Originally posted by: Ashusanj
Nice update.
Yaar Pune me koi ashram hi na hi hai aur Sameer Pune nahi Gaya to Gaya kidhar. Plz update soon.Waiting for next update.
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Originally posted by: Ashusanj
Nice update.
Yaar Pune me koi ashram hi na hi hai aur Sameer Pune nahi Gaya to Gaya kidhar. Plz update soon.Waiting for next update.
Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina
loved it
sameer khi ghr main hi chupa hogamaybe he did this so that naina can realize that she can also stand for their lovecontinue soon
Originally posted by: munchkinland
very nicely written
Then where did sameer go if there is no ashram in punewaiting to know
Sameer kahin koi mazak toh nahi kar raha!! Where did he go! Please continue.
Part : 2.2 The last latter
Thank you guys for your response on first part. But before I start I want to clear one thing. You may find this part little filmy or unrealistic but it is necessary for next update so hope you understand my intentions behind it. But if you still not happy with the update please forgive me and guys I spend too much time on deciding the title of these stories so have a look at it as well and share your opinions.
Recap :
Pandit : dekh yr munna dara mat saaf saaf bata konse ashram me hai sameer. Hm abhi nikalte hai wha ke lie
Munna (started crying) : sameer hum sbse bada khiladi nikla yr
Everyone : kyu kya hua!
Munna : pune me koi ashram hai hi nhi...
Suddenly someone comes on the main gate. Aur sab log us aur dekhte hai. Aur dekhkar confuse ho jate hai...
Munshi ji was there standing with a sad look
Munna : uncle aap yaha par wo sameer abhi yha nhi hai. Aapko kuch kaam tha ?
Munshi ji : pata hai beta aur sameer ne hi mjhe yha bheja hai.
Pandit : kya matlb ?
Munshi ji : ek minute...
Then he took out some papers from his bag.
Munshi ji : beta sameer ne mjhe
Call kiya tha aur milne ko kha tha. Keh rha tha ki wo kisi safar pe ja rha hai to uske na rehne pe ye me aap logo ko de doo.
And with that he give some paper to naina.
Narrator : naina un kagaz ke panno ko kapkapate hantho se aise le rahi thi jaise mano wo chand kagaz ke panne na hoke sameer ka ek ansh hai. Himmat nhi thi usme un panno pe likhe shabdo ko padhne ki,
Ki na jane kya likha hoga usme. Kitna dard, kitna akelapan hoga. Aisa kya raha hoga sameer ke dimag me ki usne itna bada kadam utha liya.
Uske har ek sawal ka jawab tha us latter me. Par nhi thi to bas himmat...
Finally naina starts to read the latter...
Sameer's latter
Sorry dosto mai janta hoo mera yun achanak tumse door chala jana tumhe acha nhi laga hoga, aur tum sab mujhse gussa bi honge. Par kya karta mere pass koi rasta hi nhi bacha tha. Naina ka kisi aur ke ho jane ka khayal hi meri raato ki nind udane ke liye kafi tha. Tum soch rahe hoge ki koi itna bada faisla kuch chand ghanto me kaise le sakta hai.
Aisa nhi hai maine koshish nhi ki, naina ko bhulane ki. Darasal sach to ye hai ki me koshish karna hi nhi chahta. Kyunki me apni zindagi me naina ki jagah kisi aur ko de hi nhi sakta.
Mere dost, munna pandit yu to mera koi bhai nhi hai par sach pucho to agar koi hota to shayad tum jaisa hi hota. Maine apni zindagi ke kuch sabse haseen lamhe tumhare sath bitaye hai aur agar tum dono nahi aate to shayad me whi ziddi, adiyal aur gussa karne wala sameer rehta. Par tum dono ne mere andar ke us chulbule sameer ko jagaya, tumhare bina to shayad me yaha tak bi nhi pahuch pata.
Tum dono ne jo mere lie kiya hai uska ehsaan me zindagi bhar nhi utar sakta, aur aaj ek bar fir ek ehsaan chahta hoo tumse...
Meri naina ka khayal rakhna aur ek zimmedari bhi chodkar ja raha hoo tumpe islie nhi ki tum mere dost ho balki islie kyunki tum mere bhai ho.
Aur naina,
Tum mere lie kya ho mai ye shabdo me byan nhi kar sakta islie main apni zindagi
tumhare naam kar raha hoo. Agar kabhi is sameer ne tumhara dil dukhaya ho to mjhe maaf kar dena.
Lekin me kya karta bar - bar log meri zindagi me aate hai mujhe pyar par wishwas dilate hai, aur fir mujhe chodkar chale jate hai,
Har bar me apne tute hue dil ke tukdo ko jodkar ek nayi shuruat karta hoo. Kyunki koi na koi hota hai mjhe sahara dene ke lie.
