Samaina : os series (part 4 os updated on page 15) - Page 5

Originally posted by: Vidhimehra

Pls uodaye new part...tragic end mat dena sanyasi ko deatb mat dena pls.story is different bt still want samaina in end.

Originally posted by: sadhikasamaina

I felt really emotional reading it

but one thing is for sure

I can never see Naina with someone else

And I don't know why but I really did not feel good here that she got married

here one guy leaves everything for her

but she still considers her family important

this much practicality I am really hurt

Originally posted by: munchkinland

a very beautiful update

but really waiting to see how will the story move forward if she is married and all

continue soon

There are not much response on my story. May be coz mere writing skill utne ache nhi honge. But still mai story update kar raha hoo jab tak ek like bi aata rahega 😊
Thanks once again and enjoy your story

Recap :
Munna : mai sirf itna batane aaya hoo ki...Jab tu apni zindagi me practical hoke aage bhad rahi thi na to me aur pandit lage the pagalo ki tarh ek kaam me.
Tu bhale hi hmare dost ko chod de aur life me aage badh jaye par mere aur pandit ke lie samay ab bi whi hai.
Kyunki hm ehsaan faramosh nhi hai.

Naina : kya kehna chahta hai munna saaf saaf bata.
Munna : sameer ka pata chal gaya hai.
Naina : KYA...kha hai wo ?
Munna( with heavy voice) : khud aakar dekh liyo...

With that munna tells naina the address where she can find sameer...

Munna : tere waha aane ki mujhe wse ummind to nhi hai. Kyunki tu ab wo simple naina kha rahi, tu to ab naina the businesswoman ban chuki hai.
Mai aur pandit bi tujhe whi milenge aana ho to aa jaio...

After that munna left the place...

Sharad : tum usse kyu milna chahti ho.
Naina : me usse milkar ye(papers of his property) sb wapis karna chahti hoo, kyunki ye sb uska hai. Aur maafi bi mangna chahti hoo.
Sharad : par agar usne tumhe maaf nhi kiya to kya tum ye shadi tod dogi.
Naina : nahi sharad ji sameer mujhe maaf kare ya na kare isse koi fark nhi padta par me ye shadi kabhi nhi todungi...

Narrator : Sharad gaadi start karta hai. Aur nikal padta hai us safar par jo naina ke lie bhut kathin hone wala tha. Saal bhar ke baad wo usse milne wali thi. Par milne se jyada ghabrahat use is baat ki thi, ki wo sameer se nazre kaise mila payegi. Kyunki sameer ka pyar sacha tha usne apna har ek wada nibhaya tha, pyar ki har ek kasauti par khara utra tha wo, par naina ke lie aisa keh pana mushkil tha...

Location : government hospital, jamnagar

Us government hospital ko dekh ke to mano naina ko saanp sung gya, tarh tarh ke daravane khayal uske man me aa rhe the, kya hua hoga aisa sameer ke sath ki wo yha hai, kaisa hoga uska haal
Aur in sabse uppar, kahi sameer tak pahuchne me jyada der to nhi ho gyi.

Naina us hospital me jane hi wali hoti hai ki use munna aur pandit nazar aate hai.

Munna : hospital me nhi uske samne dekh.

Naina ki nazar hospital ke samne road ke us par bane ek dhabe pe padti hai.
Aur wo mano chain ki saans leti hai.
Sabhi log dhabe ki tarf badhte hai. Aur sabse aage hoti hai naina.
Kab uske kadam tezi se us dhabe ki tarf bhadte hai use pata hi nhi chalta.
Wo bhagte hue us purane se dhabe me ghus jati hai aur har tarf sameer ki talash karti hai. Aur use whi din yaad aata hai jab sameer sanyas ke lie nikla tha aur wo use rok nahi payi thi...

Lekin is bar bi use sameer nhi milta. Dil ka bar bar tutna kya hota hai. ye us samay naina se behtar koi nhi bata sakta tha. Wo aansu bhari aankho se munna pandit ki aur dekhti hai.

