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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: aNjiee

hey...tht was really a cute one as usual....!!!....n congratzz tht u achieved da 2nd position!!!...😊


thnku dear for the comment!!
i culd achieve second position only because of all ur prayers
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesonme ff nasco .... i am done reading t just now pm me your updates naa .
cheers and have a gr8 friendship day
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Posted: 16 years ago
well this is my FRIENDSHIP DAY day gift to all my friends in this forum!!😊

part7
naitik felt really guilty for akshara's condition.he decided not to go to office tday and simran was really angry at this decision but she culdn't object .so she left for office alone.
akshara was resting on the bed reading a book and she slept off .naitik was beside her working on his laptop
after some time naitik closed his laptop and took akshara's medicine and went to her.
he woke her up and she was feeling really tired so naitik held her shoulders and helped her to get up.
she leaned onto his chest and he gave her the spoon .she sipped the tonic from it and frowned.it was having an odd taste and she moved her face away from the spoon.
she told naitik that she din't want to take this medicine but he said that he wants her to be allright and for that she has to take the medicine or else he'll feel bad for her condition.he said this with such sincerity that she culdn't refuse.when she was finished with her medicine naitik wiped off the edges of her lips with a towel and then gently placed a kiss on her cheeks which made her blush instantly.
they were so lost looking into each others eyes that they din't notice gayatri mom entering their room.gayatri mom also had not noticed them.she saw naksha and smield and was about to out of the room when akshara saw her and she instantly broke the gaze.she called "maa"
gayatri mom turned and said " sorry wrong timing beta and smiled"
akshara blushed red.gayatari mom said that she had brought food for akshara .naitik took the food tray from her hand and gayatri mom went since babhi maa was calling her downstairs and went and sat next to akshara .he started feeding her and akshara wilingly took it from him.naitik helped akshara get up and wash .she was still feeling tired .they watched tv for some time in their room .akshara slept of watching the film with her head in naitik's lap and naitik stroked her hair and looked at her for some time.he then started work on his laptop and was careful not to wake up akshara.
downstairs akshara's mom and dad had come for a visit.they had brought a whole lot of things with them . they were received by gayatri mom,bhabhi maa and dadaji.they were given tea and snacks and all of them sat around the tabl;e chatting about many things.after some time rajshri asked about akshara and gayatri mom told her that akshara and naitik were upstairs.so rajshri and vishambhar decided to go give akshara a surprise.gayatri went along with them .


naksha room
akshara was sleeping with her head in naitik 's lap.naitik was busy with his laptop. rajshri,vishambhar and gayatri maa smiled seeing this.naitik kept his laptop on the bedside table and slowly removed akshara's head from his lap and was getting up when akshara held his hands.he smiled at this and he woke up akshara.she was having a bad dream wherien( she was all alone in a corridor and soemone was trying to attack her)she woek up with a jolt all scared and sweating profusely.naitik asked her if she was allright and she hugged him tight.rajshri,gayatri and bhabhi maa got worried about akshara and they came forward to enquire about akshara.its then that kahsra noticed them and she broke the hug.
she said that she saw a bad dream and got scared .rajshri sat with her. she hugged akshara and vishambhar also hugged her.they sat talking about dadi,varsha and shauyra.
vishambhar and naitik talked about the stock market rates and other business related things.
rajshri and vishambhar left ater some time and naksha agreed to go to their house some time soon
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I KNOW ITS NOT THAT GOOD!!!
BUT STILL WAITING FOR UR COMMENTS😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
no no its gud......it was very sweet to see dat Naitik cares 4 Akshara soo much......thank god 2day der was so simran.....heheehe
anyway its was as usual very gud......
do continue soon...ok????
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Posted: 16 years ago
Its good. plz continue. waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey thanx for the PM....
a very adoreable part.........
keep updating................
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sweatha y did u say its bad????
its ttly nice...rlly...i toh liked it asusual...as i have said b4 i cn leave all my work just to read ur ff's and oneshots...rlly
loved it
thanks for the pm and tc
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Posted: 16 years ago
it's really good like always
like i said before i never want them to finish
when r u gonna post part 7
eagerly waiting 4 it
can u post it today if u have time
plz plz plz
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Posted: 16 years ago
really good.. And sweet..cont soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hyy sweatha....definitely itzz not bad....gud job as usual n a really nice Friendship Day gift....eagerly waitin 4 ur next update!!!.

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