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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Rph09

I don't want to think anything negative!! Toh mere hisab se woh naina aur sameer ki beti hai. Naina kuch din ke liye mayke gayi hai and Sam is missing her a lot. The end ๐Ÿ˜† It was nice and I loved how u portrayed sameer's condition. Mera toh dil tut gaya tha usse aise imagine karke.

I love how positive you are,๐Ÿ˜†
I ask the readers to come up with thier own version bcoz in this story i have given no. Of hints.
BTW aapka guess bi bhut acha tha, but sirf ek question agar aisa hai to wo shayri kyu doharayega ๐Ÿ˜‰

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina

I will only think positive

naina apne maayke gyi huyi hogi
and sameer just saw a bad dream
and yeh beti samaina ki hain

So many positive people ๐Ÿ˜Š
Nice guess bas ek problem hai ki agar aisa hai to wo shayri ka kya kaam
I given hints in the story, tell me how you will end it๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: munchkinland

oh so an open ending

great
Yeh sameer ka nightmare hoga
aur yeh beti sameer naina ki hogi
naina khi bahar gyi hogi
and sameer use miss kr rha hoga
kyuki naina sameer ko kbhi chor bhi nhi skti

Thanks for your response atleast koi to padh raha hai๐Ÿ˜†
I have given hints in the story and your guess Is also very nice,
But then why he repeat that shayri ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Yudkbh

So many positive people ๐Ÿ˜Š
Nice guess bas ek problem hai ki agar aisa hai to wo shayri ka kya kaam
I given hints in the story, tell me how you will end it๐Ÿ˜‰

oh no now I am left confused
this is not fair yar
ab aapko hi btana padega
continue please
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina

oh no now I am left confused
this is not fair yar
ab aapko hi btana padega
continue please

Only you and me are interested in it ๐Ÿ˜†
4 likes aaye hai, ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
But koi nahi aap aur me hi solve kar lenge ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Yudkbh

Only you and me are interested in it ๐Ÿ˜†
4 likes aaye hai, ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
But koi nahi aap aur me hi solve kar lenge ๐Ÿ˜Š

you should pm people
actually agar ek post pr hi series ho toh pta nhi chlta
aap pm kro acha response milega
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Posted: 6 years ago
Nice story , ab ending hume sochni hai toh kuch acha sochte Hain


Ye Sameer naina ki beti hai , aur Naina Delhi gyi hai , rohan ki dadi mar gyi unki funeral Mai ๐Ÿ˜†



Aur ye shayri Sameer isliye bol rha hai , kyun ki usne bahot daru pee rkhi hai , naina ghar pe nhi thi isliye ,

Aur nashe ki wajah se Sameer ke andar ka shayar Nikal rha hai ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjaanMishra

Nice story , ab ending hume sochni hai toh kuch acha sochte Hain


Ye Sameer naina ki beti hai , aur Naina Delhi gyi hai , rohan ki dadi mar gyi unki funeral Mai ๐Ÿ˜†



Aur ye shayri Sameer isliye bol rha hai , kyun ki usne bahot daru pee rkhi hai , naina ghar pe nhi thi isliye ,

Aur nashe ki wajah se Sameer ke andar ka shayar Nikal rha hai ๐Ÿ˜†

I think this is the perfect explanation of this story.
Baat khatm ab mjhe aage post karne ki jarurat ji nhi hai.
Dadi mar gayi ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Ab bas wo munna pandit ki photo ka seen aur clear kar do baki story perfect hai ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 6 years ago
One word
Awesome ๐Ÿ˜Š

Three words
Waiting for next

Keep smiling
Labhya๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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