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Archana

@.Sunshine.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: aNjiee
oh sweatha.....i've absolutely no words for ur ff.....it was mind-blowing!!!!!.......

hi anju...how r ya????....I noe itz extremely wonderful......I wish she wld update soon yar.......

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anju.9596

@anju.9596

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Posted: 16 years ago

#142

@ArchanaSub:...hyy archee..im doin gr8...yes, i too tht she updates the ff soon.....can't wait 4 the next part.....

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anju.9596

@anju.9596

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Posted: 16 years ago

#143

hyy sweatha...plzz update soon!!!!!!!...waitin 4 the 10th part...

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#144

part 10

akshara glared at naitik and he looked at her longingly.he culdn't wait to get her in his arms.everyoen noticed this and they took a decision to send akshara with naitik.rajshri asked naitik if he had food and he said no.
akshara scolded him for not having dinner on time and everyone smile seeing this.they al go downstairs and rajshri coooks up some food really fast and serves it to naitik.
after dinner naitik was about to leave and loked at akshara sadly.vishmabhar nath asked him to take akshara with him and he was so happy.akshara was also happy to hear this as she had missed naitik a lot.
so naksha bid goodbye to them and leave .while in the car naitik is looking at akshara in while driving driving.akshara notices this .
gayatri mom was waiting for naitik and she was tensed .she tried calling him but naitik's cell's battery had died off so he culdn't receive any calls.naksha went in and met gayatri at the door. she was surprised to see akshara.akshara hugs her and tells her everything and gayatri ma teased naitik" it is good u came or else naitik wuld have fallen ill without seing u.naksha go upstairs they eneter their rom and akshara closed the door.
naitik goes and sit on the bed. he is looking too tired and akshara notices thet the room is kept clean and then she also goes and sit son the bed. she sees sumthing under naitik's pillow and pulls it out.its her photo.her eyes fil up with tears knowing how much naitik loves her and she hugged him tightly. .he kissed her lips and She blushed and circled his hand and moved close to him.
they broke the kiss and naitik went to wash. he came out with his hair still wet and akshara dried his hair and he asked her not to leave him alone.akshara nods yes and naitik pulls her onto him.She hid her face into his neck and groaned. He blew warm air on her face.akshara smiled and he kissed her neck .akshara dropped her hand around his chest and pressed closer.

He kissed in her ear. akshara closed her eyes with hands. He removed her hands from her face and caressed her cheeks and softly kissed. She still closed her eyes enjoying his warmth. akshara's breath became heavy and naitik smiled as he noticed it. He slowly caressed her forehead, chin with his lips. He understood her inclining to his love and softly touched her lips. akshara gasped and heaved her breath out and her hands tightened grip on his shoulder. naitik looked at them and smiled. they both forgot the world in no time.....

next morning akshara woke up with a bad headache .naitik aske der if she was allright and she said she was. he took some balm and applied it on her forhead.he stayed by her and went downstairs when she was asleep.downstairs gayatri maa and bhabhi maa saw him coming down and they loked happy.
naitiki asked them why they were looking happy and gayatri maa replied that one of his cousins shubh called them to inform that he was going to become a father.naitik looked at gayatri and she said that she is desirous of getting a grandchild.naitik blushed .

so how was it guys??

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ZumSrK.

@ZumSrK.

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#145

very good...and romantic...asusual....u r jus awesome...

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#146

yippe!!! finally akshara and naitik cleared the misunderstanding!!
im so happy!!!
🥳🥳 loved tday's episode to the core!!🥳🥳

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ZumSrK.

@ZumSrK.

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: nasco
yippe!!! finally akshara and naitik cleared the misunderstanding!! im so happy!!! 🥳🥳 loved tday's episode to the core!!🥳🥳

me too loved the todays episode...and the last part was so cute...

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ekta

@skfan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: nasco

yeah i do wish so!!
wel i'll be continuing with it as soon as my xams r over.
well u can read my other ff saath saath wich is also on naksha

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ekta

@skfan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: skfan

its nice yaar..keep up

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Tafseer

@Tafseer

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#150

hey as usual a very good part....loved it..,.
now it means dat now Naitik will also becum a father??? goood..but Akshara's college??? anyway. watever u will write..it will be amazing......cont. soon..