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A very lovel os. Keep writing.
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Amazing twist of their fight and thoughtful poem!
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Originally posted by: Sakhile

A very lovel os. Keep writing.

Thank you so much😊
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Originally posted by: Ishveershadhika

Amazing twist of their fight and thoughtful poem!

Thanks for your support
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The poem was beautiful ❤️

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Beautiful. Loved this... Especially the poem.
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Originally posted by: shelly_nair

Beautiful. Loved this... Especially the poem.

Thanks and yes this is the idea to bring the shayr side of sameer through small stories. Because I always feel cvs don't show that side of sameer that much 😊
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Part : 2.1 The tough decision

First of all thank you so much guys for all your support for my first os. Yes guys I know the title of my page suggest that this is gonna be a os series but my this story is long so sorry for that. One more thing I want to share with you that I write this story long time ago but due to some reasons I was not able to post it that time. So that's why the story revolve around old incidents.

Story : 2.1 The tough decision

My story starts from the incident when naina broke up with sameer and sameer decide to took sanyas but unlike the show it is a trick of sameer to bring naina back because he knew naina will not be able to see sameer in that state.

Munna : sameer yr tu pagal ho gya hai. Tujhe lagta hai isse baat banegi
Sameer : munna naina mujhse bhut pyar karti hai aur wo kbhi bi mjhe is halat me nhi dekh skti.
Munna : par yr sameer college me sab log honge. Wo karthik aur uski gang bi.
Pandit : ha yr sameer ye chenu sahi keh rha hai. Naina ko bahar le aate hai kisi bahane se. Aur tab wo tujhe is halat me dekh kar pakka man jayengi.
Sameer : tum log bas chalo mere sath aaj to naina pakka man jayegi.
Munna pandit : acha chal chalte hai yr.

Narrator : sameer aaya to tha naina ko shock dene, sameer ki halat dekhkar jo dard naina ko hota,wo dekhne.
Par use nhi pata tha ki shock to use milne wala tha.

VJN college

Samundit enter into college corridor and found hema and kamya talking on something sameer listen their talks.

Hema : kamya kya ye sach hai ki naina ka rishta pakka ho gya hai.
Kamya : ha hema swati bata rahi thi ki uski taiji ne uska rishta pakka karwa diya hai. Tu to janti hai na uski taiji ko
Hema : bechari naina ab kya hoga. Udhar sameer bi college nhi aa rha hai kitne dino se.

Suddenly sameer feels her presence. And there she was walking in a blue saree and teary eyes. it doesn't matter how much sameer angry on her but he can't see his naina like this, he was about to go when his eyes fall on her hands. And the exact moment sameer heart broke into million pecies

Sameer (inner voice) : Naina ke hantho me kisi aur ke naam ki mehandi mano chikh chikh kar keh rahi thi ki maine naina ko kho diya, ab uspe kisi aur ka hak hai. Meri aankho se na jane kab aansu bhene lage. Ek jhatke me meri sari umminde tut gyi. Aur hamare sath bitaye sare pal meri aankho ke samne se guzarne lage. Me aaya to tha naina ko apna sanyasi bhes dikha ke use wapis pane par us din maine wo faisla liya jisne meri zindagi hmesha ke lie badal ke rakh di...
Naina pehle se itni pareshan thi ki uski mushkile aur badhane ki himmat nhi thi mujhme. Ek aakhiri bar naina ko jee bhar ke dekhne ke baad me wapis chal pada...ek kabhi na khatam hone wali raah pe.

