's deal...

John: ok Mr. Naitik... we rconfident on u n on ur work... u can do it frm india.. no problem... 😃

Naitik: Thanku John... 😃

Naitik is very happy to get another foreign deal... Here akshara is waiting for him... she calls naitik... as still naitik is in the meeting his fone is switched off.. Naitik keeps on discussing abt the new project till the evng n finally comes home at 7... Akshara immediately comes down hearing the car sound... Akshara opens the door happily... she want to burst out the good news as soon as possible to naitik... Naitik is also happy to get the new contract..

Akshara: naitik... mein aapse kuch baat karni hai... 😳

Naitik: mujhe aapko ek good news dena hai... 😃

Akshara: good news??? 😲😕 (thinking: naitik ko kaise pata chal gaya... mein abhi tak kisi ko bataya nahi)

Naitik: haa akshara... bahut bada good news hai...

Akshara: kya hai woh good news??? 😕

Naitik: akshara... hume ek aur deal bhi mil gaya... aur hum aaramse woh kaam india se kar sakte hai... hamara company ka pehla export order success hai aur hame doosra bhi mila.. isiliyee mein bahut khush hu... 😃

Akshara: woww naitik... congratulationsss... mein bhi bahut khush hu...

Naitik: Thanku...

Akshara (blushing): aur naitik... mujhe aapko ek good... (naitik stops)

Naitik: akshara... mujhe naa bahut bhook lag rahi hai... mujhe jaldi khana parosdijiye naa...

Akshara: theek hai... aap fresh hokar aajayiye... mein khana laga deti hu... (she thinks to tell the good news aftr having dinner)

Both completes the dinner... Akshara is abt to say the good news again... but naitik gets a call... Its frm the designer frm india... Naitik goes to his room talking on the fone... akshara also follows him... Naitik keeps on talking to the designer abt the new project n the designs... akshara is waiting for him to complete the call.. but the call continues for the long time... akshara can't wait anymore...

Akshara: naitik... aur kithni dher baat karenge?? jaldi aajayiye naa... mein aapka kab se wait kar rahi hu... aapko kuch batani hai.. 😳

naitik feels happy thinking other thing... 😳

Naitik (thinking): lagta hai aaj madam bahut achi mood me hai.. mujhe jaldi jaana hai..😳

He says to the designer dat he will talk next day n keeps the fone off... Naitik comes near her who is standing near the window.. he hugs her frm back...

Naitik: dekhiyee.. aap bulaya.. aur mein turanth aapke saamne khade hu.. 😃(she gets out herself frm naitik n turns towards him)

Akshara: mein aapkeliye kab se intazaar kar rahi hu.. aap hai ki woh designer se bekar ki baate karne baith gaye hai..

Naitik: haa aapke alawa sab kuch bekar hai... 😳 mujhe todi na pata hai ki aap mera intazaar kar rahi hai.. acha chodiyee.. ab hume zyada time waste nahi karni hai..(he drags her towards him)..😳

Akshara: Naitik.. thoda sambhalke.. lag jaaye toh.. (she keeps her hands near her stomach)..

Naitik is confused..

Naitik: akshara.. kya hua??? kyu lag jayegi??😕

Akshara: kyu ki.. (she is feeling shy but naitik mis understands as some other thing)

Naitik: acha.. ab meri akshara aur komal ban gayi hai.. theek hai madam.. 😳

he comes near her n looks into her eyes.. Akshara understands what naitik is trying.. she immediately moves back n turns d other side..

Akshara: naitik.. abhi yeh sab nahi hoga..😳

Naitik: matlab (he is confused..)😕

Akshara: matlab yeh hai ki..

she turns towards naitik.. catches her stomach n looks down blushingly.. first naitik doesn't understand what akshara is trying to say.. but then he understands finally..

Naitik: akshara.. sach????😲

Akshara nods saying yes..

Naitik: really??? I'm so happy.. aur aap ithna bada good news ithne dher se keh rahi hai.. 😃🥳🥳😍

Akshara: mujhe aaj hi pata chala.. 😳

Naitik: toh mujhe subah hi bata deti.. mein ithni khush hu ki kya batau.. (akshara is so happy seeing the happiness in naitik's eyes..)😃

He lifts akshara n turns her round n round in the happiness.. 🥳🥳

Akshara: naitik.. chodiye mujhee.. mein bachi todi naa hu.. (naitik doesn't stop).. naitik.. mujhe chakkar aa rahe hai... chodiyee..

He finally places her on the bed..

Naitik: akshara ab hum celebrate karna chahiye🥳.. pehle mein aapko meetha khilaoongaa.. yahi rukhiye..

He immediately goes into kitchen n he searches in the shelves for sweets.. but he couldn't find anything.. so he takes the sugar dabba n comes to their room.. he feeds akshara a spoon of sugar.. akshara also feeds him back.. Both hug each other n both r happy.. suddenly akshara's face gets tensed.. naitik understands y she is like that..

Naitik: akshara.. is baar kuch nahi hogaa.. mein aap dono ka khyal rakoonga.. aap chinta mat kariye.. aap is tarah chinta karna hamara bacha keliye theek nahi hai.. aap bas muskiraati rahiye.. aur hamara bacha bhi appke peth me khush rahega.. (he gently touches her stomach)..

Akshara is little bit relieved now..

Naitik: akshara yeh dekhiye.. mein aapkeliye kya laaya hu..