Munna pandit bi sameer ko har tarf dhundte hai. Tabhi unki nazar dhabe ke side me lage ek tree par padhti hai. Aur unki nazare wahi tham jati hai.

Naina jiske aansu rukne ka naam nahi le rahe the wo bi us aur dekhti hai.
Aur jaise hi uski nazar us tarf padhti hai.
Mano sb kuch tham jata hai.

Kyunki unki aankho ke samne jo nazara tha jo kisi daravane sapne se kam nhi tha.

Us aur tha ek ladka. Aur wo koi aur nhi balki sameer tha. Pehle kuch seconds me to use pehchan pana bi mushkil tha.

Kyunki...

Jo sameer mehange aur stylish kapde pehnta tha aaj uski Jagha ek kurta tha jo na sirf ganda tha balki kai jagha se phata hua tha

Wo sameer jo kabhi khane ka shokeen hua karta tha aur sabko party diya karta tha aaj bhook ki wjh se uska weight aadha ho chuka tha

Jis sameer ke lambe kaale baal kabhi lehrate the aaj uski jagah dhool bhare balo ne le li thi.

Jis sameer ko uske nanu ne naazo se pala tha aaj uske hanth pairo pe na jane kitne jhakam the.

Jis sameer ko nange pair chalne ki aadat nhi thi aaj wo nange pair kankar wale road pe khada tha.

Uski wo aankhe jise dekhte hi naina usme kho gyi thi. Umne aaj sirf khalipan tha na dard na gussa bas ek khalipan...

Wo chehra jiski muskan se na jane kitni ladkiya kaayal ho jati thi. Aaj uski jagah ek lachari ek bebasi ne le li thi

Ye sb dekhte dekhte pata hi nahi chala ki kab sabki aankho se aansu behne lage. PVKM ka hero aur VjN ke heartthrob ka aisa haal hoga kisne socha tha.

Sach me it is not less than the death

Na jane kitne hi aansu bahane ke baad sabki nazar us aur padhti hai jis tarf sameer dekh rha tha.

Sameer dhabe par baithe ek aadmi ki aur dekh rha tha. Pehle kuch seconds kisi ko smjh nhi aata ki sameer us aur kyu dekh rha hai, aur jaise hi smjh aata hai. To sbka dil tutkar chur chur ho jata hai.
Mano kisi ne ek sath hazaro khanjar unke dil me ghusa diye ho... Sach me usse painful moments shayd hi unme se kisi ne dekha hoga.

Kyunki sameer us aadmi ko nhi balki uske samne rakhi plate ko dekh rha tha jisme kuch biscuits the.

Naina se aur bardasht nhi hota aur wo ghutno ke bal girke rone lagti hai.

Us aadmi ke jate hi sameer uski plate se me biscuits churane lagta hai, par dhabe ka malik ye dekh leta hai...

Aur wo sameer ko marne lagta hai. Aur markar bhaga deta hai.

Munna aur pandit se aur bardasht nhi hota aur wo us aadmi ko rokne ke liye aage badhte hai. Par sharad unhe rok leta hai.

Munna : oye kyu roka hame, koi hamare bhai ko mare. Mujhe ye bardasht nhi.
Sharad : gussa mat ho aur us tarf dekho..

And all of them look towards sameer

Sameer wo biscuits churata to hai par apne liye nhi balki ek chote se ladke ke lie jo shayad usi ki tarh besahara aur bhooka tha. Wo bachcha biscuits dekh kr bhut khush ho jata hai. Aur usko khush dekhar sameer ke chehre pe bi ek muskan aa jati hai. Wo muskaan jo shayad kahi kho gyi thi.

Aur fir sameer wha se chala jata hai. Ek purane si jhopdi ke pass Jaha uske hi jaise besahara aur beghar log baithe hote hai. Jinka koi apna nhi hota...

