My First FF-In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein- Pt12 @ Pg134 - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow nice part saru...really liked it...very good...šŸ‘
Keep it up...waiting for saturday...Thanks for pm...😊
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great job saru nice part thanks for the pm
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nice part..😊...loved each and every linešŸ‘šŸ‘...eagerly waiting for the next part...šŸ˜šŸ˜³..
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Part 3

Akshara is ready. She is looking so beautiful. She blushes seeing herself in the mirror. Just then the bill rings. Akshara happily runs n get down the steps fast n opens the door. Naitik is ready with a bunch of red roses n with a cute smile. He sees akshara in the same saree of their SR n remains looking at her. Akshara sees to the left n right side of naitik to confirm if anyone is there... naitik comes out of his looks.

Naitik: akshara aap kya dekh rahi hai??

Akshara: kuch nahi naitik... mein yeh dekh rahi hu ki kahi is baar bhi aap apne frnds ko lekar nahi aaye na?? (I'm just seeing whether u have brought ur friends this time too)... N then she laughs...

(Naitik gives a naughty look.šŸ˜‰)

Naitik: mein itna budhu nahi hu jitna aap samajhte hai...

Akshara: mein toh mazak kar rahi thi naitik... aap andar aayiye naa... 😊

Naitik was totally out of this world seeing akshara... he was so surprised to see the total house decorated with flowers n candles... n especially akshara... he can't come out of his looks from her... akshara is blushingā˜ŗļø... naitik drags her towards him n hugs her tightly... šŸ˜

Naitik: mein sach mein bahuth surprised hogaya hu... meine toh socha ki aapne mereliye sirf mera man pasand khana banaya hoga... par yaha toh aap ne bahuth kuch kiya hai mere liye... ghar ko itna sundar sajaya... (he makes a naughty look)

Akshara: aapko sirf yeh ghar sundar dikh raha hai?? Kuch aur nahi??

Naitik: haa sirf yeh ghar hi aaj sundar dikh rahe hai... kuch aur nahi... šŸ˜‰

Akshara: acha... Toh aap yeh ghar ko hi dekhte rahiye... mein kitchen mein jaathi hu... mujhe bahuth kaam hai... (n she is about to turn back just then naitik holds her hand n pulls her towards him again he catches her tightly by placing his hand round her waist)

He looks into akshi's eyes... akshi also looks into his eyes... they were lost in looking into each other😳... after few seconds akshi becomes conscious...

Akshara: Naitik aap chodiye mujhe... aapko sirf yeh ghar sundar dikh rahe hai na... toh aap yeh ghar ko hi pakad lijilye... mein kyu??

Naitik: Akshara... yeh ghar toh sirf aaj hi sundar hai... woh bhi meri pyari si biwi ne bahuth mehnat karke itni sajavat toh ki hai... (he kisses her hands)... isliye yeh ghar aaj bahuth sundar hai... Aap toh pehele si hi bahuth sundar hai... aur aaj... Aap.. aapne yeh saadi pehenkar mujhe hamari purani yaadein bahut taaza bangaya...

Akshara: Yeh saadi aap ko yaad hai naitik??

Naitik: mein kaise bhool saktha hu... us raath ko... us raat mein aap ko... kitne yaadhgar pal hai woh hamareliye... usi din se humne hamari nayi zindagi shuru ki hai... (akshara blushesā˜ŗļø)... akshara aap is saadi mein bilkul us din ke jaisa hi lag rahe hai... aap mein bilkul change nahi... par hamare zindagi mein farak hai... hum ek doosre ko samajhne mein bahuth improve hue hai... akshara keeps on blushing with naitik words😳... naitik sees her blushing face n lost seeing her... akshara realizes n says

Akshara: aur aap toh bahuth badal gaye... aap bahuth mote hoagaye... aapka vajan ko dekhiye...šŸ˜› (she gives a small punch on his stomach)... she laughs... šŸ˜†šŸ˜† N gets out of naitik n starts running...