Sameer home

Munna : sameer tu waha se chala kyu aaya bhabhi se bina mile, aaj to wo pakka man jati.
Sameer(in broken voice) : me uski takleef aur nhi badana chahta tha, mjhe is halat me dekhkar wo tut jati. Aur me apni naina ko kabhi tutte hue nhi dekh skta.
Munna : yr sameer wo sab to thik hai par ab hum bhabhi ko kaise manayenge, aur tune suna na hmare pass jyada time bi nhi hai. Suna hai uski shadi pakki ho gyi hai.
Pandit : shadi hi to pakki hui hai na. Shadi hui thodi hai.
Munna : ha sameer agar jarurat padi na to hm bhabhi ko ghar se bi bhaga lenge tere lie.
Sameer : iski jarurat nhi padegi... Maine kuch socha hai.
Munna pandit : kya ?
Sameer : me pune ja rha hoo...
Munna : kya kehna chahta hai saaf saaf bata ?
Sameer : munna pandit mai sanyas lene ja rha hoo pune ke ashram.
Munna pandit : kya...
Munna : Yr tu pagal ho gya hai itna bada faisla yuhi le liya. Ye sab to hamara darama tha na naina ko wapis lane ka fir..
Sameer : ha munna ye sab ek darama tha naina ko wapis lane ka. Par ab yehi sachai hai.
Pandit : nhi sameer hum tujhe aisa nhi karne denge. Kahi nhi jayega tu.
Sameer : ye mera aakhiri faisla hai aur yakin mano mene ye bhut soch smjh ke kiya hai.
Munna pandit : kya socha hai tune zara hme bi to bata. Dekh sameer mana ke naina teri zindagi hai par kya hm log tere kuch bi nhi hai.
Sameer : tum mere lie kya ho ye tum mere jane ke baad ache se jaan jaoge
Munna : to thik hai aj tujhe hmme ya naina me se kisi ek ko chunna hi hoga.
Sameer : kya tu kabhi apni dil aur apni dhadhkan me se kisi ek ko chun sakta hai.
Munna : par sam...(pandit cut him in between)
Pandit : chal chenu isko jo krna hai karne de (In a low voice) mere pass ek idea hai. Tu yakin kar, hum sameer ko kahi nhi jane denge.

Munna and pandi leaves from there

Munna : aye ponga kya idea hai tere pass bata jaldi mera dmg bhut tension me hai.
Pandit : tu bi janta hai aur me bi ki sameer ko sirf ek person rok skta hai aur wo hai naina.
Munna : kya kaha tune naina. Are jiski wajah se mere bhai ki ye halat hui hai. Tujhe lagta hai me uske pass jaunga.
Pandit : par ab yahi rasta bacha hai. aur hume jaldi hi kuch karna hoga isse pehle ki der ho jaye.
Munna : thik hai me chalne ko taiyar hoo par sirf sameer ke lie. Kyunki naina ne jo kiya hai na uske lie mene naina ko ab tak maaf nhi kiya hai.

Then munna and pandit goes to college to tell naina everything so that naina can stop sameer from taking sanyas

Yeh sab sunne ke baad to jaise naina ke pairo tale zameen khisak gyi. Aur na jane kab uske aankho se aansuo behne lage. Ab tak munna aur pandit ne sirf sameer ka dard dekha tha. Par aaj pehli bar unhone naina ka pain dekha tha, naina kuch bi nhi bol pa rahi thi. Uski halat aisy thi mano kisi ne ek jhatake me uski jaan nikal li aur bachi ho sirf uski body.
Munna can't take it no matter how angry he is on naina but in heart he still know that only naina is his bhabhi...

Munna : naina sambhal khud ko. Ye wakt kamjor hone ka nhi hai. Balki sameer ko rokne ka hai.

Naina achanak apne aansu poochti hai. kyunki naina kabhi bi apne sameer ko aise akela nhi chod skati. Mana ke naina kamzor hai par unka pyar nhi,

Naina(inner voice) : me aa rahi hoo sameer, kahi nahi jane dungi me tumhe.
Mere hote hue mere sameer ko koi dukh nhi ho sakta. Kal kya hoga ye to mjhe nhi pata par ha mera aaj sirf tumhara hai. Aur tumhari jagha koi kabhi nhi le skta na sharad na koi aur. Bhagwan ji please sameer ko rok lijiye meri galti ki saza sameer ko mat dijiye. Kyunki agar aisa hua to me kabhi apne aap ko maaf nhi kar paungi aur tut jaoongi. Bhale hi sameer mjhe maaf na kare chahe mujhe apni zindagi se door kar de. Lekin fir bi bas ek bar please use rok lijiye, aapko jo saza deni hai mjhko dijiye.
Me aa rahi hoo sameer me aa rahi hoo
Bas mera intezaar karna
Me aa rahi hoo...

On the other hand sameer is preparing for pune. He took 2 dhoti, a picture of his nanu, naina, naina's sweater, and the picture of the sameer munna and pandit, and he made few phone calls

Narrator : Ab baat pyar ki nhi thi. Baat thi time ki, ek or naina aur uske dost college se ghar ki or aa rhe the or dusri tarf sameer sab kuch chodkar ek nayi shuruat karne ja raha tha, aapko kya lagta hai, kya naina aur uske sathi sameer ko pune jane se rok payenge. Chaliye dekhte hai...