Old man : beta tum kyu Chintu ki baat sunte ho, tumhe pata hai na ki wo roz aisy zidd karta hai.
Sameer : ha pata hai...rahim chacha
Rahim chacha : par beta is chakkar me wo dhabe wala tumhe marne lagta hai mujhe bilkul acha nhi lagta.
Sameer : koi baat nhi chacha jab tk chintu khush hai me bi khush hoo...

Narrator : kehte hai ki aadmi apne paiso se nhi, balki dil se ameer hota hai. Aur ye baat hame us din samjh aayi.
Sameer apna sab kuch kho chuka tha, apna paisa, apne dost, apna pyar par nhi khoya tha to uska wo dil, jo hamesha sabki madad krne ke lie taiyar rehta tha.
Aaj ham sabke pass bhale hi sb kuch tha par fir bi hm sameer ke samne kuch bi nhi the...because he is truly a man with golden heart

Rahim chacha : beta aaj wo kavita nhi sunaoge...?
Sameer : chacha roz hi to sunata hoo
Rahim chaha : beta par man nhi bharta
Others : ha beta suna do na ??
Sameer: thik hai.

Note : guys this poem doesn't belong to me. This poem is written by the famous shayr Dr. Vishnu saxena. I don't have any right on this poem. But this is my favorite poem, so I want to share it with you. And trust me, not any other poem describe the situation better than this...

Mai wahi pe khada tumko mil jaunga

Mai wahi pe khada tumko mil jaunga

Jaoge jis jagah tum mujhe chodkar

Ashq(aansu) pi lunga aur Gam utha loonga me.

Teri yaado ko so jaunga odhkar...

Mai wahi pe khada tumko mil jaunga

Jaoge jis jagah tum mujhe chodkar

Jab bi barish ki boonde bhigoye tumhe.

Soch lena ki me ro raha hoo kahi.

Jab hi ho jao bechain ye janana,

Kholkar aankh me so rha hoo kahi(my death)

Mai wahi pe khada tumko mil jaunga

Jaoge jis jagah tum mujhe chodkar

Tut kar koi kaise bikharta yaha.

Dekh lena koi aaina(mirror) todkar.

Bhool pata nhi umar bhar dard jab,

Koi jata hai apne se muh mod kar...

Mai wahi pe khada tumko mil jaunga

Jaoge jis jagah tum mujhe chodkar

Everyone listen this poem and understand each and every word of it. Sameer beautifully describe his situation.

Main wahi pe khada tumko mil jaunga.
Jis jagah jaoge tum mujhe chodkar...

Ye sirf chand lines nhi thi, balki naina aur sameer ke rishte ki sachai bi thi.

Naina : munna me... Main nhi mila paoongi usse nazre ?
Munna : nahi naina aaj nhi. Aaj tujhe sameer ka samna karna hi hoga, manta hoo mushkil hoga par ye jaruri bi hai.

kisne socha tha ki wo sameer jisko dekhe bina naina nhi reh sakti aaj usse milne se daregi...

Naina takes slow steps towards sameer in hope that he will forgive her mistakes and accept what belongs to him.

Naina touches the shoulder of sameer very lightly. The touch was that light, that sameer didn't feel it.
And then with all the power in her. She calls his name.

Naina : sam.. sameer...

And then sameer turns towards her

Narrator : yu to naina aur sameer ki love story bilkul alag aur hat ke thi, par wo shayad unki love story ka sabse yaadgar lamha hone wala tha.
Hero aur heroine 1 saal ke baad mil rahe the. Situation bilkul filmy thi. Par filme bi to real zindagi pe hi banti hai na...

Sameer naina ki aur mudta hai aur mudta hi uske chehre ka rang ud jata hai. Kyunki uski naina sorry sirf naina uske samne khadi thi. Sameer ne kabhi sapne me bi ye nhi socha tha ki wo dobara naina se mil payega.
Par fir bi sameer sameer naina ko dekhte hi uski ankho me kho jaata hai bilkul usi tarh jis tarh wo log pehli bar takraye the, sameer jisne apne andar ke har ek jazbaat ko mar diya tha, uska dil aaj fir se dhadkane lagta hai, wo aag jo pichle ek saal se wo apne sine me leke ghum rha tha, wo mano aaj shant ho rahi thi.
Ek ajib si thandak ka ehsas ho rha tha use
Wo dono na jane kitni der tak ek dusre ke aankho me khoye rehte hai. Jaise ye koi sapna sa ho. Aur tabhi ye sapna tut jata hai.