Naitik( in very small anger): akshara... rukiye... Mein aaj aap ko chodne wala nahi hu...

Akshara is running... n naitik is running behind her... akshara goes to aangan... they run round the chairs... both r laughing n running... naitik is trying to catch her... but he couldn't... they run n finally naitik catches akshi... they both r soo tired... it is very difficult for them to take breath... they sits on the chairs in the aangan... they start taking breathing heavily as they ran so fast... along with that they both r laughing... šŸ˜†

Naitik: Akshara aap ne aaj mujhe bahuth douda diya... (today u have made me run so much)... they r still difficult in taking breath...

Akshara: par naitik... mujhe bahutha maza aaya... chaliye issi bahane se hi sahi aapko thoda vajan kam karne keliye mouka mila šŸ˜›.... She starts laughing again... šŸ˜†

Naitik: acha aap mere mazak uda rahi thi... yehi hai kya aapka surprise?? (he makes a fake anger) šŸ˜‰

Akshara observes this... n comes near to him...

Akshara: Naitik... gussa ka natak karna koyi aapse seekni chahiye... is fake anger mein naa aap muje bahuth cute lagtha hai... 😃

Naitik: haa mujhe pata hai.. aap ne ek baar kaha hai... isiliye phir natak kar raha hu... they both smiles n hugs each other... šŸ˜

she asks him to fresh up n come till then she will prepare for the dinner... Naitik goes to his room n is surprised to see the room completely decorated with flowers n candles... n the bed completely decorated with roses... He smiles seeing all this...😃 He opens his shelf n takes his regular pants n t shirt to wear... but he stops...

Naitik: akshara aaj khaas mere liye bahuth sundar sajayi... mein kisi se kami hu kya... mein bhi ache se tayyar hota hu...

n he takes his half white colored plain n simple kurtha paijama n gets ready n comes down near the dining table...

He don't find akshara der.. he goes to kitchen.. akshara is not der too.. he keeps calling akshara akshara n comes out near the aangan... He is surprised to see the table with candles n food... no lights were der except the candle light... akshara is looking too beautiful in the candle light... her sweet smile is making him mad... he keeps on smiling looking akshi n all dese... Akshara signals to come n sit... naitik comes n sits in the chair...

Naitik: akshara... aaj itni saare surprises?? Yeh sab dekhkar mein bahuth khush hu... 😃

Akshara: haa abhi tak aapne mere liye bahuth kuch kiya hai... isiliye mein aaj aap keliye kuch karna chahti hu... abhi tak k surprises kuch bhi nahi hai... asli surprises toh aage aage aapko milegaa...

Naitik: abhi bhi bahuth kuch baaki hai??? Woh kya hai??😲

Akshara: surprise... pehle aap khana khalijiye... mein sab aapke pasand ka khana banaya aaj...

They both eat together feeding each other... N looking into each other😳... They complete dinner... They stand up to go inside the house n starts walking... just then a big thunder comes with a big sound...

Akshara is so scared with the sound n light... she shouts n hugs naitik tightly... naitik smiles... n hugs her too... šŸ˜

Naitik: akshara aap dariye math... mein hu na... he kisses her on the head...

But akshara is scared... she didn't hear this... She simply closed her eyes tightly by hiding her face into his chest n hugging him tightly... n hugs naitik tightly... They remain like that for few seconds... naitik tries to make her comfortable from fear n so keeps slowing moving his hand on her head by soothing... n kissies der...

Just then it starts raining... Akshara comes to her senses... She blushes seeing naitik... 😳

Akshara tries to go away from der... but naitik stops by catching her hand...

Naitik: aaj mousam bhi mera saath de raha hai... itni ache mouka chodkar aap kaha jaa rahe ho..

Akshara while blushing: Naitik... baarish ho rahi hai na... chaliye hum andar chalthe hai... tabiyat kharaab ho jaegi..

