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rock_angel

@rock_angel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

oh sry for the late reply

i was great like always

do continue soon

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simz

@live_life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

Arrrre wah! naitik is 2 cute wid his impatience...
muahh to u for thinkin of these lovely scenes..

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Fighting Spirit

@LegolasGondolin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#123

all ur replies coaxed me into writing another part!! well hope u enjoy it!!!!
part9
naitik and reshmi reached the college early.
in akshara's house she was also dyeing to meet naitik and she was asking varsha and shaurya to hurry and varsha was asking her why she wanted to reah college early and shaurya replies that my sweet sister is eager to meet naitik. aksharablushed red and after brekfast.they leave for college.
on thw way akshara's phone rings and its naitik calling her and he says "where r u ??"im waiting for u in the college" akshara says that they r on the way and hangs up.
shaury and varsha smile seeing this.they reach college and saw naitik and reshmi standing there.they get out of the car and reshmi says "thank god bahabhi aap aa gaye hai"dada din't even let me finish my breakfast .
varsha ays that even our situation was the same and shaurya, varsha and reshmi laugh.naitk and akshara look at each other and the others left them alone for .shaurya went back and reshmi and varsha awent to their respective clasess.akshara naitk goes to a bench and akshara asks naitik how was his day without her??
naitik was in a mischevious mood and he said that it was very good and he enjoyed a lot watching movies with simran(naitik hadn't intended to use her name her but it just slipped out of his tongue)
akshara din't expect such an answer and tears swelled up in her eyes.she started crying and naitik seeing this tried to console her i din't mean it akshara. i din't watch movies with simran yesterday nor did i enjoy .tumhari kasam!he wiped her tears he said I LOVE U!! and both hug
akshara is somewhat consoled and naitik continues i was always thinking about u akshara and i want u to come back fast/ i was so desperate to meet u that i had only 1/2 chappati tday.
akshara smiled hearing naitik's talks and she asked him if he was hungry and naitik said yes.
akshara took out her lunch box and she gave it to naitik.naitik looked around and made sure that none was around and asked akshara to feed him.akshara was shocked and she said that someone will see them and naitik said that noone is around and akshara culdn't refus him.so she feeds him and she goes to wash ehr hand.they ahd reached so early that people wereonly starting to come.naitik stands up and gives akshara a cute kiss on the cheek and he bids good bye and goes to office.
akshara goes to varsha and varsha .varsha wa standing witht heir common circle of frnds and one of them asks akshara what took her so long?? and akshara blushed red .she din't answer it and varsha said they'll go to the library to return the books.
naitik kept on thinking about akshara in the office even simran noticed that naitik wasnot concentrating on his work and she asked him about it.naitik looked through akshara's photoes wich he had saved in his mobile.he called akshara many times but she had switched off her mobile as whe was attending a lecture.
after sometime dadaj called naitik to his cabin and said that one fo their clients were coming tday and he'll have to go for a meeting tday.
naitik agrred and he went to attend the meeting it was held in a hotel near akshara's house.
naitik met mr.dsouza and discuseed about their deal .mr dsouza wanted to know all about the pros and cons he wanted everything in detail and naitik explained eaxh and everything to him.so this way the meeting prolonged and it was really late when it got over.
he was driving back home and he reached a junction where if he took the right he'll reach akshara's house and if he turned left he will reach his house. he was confused .
he wanted to see akshara so he turned right and he parked his car in front of the house.the lights were dimmed and ti appeared as if everyone had slept.
naitik climbed the pipe with great difficulty and went to the terrace and reached akshara's room.he entered the room and saw her on the bed.
rajshri was sleeping with akshara in her room and when naitik entered akshara had gone down to drink water.naitik culdn't see anything as the lights were turned off .he went near the bed and was about to call akshara's name when rajshri opened her eyes and saw naitik.she culdn't make out it was naitik and she thought that it was a thief and she shrieked!!!
naitik also got scared and he ran outside the room and bumped into akshara who was running upstairs to rajshri.naksha fell on the ground and akshara was shocked to see naitik there soon the lights were on and daadi,vishambhar,rajshri, varsha ,shaurya,omi kaka,sunain a chachi everyone came up.they saw naksha on the ground and al started laughing and naksha got up.
dadi asked rajshri if she was aalright and she said she is fine and said sorry to naitik for mistaking him for a thief.
so how was it guys??

Edited by nasco - 16 years ago

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Sanaya

@Sanayaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#124

Yippie I m d first one to reply😆

Both d parts were awesome as always I enjoyed dem thoroughly I love ur work simply love ur work
U r awesome blossom writer
It wuld have been so gud na if instead of stretching dis MU track dey have used ur idea
nyways it feels good wenever I read ur ff.
I loved dat wen Naitik asks for a kiss on phone widout knoing dat he was talking to Rajshri 🤣 Poor Naitik nd Rajshri too
next part will be very gud I think bcoz Naitik is going to meet Akshi nd I hope he doesnt make fun of himself in his attempts to talk to Akshi😆

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Tafseer

@Tafseer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#125

hey its very gud.............n funny too...........
again da sweet n cute romance of Akshara n Naitik made me go mad........i jst love watever u write..........
da last part was very funny though.........i thoroughly enjoyed while reading it.....
da next part wil be very gud i think..........do cont. soon

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#126

awesome poor Naitik And rajshri aunty.......

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Archana

@.Sunshine.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#127

🤣🤣🤣...it was too gd...I read both d parts n it was awesome yar!!!!!!!!...I mean I really liked d part were naitik was urgin rashmi 2 eat n on d other side akshara was urgin shaurya n varsha 2 eat...n I also liked d scene where naitik told off simran..n also d scene in d college wer akshara fed him.....all r too gd.....keep it up!!!!!!!!!!...update soon yar!!!!!!!!!!...waitin 4 it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ZumSrK.

@ZumSrK.

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#128

it was awesome...akshara feed naitik was so cute....hope this happens on their SR .....continue soon..

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nisha08angel

@nisha08angel

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#129

hey !!!!!......... both d parts were toooooooooo gud...............

u know i was really waitng for ur update b'coz it was becoming difcult to wait 4 monday & se naksha talkng.......... i prayed god tht atleast nasco wud com & provide som update to us ........... & u did it.................

thanku soooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhh......................

mw again egar ro read ur next update..................... i'm a big fan of ur writings.................... keep rocking.................