Naina and her gang reach maheshwari mansion as soon as possible and all of them runs towards the gate. Aur sabse aage thi naina mano wo apni zindagi ko bachane ke lie bhag rahi thi.
Aankho me aansu, nange pair,
bina chunni ke, aur khule the uske baal Kuch yu tha naina ka haal

They all open the gate of maheshwari mansion quickly and goes inside, and all of them started shouting sameer name on top of their lungs. Wo bar bar sameer ka naam pukar rahe the, aur har ek chikh unhe sameer ke apne se door hone ka ehsas dila rahi thi. Mano wo dhire dhire sameer ko kho rahe ho,
Munna aur pandit sare ghar me sameer ko dhundte hai aur finally naina ka sabr tut jata hai..

Naina apne ghutno pr gir jati hai. Kuch bi keh pana tak uske lie possible nhi hota. Mano sameer apne sath hansti khil khilati naina ko bi le gya tha. Uska sameer usse door chala gya hai ye bardasht kar pana bilkul waise hi tha mano kisi ne uske andar se uski jaan nikal li ho aur bas ek body chod di ho. Jaise ek zinda lash.
Kisi apne ko khone pe bhut dard hota hai, par jb aap kisi jaan se pyare insan ko khote hai to yakin maniye zindagi nark se bi battar ho jati hai
Preeti and swati naina ko sambhalne ki koshish krte hai. Par wo log bhool gye the ki sambhala use ja sakta hai jiske andar jeene ke chah ho. Naina to jaise jeene ki chah hi chod chuki thi

Preeti : naina please hosh me aa meri bhen. Kuch nhi hoga sameer ko
Swati : aur nhi to kya sameer abhi jyada door nhi gya hoga. Hum use dhudh lenge aur wapis le aayenge dekh lena tu.

Lekin in sab ka kuch fayda nhi ho raha tha. Preeti se aur bardasht nhi hota aur wo naina ko zor ka thappad laga deti hai.
Preeti : tu pagal ho gyi hai jeejaji ko dhundne ke bjay yaha baithi hai. Soch agar jeejaji teri jagh hote to kya wo yuhi hanth pe hanth dhare baithe hote.

Yess this stuck in naina's mind so what sameer leave for sanyas. uski naina use wapis layegi chahe uske lie use kuch bi kyu na karna pade.

Naina : mun.. munna...wo... Sam...sameer ne bataya tha kuch ki wo konsi jagh ja raha hai.
Munna : ha bata rha tha ki kisi pune ke ashram me ja rha hai.
Pandit : to bas fir, hum pune ke har ek ashram me jake dhudenge jab tak sameer hume nhi mil jata.
Hema kamya : ha naina tu tension na le hum sb tere sath hai.
Munna : me pata karta hoo pune me kitne ashram hai.
Pandit : ha jaa
Munna calls his friends. Meanwhile preeti and swati help naina to get up and give water to her
Munna comes after 20 minutes. With a smile on his face
Munna : hahah hahahha hahahhaha
Everyone shock that what happened to munna wether he gone mad or he find out where is sameer
Naina : kya.. kya hua munna. Sameer ka kuch pata chala ?
Munna : ha pata chal gya
Everyone : kya sach me
Munna(in serious tone) : ha sameer mane hawa ka jhoka jo ek jagah nhi rukta
Preeti : munna saaf saaf bata kha hai jeejaji
Munna : bataya to wo behti hawa ka jhoka hai jo ek jagah nhi rukta
Pandit : dekh yr munna dara mat saaf saaf bata konse ashram me hai sameer. Hm abhi nikalte hai wha ke lie
Munna (started crying) : sameer hum sbse bada khiladi nikla yr
Everyone : kyu kya hua!
Munna : pune me koi ashram hai hi nhi...

Continue...
That's it for now guys please tell me your views about it. And if you don't like it then please tell me what are my mistakes so that I can rectify them. Have a good day


2.2 on page 5 . a

Edited by Yudkbh - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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So interesting update
Plz update soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update.
Yaar Pune me koi ashram hi na hi hai aur Sameer Pune nahi Gaya to Gaya kidhar. Plz update soon.
Waiting for next update.

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