Jab papa gaye to mummy thi, to sambhal liya khud ko. Mummy gayi to nanu the unhone sambhala. Jab nanu gaye to tum thi, tumhara pyar tha. Par... par naina aaj jab tum alag hui to mere pass koi apna nhi bacha mujhe sambhalne ke lie.
Yu samajh lo bar-bar dil tutta tha to me use jod leta tha. Par aaj mere dil ka jud pana possible nhi hai. Kyunki use jodne ke lie tudke hi nhi bache, sab khatam ho gaya naina. Sab khatam ho gya...
Maine kaha tha na ki me unlucky hoo par tum nhi maan rahi thi, par dekho mai jeet gaya, topper naina galat thi,
"Main manhoos hoo"
Par naina tum meri halat ke lie apne aap ko zimmedar mat samjhana. Tumhara faisla sahi tha. Pyar kitna hi bada kyu na ho parivar se bada nhi ho sakta. Par maaf kar do yr mera khud ka koi parivar nahi hai na islie parivar ki ehmiyat nhi smjh paya aur jab tumne meri jagh apne parivar ko chuna to tumhe galat smjhane laga.
Par naina meri jaan tum ye bilkul mat sochna ki isme tumhari koi galti thi. Galti to meri thi jo me bhool gaya tha ki meri zindagi me kisi ka pyar nhi likha. Koi mujhe pyar kare aisy meri kismat hi nhi hai...
Suna tumhari shadi tay ho gayi hai, maaf karna shadi me nhi aa paunga par jate jate tumhari shadi ka tohfa chod ke ja raha hoo, mere jaane ke baad mere gift ka khayal rakhna.
Alwida naina, dua hai meri tum hamesha khush raho, aur apni zindagi me wo sab hasil karo jiska tumne sapna dekha tha. Apne parivar aur apne hone wale pati ke sath khush raho hmesha.
Yu maan lo sameer ek bita hua kal tha aur sharad tumhara aane wala kal hai...
Tumhari class me padne wala ek ladka sameer...
Narrator : us latter ka ek ek shabad kisi teer ki tarh naina ke dil ko chub raha tha. Uska sameer jisne usse beintehaa mohhabat ki wo aaj apna sab kuch haar kar usse door chala gya. Naina ka ek pal aur khada ho pana hi mushkil tha par fir bi wo dusra panna palat kar padhti hai. Isi ummind me ke shayd kahi usme sameer ke milne ke bare me kuch likha ho.
So she turns the page with teary eyes
Meri ek akhiri kavita...
Dil ke dukh ki baat hi kuch aisy thi,
Ankhe bi kehti thi, saanse bi kehti thi
Bachpan bi aawara tha
Papa ka dulara tha
Maa ki aankho ka ek sameer hi Tara tha
Dil tuta, saanse tuti
Jo jaan thi meri, wo jaan hi chuti(his dad)
Rishto ki fir dor hi tuti
Maa ki mamta mujhse ruthi
Is dil ke dukh ki baat hi kuch aisy thi,
Ankhe bi kehti thi, saanse bi kehti thi
Akela ab me ho gya tha
Jaane kha kho gya tha
Dhadkan me jo dard basa tha
Na jane kab me fir hansa tha(hostel pain)
Is dil ke dukh ki baat hi kuch aisy thi,
Ankhe bi kehti thi, saanse bi kehti thi
Sahara mujhko mil gya tha
Dhadkan se kuch dard gaya tha
Thoda sa fir me hansa tha
Nanu ne jab sath diya tha
Is dil ke dukh ki baat hi kuch aisy thi,
Ankhe bi kehti thi, saanse bi kehti thi
Dil me kuch kuch baat bani thi
Naina se jab aankh ladi thi
Maa ki fir se yaad jagi thi
Naina fir meri jaan bani thi
Is dil ke dukh ki baat hi kuch aisy thi,
Ankhe bi kehti thi, saanse bi kehti thi
Saanse meri chut rahi thi
Dhadkan dil se tut rahi thi
Rishto ke takrav se(naina chose her F*Ly)
Wo jo mujhe ruth rahi thi
Is dil ke dukh ki baat hi kuch aisy thi,
Ankhe bi kehti thi, saanse bi kehti thi
Dil me apna kho chuka hoo
Dhadkan ko me kho raha hoo
Munna pandit ki yari se
Me thoda sa hi jee rha hoo
Is dil ke dukh ki baat hi kuch aisy thi,
Ankhe bi kehti thi, saanse bi kehti thi
Naina turns the next page
Mai sameer maheshwari grandson of jai prakash maheshwari, apne pure hosh hawas me ye will bana rha hoo aur iske tahat meri sari property, ghar aur maheshwari industries ke shares kuch is tarh baat diye jaye...