Naitik: mujhe kuch nai patha... mujhe yaha rukhna hai aur aap bhi... šŸ˜‰

He slowly gets akshra near to him... akshi is blushing😳... naitik kisses on her forehead... n then on her both cheeks... n then he comes near the lips... akshara is blushing... Her lips are shivering...

Akshara: Naitik... please... She pushes naitik back n turns other side n blushes...

They both r completely wet in rainšŸ˜... Naitik is completely lost seeing akshara like this... he again comes near her...

Naitik gently keeps his both hands round her waist from back... n he starts kissing her on shoulder n then on the neck... then on back of ears... akshara is also enjoying it.

Akshara while blushing n enjoying: naitik... koyi dekh lega... 😳

Naitik is not at all hearing all this... he is lost completely... akshara gets out of herself from naitik's hand ... n turns towards naitik face she was about to say something to naitik... naitik puts finger on her lips n says" ishh... " N then he was about to kiss her lips... just then rain stops...

Naitik stops n look up to the sky... n shows his little disappointment... n then looks at akshi... she laughs...šŸ˜† n starts running inside the house...

Akshara: Naitik aap jaldi andar aa jayiye... mein aapke keliye hamare kamare mein intazar karungi... aapke kapade kamre ke bahar rakhthi hu... aapk kapade change kar ke aayiye... mein bhi change karti hu...

Naitik also laughs at this... n goes inside... 😃

His room door was closed n his clothes r outside... he smiles n comes back changing his dress... room is still closed... he calls for akshara... he wont get any reply... so he knocks the door he then finds the door is already opened... he gets inside...

(Akshara is in the dress given by sulo maasi)

Akshara is standing near the window facing the window... naitik is soo shocked n surprised to see her in this dress from the back... He keeps on looking at her admiring her through the eyes n moves towards her slowly... he reaches akshara and keeps his both hands on akshara's waist n kisses on akshara neck... akshi takes it n turns towards naitik... she is feeling so shy to look into naitik's eyes... Naitik was astonished by her beautyšŸ˜... akshara is seeing down n feeling shy... it is black color dress which is upto her knees n it has a very thin strip like sleeves just on the shoulder ... her hair is completely wet... She is simply astonishing... naitik lifts her head n says "meri or dekhiye"... she raises her head sees into naitik's eyes n says blushingly... "Naitik" n hugs him ... Naitik too hugs her.šŸ˜

Naitik: mujhe yeh surprise bahuth acha laga... maine socha hi nahi tha ki aap is tarah mujhe surprise degi... akshara is still blushing... ā˜ŗļø

Akshara: Naitik woh mein...

Naitik again keeps his finger on her lips n says "ishhh... '' kuch math boliye... yeh baton me mein time waste nahi karna chahtha hu... " he lifts her n places on bed... n stood by her side by standing on his knees... he is completely lost in her beauty... He is adoring her with his gentle touch... he adjust's her hair which r falling on her face(like he does always...) akshara is still blushing... her heart beat increases... her lips are shivering... she can feel naitik's gentle touches on her face.... she is completely enjoying it... he takes her hand on his hand... kisses it... n says I love u akshara... Akshara says love u too...

"aap is dress mein bahuth khubsurath lag rahe hai... " naitik whispers this in her ears sweetly n kisses there gently... akshara felt so shy when naitik said about the dress... she closes her face with her both hands blushing... n turn to that side as she is feeling so shy... Naitik smiles n sits on the bed n leans towards her... he adjusts her hair n moves her hair towards front... back neck of the dress was deep... he moves his hands slowly there... akshara could feel his sensual touch... she is mesmarized... he slowly kisses there... akshara takes a deep breath as she could feel it... he kisses again... then he moves the thin sleeve to the end of the shoulder n kisses on the shoulder... Akshara was enjoying it... She couldn't take it more n she turns towards naitik. Akshara eyes r still closed... but she has a sweet smile on her face... . Akshara opens eyes n smiles at him ... ... n naitik comforts himself n sleeps by the side of akshi... akshi raises towards naitik to kiss him... she kisses him on the cheek'just then the power goes off...

