My First FF-In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein- Pt12 @ Pg134 - Page 14

Originally posted by: saru.g

haaa chotu... ofcourse I'm lucky u r there for correcting my hindi mistakes... or else my ff would have became a comedy show... 😆😆... I'm glad u liked it dear...

Originally posted by: sejal719

res :)

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1st of all awesome part loved it and i cant wait for the next part

the letter was soo cute awwie poor akkshi was so tensed 😆 but it would of been funny if the letter went in dadajis lunch bag 🤣 i can just picture the look on his face 🤣 thats so funny

anyways loved the part thnx for the pm cant wait for the next part

and u couldnt include a preview cause the part was already long enough 😲 wow we have a diff meaning of long parts 😆

but still awesome part 🤗

Originally posted by: saman.17

gud update saru...😛 bahut hi long part update kiya padne me bahut mazaa aaya ab agle part ka bahut besabri se intezaar rahega...😳thanks for the pm & cont soon...😃

Originally posted by: saru.g

seju... 🤗... I'm so happy that u liked this part... haa getting the letter in dj's hands would have been more funny... I didn't thought of it... haa for me it is really a longer longer part... I dont know it will this much longer untill I pasted the content here... hope my nxt part will also be longer one...

Originally posted by: Naz_Angel

very nice update

I love u Naitik... ❤️❤️❤️

Aapki akshara❤️... "😍

Originally posted by: Hinakshara

Superb part saru di.luvd its each nd every line.wo chahe akshi's letter ho ya naksh's phone convo.u written beautifully di.der4 i enjoyed it.thanks 4 d longer part.i luv 2 read longer parts.ab ye sat kab ayegi,w8ing 4 ur nxt part di.thanks 4 d pm.