My First FF-In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein- Pt12 @ Pg134 - Page 13

sorry for commenting late.😭...two days out of station.😭...came just now😃...

Originally posted by: nivedha_123

sorry for commenting late.😭...two days out of station.😭...came just now😃...

ur first part isss simply superb..😃😃...loved every line of it😳😳😳...pls cont.soon👏😊

hii niveditha... no need for sorry dear... I am so glad that u liked it😊... I'll continue soon...

Part 2

Naitik in ofc: Naitik eagerly opens the letter and is shocked reading the first line of the letter. He expected some thing and he is finding some other thing in the letter. He reads out the first line again.

"Naitik aaj aap please ghar jaldi math aayiye...".

Naithik(thinks): I thought she asks me to come home soon but she is telling to come late.😕... Ok lets read the remaining.

He starts reading the remaining letter... his shocked face is slowly turning to a smiling face😊. The letter is as following...

"Naitik aap aaj please jaldi math aayiyee... yeh padkar aap hairan hogaye honge... lekin aap ne sahi pad rahe hai... mein keh rahi hu ki aaj aap ofc se jaldi math aayiye... . Naitik... mujhe patha hai kayi dino se mein aap par dhyan nahi de rahi hu... woh raat bhi maine aapko bahuth disappoint kiya hai na... lekin aapne kuch nahi kaha... mein phir se normal hone keliye bahuth samay diya hai... itne dino tak aapne mujhe bahuth support kiya hai... har kaam me aapne meri madat ki hai... aap mujhe achi tarah se samajhthe hai naitik... aapki mein jithni tareef karu uthni kam hai... aapne mere liye aaj tak bahuth kuch kiye hai' isliye mein bhi aap ke liye kuch karna chahthi hu' aur mein bahuth khush hu ki aaj sabhi gharvaalon ne jaipur ja rahe hai... yeh samay bhi mera saath de raha hai' mein aap keliye kuch surprise plan kar rahi hu... sab gharwaale jaane tak mein kuch nahi kar sakthi' isliye mujhe gharwaalon jaane ke baad thoda samay chahiye taaki mein kuch kar saku' toh kya aap please aaj koyi na koyi bahana banake ofc mein hi thodi dher rukiye... bauji aur daddaji ke saath mat aayiye... sabhi gharwaalon jaane ke baad mein aapko phone karthi hu... uske bad turant aayiye... . Mein aapka inthazaar karoongi....

I love u Naitik... ❤️❤️❤️

Aapki akshara❤️... "

Naitik was so happy after reading the letter n immediately takes his cell fone. He finds already akshara had called him many times. So he calls her. Akshi immediately lifts the call as she is already waiting for the call.

Akshara: Hello naitik... aap kaha hai... aap mera phone kyu nahi utha rahe hai... mein kitni ghabragayi ki kya bathauu...

Naitik: Akshara... kyu aap ithna pareshaan hai... kya hua?? Sab theek hai na??

Akshara: kya theek hai naitik... maine aapke dabba mein ek letter rakha tha... aur mujhe laga ki woh letter padhne ke baadh aap mujhe zaroor phone karoge... aap ne phone hi nahi kiya... aur mera phone bhi nahi uthaya... pata nahi mein woh letter sahi dabba mein rak di yaa nahi... isliye mein dopeher se bahuth pareshan hu naitik'.

Naitik: oh... sorry akshara... mein abhi tak meeting mein bahuth busy hu... phone silent pe rakha tha... isliye meine aapke calls nahi dekhe.... Actually woh letter... (when he is about to say about the letter he thinks why not I make akshara more tensed... he gives a naughty look n starts talking 😉)

Naitik: aap kis letter ki baath kar rahe hai...

Akshara: kis letter??? Iska matlab aap ne woh letter nahi dekha??? Maine aapke dabba mein rakha tha naitik' please achche se dekhiye naa'

Naitik: akshara... aap kis letter ke baare me baat kar rahe hai mujhe samajh nahi aa raha hai... mein already mera dabba open kar ke khana kha raha hu... yaha koyi letter nahi hai... bas bendi ki sabji hai... aapne bahuth achchi sabzi banayi hai akshara... it is so yummy....😆😆 (he laughs but controlling so that akshara can't guess)

Akshara: naitik... woh bendi ki sabji ko chodiye... mere letter ke baare mein batayiye naa... please...

Naitik: mein keh raha hu naa nahi... yaha koyi letter vetter nahi hai'.

Akshara: hey bhagwan... kahi mein woh letter daddaji ki dabba mein nahi rakhi na??

Naitik: rakha bhi toh kya hoga... usme kya hogi??? Vahi aap theek se khana khaa lijiye... jaldi ghar aayiye... yahi na... yehi toh roj aap mujhe ofc jaate vakt kehte hai na... phir letter likhne ki kya zaroorat thi?? Vaise bhi daddaji padhenge toh kya hoga?? Usme kya hai??

Akshara: naitik... us letter mein woh nahi tha... kuch aur tha....

Naitik: kuch aur?? Kya hai??? Bathayiye naa...

Akshara: naitik woh meine hum dono ke baare mein likha tha... daddaji ne dekhliya toh kya sochenge... arey usmein toh meine yeh likha tha ki... (she stops)

Naitik: acha bateyengi nahi toh chod lijiye... Mein phone raktha hu... mujhe yeh bendi ki sabji bahuth pasand aayi... Mein yeh khaletha hu... 😆😆(again naitik controls to stop the laugh)

Akshara: yeh kya naitik mein itni pareshaan hu aur aap bendi ki sabji leke baith gaye??

Naitik can't stop lauging any more... N laughs loudly😆😆😆... first akshara couldn't understand y he is laughing n later understands that he is pulling her leg...