Aakshara: yeh kya bijili chal gayi...

Naitik: maine kaha na akshara aaj sab kuch mere saath de rahe hai... Bijili bhi chal gayi...

Akshara: acha hua yeh chal gayi... ab wapas woh din n woh situation aagayi... us din mein aapko disappoint kiya hai na... aaj nahi... she looks into his eyes adoringly...

Naitik: haa akshara... lekin yeh din us se bhi acha hai... bharish bhi hai... aur aap ithni tayyari bhi ki kai...

Akshara smiles n she was about to bend on naitik to move close to him... Just then again a big thunder comes along with lightening... . Akshara gets scared again n hugs naitik tightly... naitik smiles n gently touches her on her head with hands to assure her that he is der... he kisses on her head... akshara releases naitik n looks into his eyes... Akshara is looking even more beautiful in the thunder light... he then gently kisses on the fore head then both cheeks, then on neck... n finally in the moon light n thunder... bharish ke mousam mein... "his lips find her lips"... they both lost in their world... šŸ˜šŸ˜³šŸ˜‰

(Ok guys now let us leave them alone for some time...Aur kithna dekhoge... Unko bhi thoda privacy chahiye naa... N now go to ur dreamlands to see what happens next....šŸ˜‰)


Precap: Akshara n naitik celebrating anniversary... naitik's surprises akshara by taking her on a romantic date... But I'm not going to reveal where he is going to take her'. U have to see this in next part...


PS: sorry if I made anyone feeling awkward...


I hope u u guys like this... n I'm looking forward for ur valuable comments and suggestions... 😃




Edited by saru.g - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago





breaking news breaking news breaking news




welcum guys again to our top show 'ff ke superstars' with d result of d 'top ff of d day'.doston-



ff ka season fir aaya hai...

romance ka mausam fir laya hai...
hum sabke man main bas smp hi chaya hai...
kya ye naksh ka diwanapan aur unki pyaar ki kaya hai...




so frnds,aaj ka d most romantic,quick,more dan wow n all d admiration deserving ff is none other dan-


'In Lamhon ke Daaman Mein'-by our beloved saru di





di,its just amazing.not getting proper words 4 it.using dose old words again will b an insult 2 ur just out of dis world ff.keep writing like dis only di,cont soon n thanx 4 d pm...



so guys,i know dat u all enjoyed reading dis wonderful creation,if u want to send ur suggestions n comments to her,u can just post it here or pm her or sms us on our no-#####



bye...



anvi reporting
camerawoman stuts ke saath
ct








Edited by anveshasharma - 14 years ago
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ahem ahem,... wers my credit haan? lolz... no need of it!
enjoyed this nakshilicious part😳 loved it!
from yest im getting sooo many treasts yr.,...
my party.. then naksh romance.. then this!!! wowww...
awesome di..
waiting for next part.. thanx for the pm!!!! oops... no thanx!

im waiting for seju to0 identify the parts i had included.. lolzz
Edited by stuti_naksh4eva - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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dam it anvi and sh ur faster then me lol

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geee saru i never knew a good girl like you would write parts like this😳 was this hot or what omg i was blushing all the way ( which is a good thing) this is my kind of part šŸ˜‰ loved this part so much and so i encourage you to write more parts like this and keep the romance meter super high šŸ˜‰
awesome part and loved it thnx for the pm
and once again have no words to tell you just awesome and super cute 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳


and omg i also liked the length of the part it was nice and long šŸ‘šŸ˜†

tc
sejal<3
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Originally posted by: sejal719

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dam it anvi and sh ur faster then me lol


hehe... lol... but I said first to u only... but its ok... I'm not going to update now naa... I'll update tomorrow evng...
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di.. i wantd to b first!
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oh... then next part is also going to be romantic... then u'll be first... ok??

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