Jab sameer ki nazar naina ke maang me lage sindoor aur uske mangal sutra par padti hai.

Hum aksar move on aur life me aage badhne ki baate katre hai. Aur kehte hai ki hme apne pyar ke lie kush hona chahie chahe wo jiske sath bi rahe, par yakin maniye agar apko bi aisa lagta hai na to shayad aapne kabhi pyar kiya hi nhi hai...

Kyunki hm kitna bi dikhawa kar le par jab aap apne pyar ko kisi aur ke sath dekhte hai na, to aisa lagta hai jaise kisi ne aapko jalte angaro pe bitha diya ho. Dil jalna kya hota hai, ye baat aapko tab samjh aati hai.

Sameer & naina (together) : kaise/sy ho ?

Sach me kuch chize kabhi nhi badalti...

Sameer : zinda hoo
Naina : zinda rehne ki koshish kar rahi hoo...

Aur dono khamosh ho jate hai. Kyunki jo baate shabdo se nhi kahi jati wo aankho se smjhi ja sakti hai.

Naina : sameer ... Wo.. tum apna sab kuch chod ke chale aaye the. mai whi tumko wapis karne aayi hoo.

Sameer : mujhe kuch nhi chahie !

Aur itna kehte hai waha se jane lagta hai. Kyunki wo shadi shuda naina ko aur nhi dekh pa rha tha, ek ek pal bitana use andar tak jala rha tha. Par use kaha pata tha ki ye to bas shuruat thi. Kyunki uske baad jo naina kehne wali thi wo sameer ke lie kisi agni pariksha se kam nhi tha.

Naina : sam...sameer please tumhe meri kasam.

And sameer stops in the middle. Kyunki uske lie aaj bi naina ki kasam sabse upar thi.

Naina : Wo tumhare property ke papers car mai hai, shar...sharad ji ke pass

Sameer (inner voice) : kyu ??? Kyu naina kya mujhe chod ke jana hi kafi nhi tha tumhare liye jo tum chahti ho ki me tumhare pati se milu. Kya itna dard kafi nhi tha jo aur dard dene aa gyi mujhe.
Par agar tum chahti ho na ki mai tumhari pati se milu to thik hai yhi sahi, tumhare liye ye ek aakhiri chot bi sahi,
Akhir khar mai bi us khushnaseeb ko dekh paunga jisko tum jaisy ladki mili hai.
Ha manta hoo uske baad shayad mera jee pana mushkil hoga par tumhare lie kuch bi...

Then sameer and naina goes towards the car...

Sameer look into the front seat. And there was sharad sitting on the driver seat.

Sharad : hello, aap sameer ho na ?
Sameer : ha !
Sharad : bhut suna hai aapke bare me.
Sameer : aur aap wo naina ke...
Sharad : ji ha sahi pehchana aapne, me naina ka... driver sharad.

Sameer confuse ho jata hai. Aur fir wo naina ki aur dekhta hai.

Sameer : naina ye sharad driver...
Naina : kyu sharad naam ke do log nhi ho skte kya ?
Sameer : par tumhara pati ?
Naina : wo piche baithe hai...

Aur fir sameer piche ki seats ki tarf dekhta hai. Aur jaise hi wo us aur dekta hai
"THE SANYASI DIES ON THE SPOT"

Continue...

That's it for now guys. Pata nhi kaisa laga hoga aapko ye padh ke, sach puchiye to me 100 % satisfy nhi tha. But still I post it. Tell me about your views and suggestions and please forgive my mistakes.
Have a nice day