My First FF-In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein- Pt12 @ Pg134 - Page 15

Haii saru awesome update 👏 loved each and every line...loved naksh conversation...chooo chweeet😳arey tume kya jarurat thi uss papita se ideas lene ki...tum bhi na saru...naitik ko ideas khud lene keliye bolo...samjhi😛well written and keep it up...continue soon

Firstly thanx for such a long part.. When i was reading i didnt even realise this part is so long.. In fact I was feeling ye khatam kyu hua?? 😔 It was that interesting.. 😳
Akshara wearing that pink sari is damn romantic for me.. I wanna see naitiks reaction now.. 😍
and u updating next part on Sat.. Aww thats even better.. I wl b w8ng for it.. 😳
and one more thing if u r not comfortable hard core hindi use thoda bahut english.. That would b ok.. 😛

Originally posted by: pvlaks

Haii saru awesome update 👏 loved each and every line...loved naksh conversation...chooo chweeet😳arey tume kya jarurat thi uss papita se ideas lene ki...tum bhi na saru...naitik ko ideas khud lene keliye bolo...samjhi😛well written and keep it up...continue soon

lakshmi di... kya karu... I want this surprise to be a different one that naitik himself doesn't know that akshara likes that... varsha only says what akshara likes... she won't give any idea on how to give surprise... naitik himself does it... thanks for liking di...

Originally posted by: pari1508

Firstly thanx for such a long part.. When i was reading i didnt even realise this part is so long.. In fact I was feeling ye khatam kyu hua?? 😔 It was that interesting.. 😳
Akshara wearing that pink sari is damn romantic for me.. I wanna see naitiks reaction now.. 😍
and u updating next part on Sat.. Aww thats even better.. I wl b w8ng for it.. 😳
and one more thing if u r not comfortable hard core hindi use thoda bahut english.. That would b ok.. 😛

hii pari... I'm glad that u liked reading such a long part... I like to use hindi as I can learn myself too... but I'm using hindi only while writing dialogues... for explanation I'm using english only... so mixing both... 😃

Originally posted by: _naksh_

😍haiiiyyy...what do i say..too too tooo too too good,absolutely love it,as i was getting closer top the end i was like NAHI..LOL...this is very bad..now after reading the surprise article,and this part..im totally out of this world..im all in naksh land...im feeling too crazy..now im besabri waiting for Saturday...and my list continues...ab yaar ye saturday kab ayega...😃

already this part is too long... n the nxt part is also long... so couldn't include that here... u can see it on saturday... I hope u like that part too... 😃

Originally posted by: anveshasharma

wow di,it was just an amazing part.u have raised our eagerness to read d next update.luvd d letter which akshi wrote,naitik's reactions on it n his act of reading her other letters.cont soon di n thanx 4 d pm...

woww anvi... I thought u wont come online because u r busy... but I'm so happy that u read this n commented too... so sweet of u... come soon dear...

wooow😛😛😛
good imagination...
i think the next part will be a treat for us😉...😛😛😛

wow saru u r so mch on tym..👏👏👏👏
n ur writin is simply gr8888👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️,,,,,,,,,,loved it❤️❤️
naksh fone convo,,,,,naitik readin all previous letters,,,akshara preparin suprise fr natik n natik also preparin suprise fr their anniversary each n every thing is simply awesum👏👏👏👏👏
n thank god in ur ff we will be seeing naksh aniversary😍😍,,,in the show no hope fr that...
waitin so mch fr ur nxt part,,,,,,update it soon😉,,,,n thanks fr ur pm...😃

hey aastha... how r u?? how is ur health? still fever is there???

Originally posted by: saru.g

hey aastha... how r u?? how is ur health? still fever is there???

hey saru,,,,,,,i m feelin mch better nw😃,,,,no fever bt feelin drowsy...