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anju.9596

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Posted: 16 years ago

#111

n wen r u gonna update ur other ff-saath saath.?..im a big fan of tht too!!!...totally addicted....!!!....

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kavi2377

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Posted: 16 years ago

#112

so sweet and nice thank you for writing

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riyana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#113

sry i am late..............it was really goooood yaar...........keep postin

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simz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#114

Arre, how can u say its not that gud?

Its awesomeee hun! i live for these FFs and urs is jus magical.

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shwetha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#115

part 8

akshara was a bit sad after rajshri and vishambhar left .she runs to her room after they leave and naitik goes behind her.akshara is sitting on the bed crying and naitik comes to her.he tells her that he knows she is sadand wipes her tears.she hugs him and starts crying even more and simran enters seeing this.she says to akshara that u must not be this light hearted to cry when ur mom and dad goes.
akshara is still crying and naitik gets angry hearing simran and he say" it's none of ur business to mind what my wife does .im here to take care of her and only people who love their dear ones understand the pain of seperation"
simran gets angry hearing this and akshara gets a bit releived .she is a bit shocked at herself because she is still hugging naitik and that too when the door is open.just then reshmi and nandini enters and they smile seeing the cute couple. akshara and natik hadn't seen this and reshmi coughed and akshara broke the hug and naitik looked at his sisters with an angry look.
reshmi said " sorry dada we want our bhabhi for some time"and naitik replie " i need ur bhabhi more than u both but i have some work to complete now i'll finish it off and come fast"
akshara blushed red with that comment .reshmi, nandini and akshara sat there talking about college as their college was reopening the next day.

naitik came to his room after dinner .he was going through one of the files when he spotted a letter with akshara's name on it.he was about to read it when akshara came in so he left it behind.akshara felt two warm hands wrapping around her stomach. His warm hands made her stomach to have butterflies as he moved his hands on her shoulders .naitik's's hand held her tight and he nuzzled his nose by her cheek as akshara blushed and tried to get out of his grip. he lifted her up in his arms and proceeded to the bed.akshara told naitik that her college was reopening the next day.naitik nodeddd and kissed her forhead.they slept off hugging each other tightly.

next morning
reshmi and akshara were already ready andwas waiting for naitik to come .naitik came a bit late and reahmi said that they will have to hurry or else they will reach the college late.naitik tells her that its no use reaching college early so whay can't they reach late.reshmi was about to answer back when dadaji came and she went quiet.
naitik dropped akshara and reshmi to college.akshara and reshmi got out of the car .many people envied akshara as she had all the luxuries of life and she had a loving and caring husband.
akshara and reshmi bid goodbye to naitik .reshmi saw her friend and went to meet her.akshara was going towards the library to return books when shaurya and varsha arrived.akshara hugged shaurya and varsha asked about naitikji and just then he comes there. akshara and varsha where shocked to see him .naitik said that akshara forgot her cell in the car and he came to give it to her.akshara and varsha went to their clasess .shaurya asked naitik if he could spare few minutes for him?? and naitik says yes.shaurya tells him that everyone wanted to see akshara as it was long since they last visited them and he asks him if akshara culd stay with them for soem days.naitik got sad by thinking of living without akshara but he couldn't refuse shaurya so he agrees .

naitik goes to his office and he keeps on thinking about akshara.he called gayatri maa and told her about shaurya's request and she din't have any problem sending akshara to her house for a few days.he messaged akshara that she culd go to her home for a few days. simran came in with a file and they started discussing on it naitik got busy with that.he was busy the whole day and by evening when he was about to pick up reshmi ddid he remember that akshara is leaving for her home tday.

he puts on his coat and drives to college.shaurya was already there by then and akshara ,reshmi and varsha came out .akshara looked at naitik and he looked tired.akshara asks him to take care and goes with shaurya and varsha.
reshmi and naitik leave. naitik had his coat on his hand and he looked worn out when he came back home late in the night. he was already tired since the schedule was very hectic and also the thoughts of akshara made him weary as she wuldn't be there at home.
gayatri mom also noticed this .naitik goes to his rom and goes to get freshened up.akshara calls him up and he takes up the phone while he was bathing since hewas yearning to talk with her .she asked him whether he reached home and had food etc. akshara notices a tiredness in his voice asks him if he is ok and naitik says no he is not at ok because she is not there with him.he tells her that he loves her a lot and akshara too says that she loves him a lot.akshara has tears in her eyes and says goodbye and hangs up.

next morning akshara was downstairs eating breakfast when her cellphone rings and she sprangs up to get it.it was naitik calling and she asks him whether he was allright and did he sleep well yesterday etc etc.naitik gives her mwuaah mwuaah!! and says i love u they talk for a long time.after finishing her beakfast akshara went up to get ready.she forgets to take her cell upstairs and her phone rings and rajshri takes it .naitik thinking that it was akahara says akshara u din't say i luv u back to me and what about my kiss??rajshri was perplexed and she went upstairs to give akshara her phone.
akshara noticed her mom's starnge face when she handed over the phone to her.she says "hello"and naitik asks her why she din't reply when he asked her for a kiss and akshara bursts out laughingand tells naitik that it was her mom who took the phone.naitik hangs up the phone but only after akshara said i love u to him.

singhania house
naitik was already downstairs waiting for reshmi to come .he had chappati and curry in his plate.finaly when reshmi came naitik was not even letting her eat properly he was asking her to hry fast and gaytri said that he has not eaten anything not even 1/2 chappati and asks him if he is allright.reshmi understood the rason behind naitik urging her to eat fast. she said mama dada will be allright after seinf bhabhi and that's why he is in a hurry tday.

so that's it guys. waiting for ur comments

Edited by nasco - 16 years ago

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#116

YES me first

Nasco awesome part yaar soo sweet poor rashmi khaane he nahi dia naitik ne usse

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Tafseer

@Tafseer

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#117

gr8 part as usual....i love all ur ffs n oneshot.....
it was a very gud part.....loved da sweet n cute romance between dem......hope these type of rpmance are shown on da show......ohhh Naitik was soo desperate to meet Akshara...... 😳 ...just loved it.....

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ZumSrK.

@ZumSrK.

Stunner

Posted: 16 years ago

#118

asusual it was awesome,mindblowing.....update soon dear

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Drishti

@Drishti...

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#119

hey sweatha asusual it was very very nice....awesome update rlly...not joking...read one after a long time....rlly liked it..the romance was soo classic rlly...i toh loved it...hope to get an update soon....wow loved it when naitik was urging to see akshara...it was soooooooo romantic and cute....