Akshara: wooww.. aam ki achaar.. 😳

Naitik: haa aapko khatta khane ka man kar rahe hai na.. isiliye mein kitchen se yeh laaya hu.. aap ek hafte se keh rahi the ki aapko khatta khane ka man kar rahi hai.. phir bhi mein budhu hu.. abhi tak samajh nahi payaa..😛

Akshara: aap kya.. mujhe bhi aaj tak samajh me nahi aaya..😳

Naitik: haa hum dono budhu hai.. aap no 1 budhu hai aur mein no 2..

Both laughss..😆😆😆

Ps: Sorry if I have made u feel bored with the longer and repeated version of OS... But if u liked it please do hit the like button and let me know ur comments on my ff...

Edited by saru.g - 13 years ago

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pvlaks

@pvlaks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#323

Hai saru wish u a very happy and prosperous new year 2012 😃😃

at last yehan comment dene keliye me first ho gayi😃 🥳

kya bathaoon saru 😳😳😍😍😍 i swear story already maaloom hai aisa laga hi nahi 😃👏 uthna acha se story ko aage leke gayi ho👏 fantastic update...starting scene se lekar end tak 😃😳😃😳😃😳 yehi haal tha😃
ped pe chadke amla thodke lana is 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 such mein hassi ruka nahi...dartha bhi hai lekin akshi ko nirash bhi nahi karna chahtha hai😳 chooo chwweett hubby😳😍 John ko munna ki nature ache se malom pada hai 😆 isiliye bechara maan bhigaye kaam india mein se hikarne ko😆i liked the way akshi expressed the gd news to munna😳😳 a very beautiful update saru 😳👏 now continue sooon...waiting for the comng parts very eagerly😳

Edited by pvlaks - 13 years ago

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Rachana

@Rachu.m

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

hey saru...
sory i am veryyy late... neku telsu kada net panicheyatledu ani so commenting through mobl...
so comment will be very small really very sory... nd coming to the part naku baga nachindi... nd the monkey thing 🤣 ma collz lo kuda chala monkey unai first lo bayam vesedi ippudu alavatu ipoindi... 😉 nd i felt sad that valu India ke vastunaru nd g3 valane asalu vadili petadu ani but u told me next emi avtundo i am happy... 😃
totally lovely part... 👏 thanks for pm..
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Edited by Rachana_naksh_ - 13 years ago

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Stuti

@-Stutz-

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: sejal719
SARUUU

awesome awesome update... so i read this after a long time so sry for the last comment i was so busy that i didnt get time to read lol... but now that i read it im soo happy...

Jessie is out of the pic yayaya... when she said love me i was like eww you creep get a life... i was like ugh what a disgusting girl this Jessie is but.. naitiks response was very very special and awesome.. i was floored and so the hot guys you find must be smart like him..

i loved the dance part lol.. its no naksh to get lost within each other and not know what is happening.. love them... awesome part plz write more soon cant wait to read more...

and will see you again in the morning... so i did re read the thing you told me to re read and what i have decided i will tell you when we talk once again.. i think we will be able to finish what we started by tomorrow if we keep up the good work...

oh and i have some other ideas as well so we can talk bout that and then all is well...

back to ur ff loved the part awesome and very cute.. and now since im hungry im going to go eat chocolate and find ice cream in my house as well :D...

bye love you<3

@pink.. whats cooking🤓

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Arooj

@Aru.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#326

Saru di🤗

as usual sry for late cmmt😳

Beautiful part with alot of fun and naksh romance..😳😃.

And good news..😍

Wo monkey wala part was so funny😆

Loved it ...❤️ thanx for pm and awesome part..

Edited by --ARooJ-- - 13 years ago

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Bhootni

@Mahi_Bhardwaj

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Posted: 13 years ago

#327

nice part saru di👏
monkey wala part awsum tha and akshara ka naitik ko munna keh kar tease karna was to gud
superb part
thanks for the pm

Edited by hinan.1fan_mahi - 13 years ago

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preksha

@pree4ru

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Posted: 13 years ago

#328

wow awesome saru :)) waise swizterland mein bhi amle ka ped hota hai kya lolzzz and again romance hmmm kitne smp baba imagine karna ka tym hai nahi tabhi comments mein woh feel nahi araha lolzzz

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sona_naksh

@sona_naksh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#329

wowww saru...i just loved it...ff start hote hi naksh romance n den piya bawri awww...den akshara's demand 4 amla n d way she makes naitik 2 get up on d tree by reminding him of d balcony scene...u made me walk down d memory lane...deir dialogues wid monkey hilarious...den akshara's reaction n tension after knowing abt her pregnancy n her excitement 2 tel naitik abt it...naitik getting new deal good growing businessman...n after dat akshara telling naitik n his reaction...amazing it was...n d best part is as usual naksh's luv 4 each other...
Thanx 4 d pm...
Update next part soon...

Edited by sona_naksh - 13 years ago

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Shruthi

@shruthi.sweety

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Posted: 13 years ago

#330

Superb n romantic update saru👏❤️ loved it.u included your os part here n extended it,very nice👍🏼.naitik clinmbing phed for akshi n naksh convo with bhandar was very hilarious n nic idea.⭐️.
hope after naksh go back to india,it will be naksh filled update rather than pura family drama.😃.
hope u mak this pregnancy track very interesting,we get to read all those which we didn't get to watch in the show.waiting eagerly for next update.pls continue soon...