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simz

@live_life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#151

Wooow....does this mean naitik is als gonna be a father??
pls update soon....hopefully aksh can study first

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ZaaraBB

@ZaaraBB

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Posted: 16 years ago

#152

this i love it i just sat down and read everything from the beginning cant wait for the next one it was really lovely nasco

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shristi

@shristi sarda

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Posted: 16 years ago

#153

hey nice part......
thanx for the PM........
cont. soon..............

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yusra12

@yusra12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#154

it was very good ...keep updating

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#155

part 11
note(well shall i request sumthing from u?? please post longer comments not onliners please!! im not getting any feedback .please provide long comments!!)

simran's point of view!!
simran came to hear reshmi, akshara and nandini talking one day.she listned and came to know that akshara's old friend alok had come back.she also came to know that alok was a successful businessman now and he had started a company in jaipur.

this is for ur information
(don't u guys remeber him??? he is the one who was behind akshara) he was a senior in akshara's college,had fallen for akshara and akshara refused to accept his love.akshara had asked him to study well ,bcome a succesful person in life and not come behind her..

simran was send to delhi for attending a conference and she was not happy to go because akshara had gone to her house and it was a good opportunity for her to create some misunderstandings.due to her good luck she came to meet alok raghuvanshi.simran befriended him and then alok told her that he studied in jaipur and had left jaipur because of a girl named akshara and he told her all the story .
she asked alok if he was still in love with akshara?? and alok replied positively.
simran was elated to know these and she thought hard for a plan.she racked her barins and came up wit an idea.she thought of making alok write a letter to askhara proclaiming his feelings to her.
she talked about love and how people tell their feelings for each other. she came up with the letter idea and asked alok to write a letter for akshara.alok considerd this as a good idea .but there was one problem. he was leaving for germany for a another conference and he will come to jaipur only after 2 weeks.simran was glad to hear it and she told him that she'll find akshar's address and send the letter to akshara.alok considering her to be a good friend alok agreed.

dear akshara

i don't know whether u remember me!! but i still remember everything each and every moment of our meetings. im coming back akshara .
i still feel the same for u . I LOVE U !!!!
alok

even though the letter was small . whoever reads it wuld feel that akshara was in love with some toher person.simran had kept another letter on naitik's table telling him about her feelings and she hoped that he wuldn't have read the letter or else her plan wuldn't work.her stars were good and naitik hadn't read the letter. she found it in the same place she had left it and she kept the letter which alok wrote inside akshar's books.

akshara had gone to college and naitik brought reshmi and akshara home.he then went to his office.
simran asked naitik how much he trusts akshara?? and naitik said that he blindly trusts her .he further says that he loves her a loot.
naitik had planned a surprise for akshara since it was valentines day and he wanted to make her happy.
he had told gayatri about it and she din't have any objection in naitik taking akshara out that day.naitik bought a white colour saree with red stone work and embroidery.he gave it to gayatri and asked her to give it to akshara gayatri was soo happy to get a daughter in law like akshara.she gave the saree to akshaara and akshara liked it very much.gayatri asked her to wear it on valentines day as they were having a party in one of her friends house. akshara agreed .
at night
when naitik came back akshara showed the saree to him and told him that he liked the sareee very much.
she happily hugs him and naitik smiled.she realised what she was doing and immediately broke the hug.

so how was it guys??
suspense building up right??ab hoga kahani mein twist

Edited by nasco - 16 years ago

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#156

awesome well nice selection of words and the way u describe the scenes is cute and sweet

Edited by ranbir_lekha - 16 years ago

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Tafseer

@Tafseer

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#157

hmmmm......suspense?? kahani mein twist??? now Simran is planning to create a mis understanding between naksh......
very gud part...wanna know da next suspense.....cont. soon...

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha
awesome well nice selection of words and the way u describe the scenes is cute and sweet

thnk u for reading it!!😛

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: Tafseer
hmmmm......suspense?? kahani mein twist??? now Simran is planning to create a mis understanding between naksh......
very gud part...wanna know da next suspense.....cont. soon...

well let the supense stay for sumtime.😃
simran is gonna create mu now!!

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: Tafseer
hey as usual a very good part....loved it..,.
now it means dat now Naitik will also becum a father??? goood..but Akshara's college??? anyway. watever u will write..it will be amazing......cont. soon..

no there is another twist coming up!!😉