Meri property ka 25% 25% hissa mere dost munna aur pandit ko de diya jaye, 25 % hisse ko trust bana ke gareeb bachcho ke padhai ke lie use kiya jaye. Aur...
Aur bacha hua 25% meri naina ke naam kar diya jaye. Sorry matlb naina aggarwal... Ke naam
Narrator : Ye sab sunne ke baad us jagah khade har ek shaksh ke aankho me aansu the.
Apni zindagi ke har ek utar chadaw ko sameer ne apni kavita me sama diya tha. Wo sirf ek kavita nhi thi. Balki wo to sameer ke jeevan ka sar tha. Sach me bahut badnaseeb tha wo ladka sabkuch hote hue bi kuch bi nhi tha uske pass. Na ma baap na bhai bahen aur na hi uski jaan.
Wo tha hi aisa person ki aap ek bar use jankar use pyar kare bina nahi reh skate the. Sameer jaate jaate bi sbko kuch dekar gaya. Wo kehte hai na ki asli sanyasi wahi hota hai jisko moh maya ka lalach nhi hota. To shayad ye akhiri tyag bi usne kar diya, un logo ke naam jo uski life me importance rakhte the...
Aur isi ke sath Kisi ne apna bhai khoya to kisi ne apna dost, kisi ne apne bete jaisa malik par koi tha jisne apne aap ko khoya tha aur wo thi naina. Uska haal kya tha ye main shabdo me byan nhi kar skta. Kyunki kuch dard aise hote hai jinka koi ilaaj nhi hota. Yu to sbne sameer jaise insan ko khoya tha par sach to ye hai ki us din hmne ek nahi balki do do logo ko khoya tha ek tha sameer aur dusra uski naina.
Naina get up and start to walking out of the maheshwari mansion. Preeti and swati starts running to catch her. They tried there best to console her and make her comfortable. Lekin kisi baat ka koi asar nhi ho raha tha. She was walking like a dead person no emotion no expression not even pain only numbness. She reaches her home with the help of preeti. Everyone in her house was preparing for the wedding. Bina ye jane ki jiski shadi honi hai uska kya haal hai. Khush to wo pehle hi nhi thi is rishte se par aaj jo hua tha uske baad to jaise ek aakhiri ummid bi tut chuki thi. Is shadi ko nibhana to door use rokne ka man bi nhi tha uska. Wo apne aap me hi kahi kho gyi thi. Like a statue...
And then suddenly like a miracle someone came in her life to save her from this marriage, from sharad...
Aggarwal house ka hall
Rakesh sir : bhaisaab mujhe aap sab se ek baat karni hai.
Tauji : bolo rakesh, aisy bi kya baat hai
Taiji : oh bai, beti ki shadi tumhari hai aur kaam me lage hai hm sb, rakesh babu tumhari koi jimmedari hai ya yuhi baithe baithe farmaish karte rahoge.
Rakesh : ha bhabhi beti meri hai islie aap sab logo se baat krni hai mujhe
Anand : boliye na bhaisaab kya baat hai. Naina aapki hi bachi hai.
Rakesh : meri beti ki shadi us sharad se nhi hogi.
Tauji : rakesh kya bakwas ka rahe ho tum. Hosh me to ho
Anand : aisa bi kya ho gya hai bhaisaab ki achanak aap yu rishta todne ki baat kar rahe hai.
Rakesh : mujhe wo sharad pasand nhi hai. Naina ke lie. Aur naina meri beti hai aur usse jude har faisle ka hak sirf mera hai.
Taiji : ne waah, ye sahi hai rakesh babu khud kuch kharch karna nhi hai beti ki shadi me aur jo hm kar rahe hai usme bi kami nikalni hai.
Are wo to ehsaan mano sharad aur uske gharwalo ka ki wo bina dahej ke shadi ko taiyar ho gye. Warna is ladki ka na to rang hai na roop.
Rakesh : ha ha pata hai pata hai kitna acha ladka dhunda hai aapne aur aap ye mat sochiye ki me kamata kam hoo to mere baap hone ka adhikar koi mujhse chin lega.
Tauji : are par rakesh kami kya hai ladke me, acha khasa kamata hai, dikhta bi acha hai.
Rakesh : bhaisaab wo mujhe pata hai. Par sharad se shadi kyu karna jab hmari beti usse bi bade ghar me ja skti hai.
Everyone : kya matlb ?
Rakesh : are aap sab yakin nhi karenge ki meri naina ke lie ahemdabad ke kitne bade ghar se rishta aaya hai.
Everyone : kiske ghar se... ?
Continue...
That's it for now guys I know I m bad coz har bar kahi na kahi chod deta hoo bich me so sorry for that. And criticize kar skte ho agar kuch pasand nhi aaya ho to ya fir jyada filmy laga ho to.
Bye have a nice day
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