Akshara: acha ji... toh aap meri tang kheech rahe hai... aap bhi naa naitik' mein kithna ghabarayagayi... chaliyee aapne padh liya naa... toh mere phone karne ke baadh turunth ghar aanaa... teek hai...

Naitik: aap kahe toh mein aap keliye abhi bhi ghar aa saktha hu... aajauuu?? Mujhe mera surprise abhi lena hai...

Akshara: u naughty... abhi nahi shaam ko dedoongi... she gives a kiss n says I love u naitik😳...

Naitik: love u too n kisses back😳...

Both keep the phone...

Just then dj enters naitik cabin. He praises Naitik for doing well in the meeting n he says they may get this project within 2 days and asks naitik to look after this carefully as they r foreign clients n if they gets this deal done they can improve their business lot. Naitik says not to worry n he'll look after it. Dj insists naitik to come to home along with him n rajbanna. Naitik says he is preparing some designs for another client n he has some work. So dj n rajbanna leaves.

Naitik opens his desk and takes all the previous letters written by akshi one during their wedding, another one when he is angry with akshara n another one when akshi left the house. He starts reading all of them again

Akshara (thinking): mujhe patha hai... naitik zaroor hamari wedding anniversary bhool gaye honge... pichle saal bhi mera bday bhool gaye the' aur is saal hamara anniversary... chalo koyi baath nahi hai' mujhe yaad hai na... kal hamari wedding anniversary ache se naitik ke saath manauungi... aur gharwale bhi nahi hai' she smiles n starts preparing cake...

@Singhanias: Dj n RB arrives. Gayatri n BM are ready packing their things. They had some nashta. Gayatri says akshara to take care of munna n everything and then all of them leaves for Jaipur. Akshara immediately goes to kitchen n prepares all the food which naitik likes with the help of gulabo n maharajji and then she gives chutti for both gulabo n maharajji as everyoneis left n there is no much work. She asks them to go home n come tomorrow. They agree n leave. Akshara immediately decorates the whole house with candles and flowers as she did during her suhaag raath.

Inbetween Naitik reads all the letters n feels he is so lucky to have akshara in his life without whom he can't even think how his life would be... he is lost in akshara's memories... remembering their sweet moments... Their first meeting' their first hug at college... their first kiss' their engagement... how he has scolded akshara considering rituraj... their wedding... n then akshara's clearing his doubts on their SR, then kitchen romance... n then their actual SR with pink saree... Naitik saying akshara to leave home n their patch up on holi... he has tears n a smile both on his face thinking all these...

just then his fone rings... Its akshara on the other side... She tells him to come home soon n his surprise ready. Naitik keeps the fone n see's akshara's photo on his laptop n says... "aap ne socha hoga ki mujhe hamari anniversary yaad nahi hai... but mujhe yaad hai... mein kaise bhool sakta hu... lekin mujhe yeh samajh nai aa raha ki mein aapko kaise surprise du' or kya ko gift karu' candle light dinner' ring' pendants' saree' jewellery'. Surprise party'. Sab already kar chuke hai' mein naya kya karu???" he thinks n he gets an idea n calls varsha... to know what akshara likes that he doesn't know... she tells the same things which Naitik also knows... but naitik keeps on asking to think more... finally she remembers one thing n says to him.

After talking to varsha he is so happy because he got good idea on how to plan their wedding anniversary now... he immediately calls an event manager n plans everything...

In the mean while@naksh room: Akshara is unable to decide what to wear' she removes all her sarees n keep on her n looked into the mirror one by one. She is unable to decide the saree. She once again looked the room. It looks the same as it looked during her SR. She remembers that pink saree which she wore during their SR. She thinks it will be good if she wears it so that they can remember their previous days. She immediately takes that saree and gets ready. She looks the same as she was during her SR. she blushes seeing herself in the mirror. Just then the bell rings. Akshara happily runs from her room to open the door.

Precap: Ithna kuch padne ke baad precap ki zaroorath hai kya???... I know that u'll know what will be there in the nxt part... 😳

PS: Sorry guys couldn't write the romantic part in this part as that part was so long... I'll post it on this saturday... n I hope u like this part n will be waiting for ur comments n suggestions too so that I can improve in nxt part...

res!!!!
spamming error sucks
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wowww di... i love ur imagination... and i love ur writing...
and i love the way u write 'h' wer u r not supposed to and vice versa...
loved the part di.. it was woww.w... i m waiting for the next update!!! i m sure everybody is!

wow wow saru nice part i have no words to describe yaar tum cv banjaona yaar yeh rishta ki

finally updated 2nd part... it took long time...

res :)

very nice update

Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

res!!!!
spamming error sucks
-EDITED-
wowww di... i love ur imagination... and i love ur writing...
and i love the way u write 'h' wer u r not supposed to and vice versa...
loved the part di.. it was woww.w... i m waiting for the next update!!! i m sure everybody is!

haaa chotu... ofcourse I'm lucky u r there for correcting my hindi mistakes... or else my ff would have became a comedy show... 😆😆... I'm glad u liked it dear...

Originally posted by: fazeel

wow wow saru nice part i have no words to describe yaar tum cv banjaona yaar yeh rishta ki

wow like the phone conversation most yaar and letter also yaar abhi kya i like each line of your ff

tum really cv ho yaar percap be nahi diya aur hum sab bhaut wait kari tha yaar

really saru i loved it yaar you fab fab job👏 and bing hug to u🤗

hey nasreen🤗... I'm glad u liked it... n next part is to guess yaar... akshi said surprise n was ready in her SR pink saree... so can't guess what will be nxt part??? 😳...