One Step Up -Samaina chapter 3 (updated on page 4)

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@mystique123

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Posted: 6 years ago

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Asmita di...sorry for being late yet again

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Such a cute and lighthearted one 😃 You have evolved into a great writer Di. All your stories are full of life that I end up being so happy.

God Bless Mami and Poonam Bhabhi, the conversation for sure ignited the sparks in Sameer. This progression is what we all desire. Those simple hand touches erupting passion in them, though still innocent...they are in that stage where in realization of physical intimacy starts dawning on them. You have portrayed it so beautifully and am

And yeah guglupuchu and talks about kids, 😳

Loved it. 🤗

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Wow...this chapter is indeed a blessing. From handhold to Kiss to exploding of passion.😳 These kids have progressed a lot and am in love with the way you chose to pen it down. Simple yet so appealing. Loved it Di ⭐️

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Hug...am screaming and blushing at the same time. Awesome di, I sincerely hope CVs take cue from your story. Such a great write up. Beautiful because the strings of intimacy has pulled in Naina closer much closer to him and she also craves for him. (I wanna ignore Sunaina in this story, some how I could not put up with her). It is a treat to read because Naina has shed her apprehensions quite naturally without being concerned about the stigmas associated.

I am in love with their progression di and am glad to see how Sameer tends to erase all her insecurities.😃

Eager to read more and more from you di...Lots and Lots of Love and keep them coming 🤗

Edited by mystique123 - 6 years ago

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shravya rao

@shravyarao

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Posted: 6 years ago

#32

Hey Asmita, this was too good, loved the pace, also i loved that u dealt with naina's insecurities here, even it shd have been dealt in the show as well but all they did was say kahi saal baadh i hated that. So, thanks for bringing this up. The progression of intimacy was so good, Sameer's body going through the hormonal changes his age brings and for one thank god naina felt it too. I hope show mein bhi aisa hi ho. I want them to realise the physical side of things too isn't that a natural progression of a relation? And thanks man u showed it that its natural to kiss for naina theough pooja didi. She will think it's a natural course of action rather than something wrong. Great one Asmita ❤️

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