My First FF-In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein- Pt12 @ Pg134

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Credit for the banner goes to stuti...

Hello guys... I am here with my first Fan Faction "In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein"... A special thanks for my chotu (stuti) for suggesting a wonderful name n helping me in writing this ff as I'm very poor in hindi... I'm not a writer... but I can imagine good... so started this ff based on my imaginative skills. Thanks for my friends in encouraging me a lot in writing this ff... Hope you guys like it...


Introduction: All the characters and their characterizations in my fan fiction are same as YRKKH... My story starts from the current story of YRKKH... but I'm fast forwarding it for one month. In this month naitik helps her a lot for akshara for coming out from MC shock... with naitik's support n in marriage preparations she almost out of that shock... My FF starts with the day of rashmi marriage. Rashmi's marriage happens n she goes to her sasural... n my first part starts with naksh in their room after the tiresome day...


I'll post my first part soon... Hope u guys like my ff and post ur valuable comments and suggestions so that I can improve myself in writing...


Link for 2nd Thread of the FF...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/yeh-rishta-kya-kehlata-hai/1753210/my-first-ff-in-lamhon-ke-daaman-mein-pt25-pg140

Link for 3rd Thread of the FF

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/yeh-rishta-kya-kehlata-hai/2307940/ff-in-lamhon-ke-daaman-mein-updated-part29-pg58

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Index:

Part 1 - Page 8
Part 2 - Page 17
Part 3 - Page 22
Part 4 - Page 35
Part 5 - Page 44
Part 6 - Page 53
Part 7 - Page 62
Part 8 - Page 80
Part 9 - Page 90
Part 10 - Page 98
Part 11 - Page 116
Part 12 - Page 134


Link for 2nd Thread of the FF...

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/yeh-rishta-kya-kehlata-hai/1753210/my-first-ff-in-lamhon-ke-daaman-mein-pt25-pg140


anvi res: 38,48,71,87, 90,103, 125... (waiting for u anvi🤗... get well soon n come back soon... we miss u...)
Edited by saru.g - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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res!
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saru di🤗
taking seju ishtile haan.,.. seju read this haan!

dear ss...😉
im sooo glad to have been invoolved in this ff... i feel like it is a ff wich sooo special to me.. (just like mine)...
and di.. u started wid thank yous😭 2 days no talking😭😭
talking bout the ff...

NOTE TO ALL READERS...
the ff is gonna b naksheela,.. its gonna b awesome... u'll miss loads if u dnt read it!!

back to ss...
di loved it loved it loved it... waiting for part 1...
abhi mein kya likhu? mujhe kuch soojh nai raha hai...

haan.. suggestion.. di... font color aur font style change karo na😆😆😆
lolzzz...

aap update karo toh ill comment more...

love,
ur chotu


Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow saru you doing ff kal tum nay kaha socha na bolakay anyways

introduction was nice and waiting for first part and pm me yaar
Edited by fazeel - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: fazeel

wow saru you doing ff kal tum nay kaha socha na bolakay anyways

introduction was nice and waiting for first part and pm me yaar


haa nasreen... yesterday I was still thinking to do it or not... but today I'm like ok lets start n see... so started... thanks for liking it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i don't know di ki kaha se shuru karu,first of all,want to appreciate ur beauttiful banner,stuts n u have really worked hard on it n d result is in front of us di,its just .how can u both b so creative?well,cuming to ur ff,d beginning is just superb di,accha kiya jo rashmi ki shaadi rafa dafa kar di,ab bas jaldi se apka 1st part update karo,i m craving to read ur ff.cont soon di n thanx 4 d pm...n haa,longer parts update karna,pls...



Edited by anveshasharma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@chotu: so sweet of u for a long comment... hope u like my parts too... anyhow I'll show u the nxt part soon n post it also soon... what font would u like to see?? suggest me naa... n haa from now no thanks... lol...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: saru.g

@chotu: so sweet of for a long comment... hope u like my parts too... anyhow I'll show u the nxt part soon n post it also soon... what font would u like to see?? suggest me naa... n haa from now no thanks... lol...

ss... achca hai.. trp increase ho rahe hai😆😆 seju hoti toh abhi tak seedha 4th page! georgia is gud...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

ss... achca hai.. trp increase ho rahe hai😆😆 seju hoti toh abhi tak seedha 4th page! georgia is gud...

wow!aaj kal toh ffs main bhi tough trp competition chal raha hai,good going guys😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

ss... achca hai.. trp increase ho rahe hai😆😆 seju hoti toh abhi tak seedha 4th page! georgia is gud...


haa it would have been good if seju is der... I sent her pm... hope she once come during night n checks it... n haa I'll change the font...

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